Shivi ki dosti- snippets, snippet-2 updated on pg 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Since shivi have moved on to a new phase of their relationship, this is how I would love it to be explored.so pouring all my khayali pulao here.do tell me how you like it folks ❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shivi ki dosti- snippet 1-

Raavi had a small Tiff with her maasima and she is sitting sadly in her room. Shiva comes shouting

"Ae chipkali..."

Raavi quickly wipes her tear and puts a smile on her face.isnt she always like this? Flashing her toothy smile in front of the world and crying silently in the loneliness of her room.

Shiva caught her wiping her tears.he wondered what happened.they were cordial to each other now, but sometimes awkward too.because he really didn't know how to be friends with his maamikibehenkibeti.

He went and sat besides her folding the clothes and arranging them.

"Kya hua? " He asked

" Kuch nahi " she said

" Apne bachpan ke dushman ko nahi bata sakti, apne pati ko bhi nahi bata sakti.par apne dost ko to bata hi sakti hai " he said

Raavi was amazed at the softness of his voice

Did he really want to listen? Heart to heart talks have never been their thing.they would fight with each other, pull each others legs, be there for each other but that's about it.

" Aise ankhein phaadke kya dekh rahi hai gadhedi? Tune hi to bola tha tujhe mujhe apna dost banana hai " he said, his voice the usual this time.

Raavi smiled.her bhootnath was back.

" Woh maasi ka phone aaya tha.unhe lagta hai Ki mai unse pyar nahi karti.unhone mujhe paala posa bada kiya aur mai unki kadar nahi karti.sirf pandya parivaar ki kadar hai mujhe. Aisa nahi hai shiva. Mai unse bahut pyaar karti hu.tu to jaanta hai..." She stopped to look at him.what is she doing? Will shiva be even interested to listen to her talk about his maami.he hater her.she sighed.

" Jaane de " she said

Shiva put his hand on top of hers softly.

" Bol.mai sun raha hu " he said with his eyes fixated on her.

Raavi was happy.she had someone to talk to, someone with whom she can share her feelings uninhibited.her husband.no.her friend.whatever.she just needs to be with him and talk to him about everything under the sun.

Raavi continued and he listened patiently.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Index

Snippet-1- pg 1

Snippet-2- pg 3

Edited by Pixiepadhi - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was a Great treat to read.......... 😘🥰😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pixie🤗! Loved it❤️! And Raavi really, truly deserves this. Someone she can talk top without worrying about the consequences of it. Someone with whom she can share the multiple parts of her life uninhibited...

Looking forward to more in this series. Also, do you have an index or anything of that sort? I wanted to reread a couple of your older stories... 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Priyanka 🤗 you wrote a snippet out of the whole dosti thing❤️

We have been asking for a meaningful conversation since June 2nd episode# 111, that was the last time they both talked Shiva and his clothes. It has been more than 6 months since we got a meaningful conversation just on them😕

Hope this new friendship leads to some more progress in their relationship, like noght time conversation everyday before going to bed🤞

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loved it🤗

Let's see with the spice of friendship how their relationship proceeds

Although I hate this friend thing between husband and wife

But in case of Shivi it's much required the communication gap they have can be filled with comfort and little mixture of friends👍🏼

Will love to read your take let's see Shiva's reaction for Raavi's maasi not his maami waiting for next one

Edited by Khoobsurat123 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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sooo cute😘😘 loved it😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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If you’re having an index pls share it🥰💗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pixie 🤗

I'm glad to be reading something you wrote after long


This was such a cute drabble! Shiva listening to Raavi like a true friend and offering his support even though he hates Maami was lovely❤️


I want to see such nice dosti waale moments between ShiVi on the show too.. I hope we get at least one scene before Chaubeys' short term memory loss kicks in 😆

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