Shivi ki dosti- snippets, snippet-2 updated on pg 3 - Page 2

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Snippet-2

Shiva was back home after a long day.they had successfully paid back the loan and all the charges against them were proved to be fake.the family had decided to postpone dhara bhabis ivf till they had saved enough money.dev had taken a part time job that paid him pretty well, he was an mba topper after all.gombi took care of the store.he had taken up the job to look after his friends store,he sometimes drove his taxi also to earn some extra cash as he also owned a small scale transport company.he was tired nowadays due to so much workload.he worked at pandya store in the day despite Gombi telling him not to.he knew he was needed for the work of lifting boris, organising the store, look after the orders, bring maal from the Mandi and many more.gombi and dev usually looked after the accounts and with the absence of Dev gombi couldn't manage all this alone.they had cut down all uneccesary expenses and we're trying to save as much as they can.today he kept rs10,000 in dhara bhabis hand.his first income apart from pandya store.his bhabi had tears in her eyes.she was proud, so was someone else who looked at him teary eyed.dev came and handed a cheque of rs50,000.

" 10,000? 10,000 se kya hoga shiva? Aise to 15 lakh jodte jodte barso lag jayenge " rishita smirked.

" Pai pai jodkar hi samandar banta hai rishita " raavi retorted back before dhara could defend shiva.

For the first time shiva felt helpless.he went to the room and sat on the bed.no matter how hard he worked but he could only earn upto a certain limit.he couldn't do anything when his bhabi needed him, his family needed him.he sighed.

" Shivaa" he heard a soft whisper

His eyes lifted to see her standing there with a soft smile.

" Chipkali, mujhe neend aa rahi hai.sar dard se phata jaa raha hai.sone de " he said and pretended to sleep so that she couldn't see his misty eyes.

" Sar dard sone se thik ho jayega? Gadheda.uth " she said and brought a bottle of oil.

She held shivas hand and made him sit on the ground while she softly massaged his head. he felt relaxed.a sense of peace overcame him.her hands had magic.

" Shiva " she said softly

" Hmm" he said with his eyes closed.

" Aaj mai bahut khush hu.hamesha dhara di tere hatho mai paise deti hai.aaj pehli baar tune unki hatho mai paise diye " she said happily

His eyes snapped open and he looked at her surprised.

" Aise kya dekh raha hai? " She asked

Shiva shook his head.

" Aisa bhi kya teer maar liya maine? Dus hazaar hi to kamaye hai" he said in a low tone

" Yeh kaisi baatein kar raha hai tu? Dus hazaar Kam hote hai kya? Pandya store bhi sambhala, dusri naukri bhi ki.koi choti baat hai kya?dekha nahi tune, dhara di kitni khush thi.kitna proud feel kar rahi thi " She said massaging his head softly again

" To isme kaun si badi baat hai? Mai unka baccha hu.bahut pyar karti hai woh mujhse mai kuch khass Karu ya na karu, unhe to mujhpar garv hoga hi " he said

" Mujhe bhi tujhpar garv hai shiva " raavi whispered

Seeing her dedication, hardwork and love for his family warmed her heart. Shiva was always like this, but she had failed to notice this when she was in her dreamworld.only after she got married to him, she started observing small small things about him.he was definitely the most hardworking among all the brothers.he was honest to his work.he respected all his relationships and gave his everything to bring a smile on the face of people he loved.she had started liking him long back, but now she was feeling proud of him.she respected him.

Shivas heart swelled when he heard these words from her mouth.had someone told him a few months back that raavi will say these words to him ,he would have laughed it off.he smiled feeling much better already.

Raavi went to her wadrobe and took out a box and gave it to shiva.

" Yeh kya hai? " He asked

" Kholke to dekh " she said

Shiva opened it to find a pair of shoes.

" Tere chappal ghis gaye the, tu apne liye to kuch lega nahi.to mai hi le aayi.pehenke dekh size sahi hai ki nahi " she said

She had noticed in the past month that shiva did not spend anything on himself.he was trying to save as much money as possible.

" Tune notice Kiya " shiva said in a soft voice

" Of course notice Kiya gadhede.ab pehen bhi ' she said being impatient

Shiva wore the shoes and it fitted him perfectly and looked good too.

