Our tangled star strings, From you to me (FF on hiatus) - Page 3

Originally posted by: virangna2005

written so well loved it👏

very interesting👌👌👌

looking ahead for futher

Thank you Virangna! Glad you loved it! ❤️

🤩 🤩This is breathtakingly beautifully👏, amazingly written.

I loved each bit of it.........

Everything was explained so so beautifully..........

And i request please keep this in perspective of ShiVi only.........

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

This was breathtaking!

Poetic and beautiful. ❤️

I specifically loved the dream sequence. It was a dream right?

Anyway...it was all very emotional. Truly lovely.

I have always wanted a detailed scene of Raavi asking Shiva why did he save her am I gonna get it in the next one or itis done?

Loved it very much.

Can't wait for the next one.

IF is SARDARD. Ask me, Copy and paste does not go well in the new website structure. It was easy peesyyy years ago, oh what a pain it is now. You'll only know if you have been through the torture. lol. 🤪

Ritu❤️!!! I know, right? Because I'm a very moody writer, I tend to just have IF open on a tab in my phone, write and save as a draft whenever I want to kind of thing, so I've never had to copy paste like this before. I am now never repeating this horrible, horrible endeavour again!

I'm glad you loved this, and, yes it was a dream😆!!! I don't think you'll get a detailed version of that scene, though. Maybe in a flash back or something? I never planned it, so I'm not sure.... 😒

Originally posted by: Iktara22

nice one, feels nostallgic with all the scenes being played at the back of my mind

waiting for story to be explored!

Thank you Janki, and I'm glad you want to read more of it.... ❤️

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I loved each bit of it.........

Everything was explained so so beautifully..........

And i request please keep this in perspective of ShiVi only.........

Glad you loved it! And dont worry, the major perspective will be only Shiva and Raavi's. It's only small POVs like the Dhara one in the first chapter that I'm talking about..... 😆

That's beautiful. How you showcased their journey through the colours. Brilliant 👏👏Loved it. Plz continue

This was amazing.

Don't know how to give long comments

But this was definitely breathtaking.

Waiting for the next part.😃

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Pixie🤗!!! Thank you❤️!!!! The idea for the dream was to make it seem chaotic and pull scenes that seemed random but gave you a story into it, because that's what our minds do, don't they? So I'm glad you loved it! 😳

Yes, that is where their story started, but they've had a world of their own even before that. As for Dhara, Pixie, then I just feel like the fact that her devar was a good man simply couldn't be the sole factor for her thinking they could be a good couple, right? Any sane human wouldn't haver made such a drastic decision without having seen some sort of compatibility, and Dhara was the one to see them finish all the rasams together, a very under utilised fact!!!!!

That's a very intersting observation Sathya.

I also feel that dhara did not ask shiva to marry raavi just to save the family's izzat. It was more than that.she definitely had seen something that made her believe that shiva is the only one who could handle her now.

Sathya, meri dil lelo🤗❤️ This was such a beautiful update.❤️ I have never watched the wedding track, yes you have told me to watch it 2 times and I still haven't done that😆 but reading this surely makes me wanna watch it. I hope it is as beautiful as this.It was a beautiful update but the heart wants more.😳I feel really bad for Raavi and I really hope she gets all the love. 🤗

I really hope to see more of Raavi's perspective. I want her to achieve all her dreams and get all the happiness and I want to see her efforts too. In the show, she is sidelined and just kinda used as a Shiva's prop.Ya know, she tells in the Dishu track she wants to be independent and saysmarriage is not the only thing in a girl's life and I agree but haven't really seen any efforts from her.😆 I know Raavi has the potential and I want her to stand on her own feet.

Waiting for the next update👍🏼