Our tangled star strings, From you to me (FF on hiatus) - Page 2

I really loved it ❤️

Raavi taking Shiva's name and he being thoughtful

Just amazing start 😍

If possible do tag me from next time ❤️

written so well loved it👏

very interesting👌👌👌

looking ahead for futher

Beautifully written Waiting for the next part ❤️

This was breathtaking!

Poetic and beautiful. ❤️

I specifically loved the dream sequence. It was a dream right?

Anyway...it was all very emotional. Truly lovely.

I have always wanted a detailed scene of Raavi asking Shiva why did he save her am I gonna get it in the next one or itis done?

Loved it very much.

Can't wait for the next one.

IF is SARDARD. Ask me, Copy and paste does not go well in the new website structure. It was easy peesyyy years ago, oh what a pain it is now. You'll only know if you have been through the torture. lol. 🤪

It was amazing.

Love it can't wait for the next update

A few that I missed....

nice one, feels nostallgic with all the scenes being played at the back of my mind

waiting for story to be explored!

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Woww Sathya. Just wow ❤️

Loved the beginning. I could see the scenes play out in front of my eyes. The way you connected the colours to the scenes. Thats some deep writing 👏

I loved how you started from the scene where shiva saves her. That's where the shivi story actually begins in a new way.he saved her,he was worried for her, she woke up and took out all her her frustration on him.shivi in their own universe away from the world ❣️

And that made dhara do what she did. She could see what others could not. i can see this is going to be an amazing story about shivi which we never got on the show. Can't wait.thank you so much for writing this 🤗

Pixie🤗!!! Thank you❤️!!!! The idea for the dream was to make it seem chaotic and pull scenes that seemed random but gave you a story into it, because that's what our minds do, don't they? So I'm glad you loved it! 😳

Yes, that is where their story started, but they've had a world of their own even before that. As for Dhara, Pixie, then I just feel like the fact that her devar was a good man simply couldn't be the sole factor for her thinking they could be a good couple, right? Any sane human wouldn't haver made such a drastic decision without having seen some sort of compatibility, and Dhara was the one to see them finish all the rasams together, a very under utilised fact!!!!!

Originally posted by: Scribble19

Sathya, this was amazing 😊

The way you have explained why Dhara wanted Ravi and Shiva to marry, it was a refreshing change- you did not show that she did it only to save the family izzat and Raavi’s life but also she saw a connection between them (please correct me if I am wrong)…

Would love to see how you interpret the future scenes…

Also, tag me if possible in the future updates.

Ps. I loved the analogy of Alice in Wonderland..that was so creative and cute 😊

Sanchi! You're absolutely right! Dhara, or any non fictional human being couldn't have made that decision without seeing compatibility. And there's so much of it in that one scene! With Raavi breaking down, and Shiva being her rock, her anchor.

Glad you loved ther little Alice in Wonderland part, it was an improptu that just fit things so well so I let it be...

Originally posted by: Palak2812

I really loved it ❤️

Raavi taking Shiva's name and he being thoughtful

Just amazing start 😍

If possible do tag me from next time ❤️

Thank you Palak. Shiva, although he didn't express, thought so deeply at the start of the show, and that's something that I want to really maintain. And the name thing, it was my 2 cents for the man who stood for her against his brother without wavering right from the start... ❤️