"Par raavi, yeh to branded joote hai.bahut mehenge honge.tere paas paise kahaan se aaye?" He asked

" Maine apna piggy bank tod diya " she said

Raavi had a piggy bank from childhood in which she put all the money she got from relatives and her pocket money.

Shiva held her hands and pulled her closer holding her waist.

" Mere liye? Kyu? " He asked looking at her eyes.

" Woh..dost to ek dusre ko gifts dete hai na " she said looking here and there.his proximity was affecting her.

Shiva let her go with a smile and nodded his head.he wondered for how many friends this gadhedi had broken her piggy bank, but it was fun.he wanted to see how far his chipkali will take the friendship game.it was fun to play along.

They slept on the bed.shiva immediately felt asleep due to the tiredness.sleep was far from raavi's eyes.she had seen the dissapointment on his face when rishita taunted him.

Shiva apna har kaam itni shiddat aur imaandari se karta hai.aisa ho hi nahi sakta ki usne Jaanbujhkar padhayi puri nahi ki.us din woh ladki bhi bol rahi thi shiva padhayi mai accha tha.mujhe pata lagana hoga ki itne saal pehle hua kya tha.

Raavi thought determined to find out the truth and slowly sleep overtook her.

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Pixie🤗! Loved it❤️! And Raavi really, truly deserves this. Someone she can talk top without worrying about the consequences of it. Someone with whom she can share the multiple parts of her life uninhibited...

Looking forward to more in this series. Also, do you have an index or anything of that sort? I wanted to reread a couple of your older stories... 😳

Thank you Sathya ❣️

I don't have an index 😅

I have to search what I wrote myself 😂

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Thank you Sathya ❣️

I don't have an index 😅

I have to search what I wrote myself 😂

Oh! I'll just search around for it, then... 😆

Loved the second snippet, Pixie❤️! It was so soft, yet gave us a powerful message. He worked so hard for that money, and Rishita taunted him for it nite that her nalla husband is working too. What about when Shiva was brokering those truck deals while Dev was sitting in the haveli with nothing but an accounts book for a business that was running part timer back then?

Loved how Raavi let him know of her pride in him, something that Shiva needed to hear from someone other than Dhara or his mother. And loved that she remembered that his education is still incomplete and connected it to what Rakhi said... I think we all know, our atleast hope we do, what the next drabble is going to be about. ❤️

I love shivi🥰🥰 please continue this amazing book🤩

it's so cute😘😘loved it

It's beautiful

Loved their conversation

Awww Raavi broke her piggybank for Shiva shoes even noticed his needs

This is what gradual growth means👍🏼

I am actually dreading for this type of scene in show

Let's see how will Raavi react after knowing the reason of Shiva's uneducation😊

Waiting for next one😳

Pixie😃 yet another gem of a snippet from you.

Rishita belittling Shiva's earnings and Raavi supporting him and the fact she was proud of him for working hard and earning extra money besides working in Pandya Store❤️

Raavi bought a new pair of shoes for Shiva with her own money that too by breaking her piggy bank❤️ If this is not love, then I don't know what is and Raavi calls this friendship

Finally Raavi's determination to find out why Shiva dropped out of school and how she can help him👍🏼

Keep the snippets coming in as I enjoy reading them❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Loved the second snippet, Pixie❤️! It was so soft, yet gave us a powerful message. He worked so hard for that money, and Rishita taunted him for it nite that her nalla husband is working too. What about when Shiva was brokering those truck deals while Dev was sitting in the haveli with nothing but an accounts book for a business that was running part timer back then?

Loved how Raavi let him know of her pride in him, something that Shiva needed to hear from someone other than Dhara or his mother. And loved that she remembered that his education is still incomplete and connected it to what Rakhi said... I think we all know, our atleast hope we do, what the next drabble is going to be about. ❤️

Thank you so much Sathya ❤️

Shiva is definitely hardworking, and I want raavi to take pride in that.this is my khayali duniya where I will pour my heart out about things we may not get on the show 😆

I am not sure if I will leave them as incomplete snippets or write as a continuation.lets see, I will write about whatever inspiration that strikes me anytime 😆