ShiVi TS: Humraah - [Part 3 - Pg 9|12/01/22|Complete] - Page 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Domestic, playful, teasing ShiVi have my whole heart!! Aur softie Pandya ka tho kya hi kehna.. Hayeeeeee!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it❤️

Loved it

Loveddd itttt🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shyna, read both the parts in one go ❤️

Shiva is back to their room and Raavi’s dream 😆

Their nok-jhok, nothing will ever change between them😆

Him drinking zyaada shakkar waali chai, her staying up and waiting for him to come back from the store

Raavi, ghar ki rakh waali kar rahi thi?😆

Can’t wait to read for the next update❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Raavi is the cutest😆❤️

Love the teasing between them

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Great start Shyna! ❤️ I’m glad you decided to flesh this out instead of writing a single paragraph (why would you even think of doing that )


I loved how Raavi finally called Shiva back to their room after their typical banter. Raavi as usual giving Dobi excuses to Shiva and he catching her 😆


My fav was the parallel here! Raavi didn’t want “ek ladki and ek ladki” to be alone in the room earlier, and now she doesn’t want “ek ladki” (herself) to be in the room alone (mujhe yeh show mein dekhna hai Chaubey 🤡)


Shiva’s concern for Raavi is always beautiful.. and I loved the end where he decided to give his all for the marriage ❤️


Continue soon!!


Thank youuu 🥺💖

Now that you've pointed it out, I didn't even realize I had subconsciously inserted a parallel to that ek ladka/ek ladki scene 😅

Hehe glad you enjoyed! Next part is up!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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💕💕🥰Fabulous update, can’t wait to read what Raavi has plan for Shiva 🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon


Thank youuu 🥺💖

Now that you've pointed it out, I didn't even realize I had subconsciously inserted a parallel to that ek ladka/ek ladki scene 😅

Hehe glad you enjoyed! Next part is up!


hehe.. we are parallel lovers always.. after all the ShiVi FD finds parallels in Shiva-Maami scenes too 🤣

will comment on the second one in a minute!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awww.. second part was super cute!

Raavi had a wet dream about her hot husband 😉.. yeh toh FFs mein hi milega! Chaubey toh is hell bent on showing her worried about parivaar all the time 🤡

SheChu Raavi doing ghar ki rakhwaali 🤣

Raavi giving Shiva extra cheeni wali chai and she drinking it all.. I wonder what these two come up with next in their kiddish challenges to each other 😆

Also, me to Raavi: apne dream ko reality mein convert kar le behen, tax nahi lagega, sachi!! 😈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I literally pulled my hair when it stopped. Sach mein. Why'd you stop? 😔


Dream zara Vistaar se likhna tha na Yaaaarrr...I wanna find out. 😈

I wanna know what you saw baby girl.

She's baiting him and he's not falling for it. Ahhh...what freshness.

Wouldn't have minded a cheek kiss. He backed out fast.

Sed about it.

What did she do with his food?

Imma very excited.

When can I get the next part?

Heeeellllluuuu We need it phast okieee?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Blisyyyyy!! Domestic ShiVi and bantering ShiVi and awkward ShiVi and newly in love ShiVi sab ek sath padh k I’m so f*cking happy!! I loved this update! I hope Raavi ka dream becomes reality soon though! Also I love how it’s following Raavi POV. My cutest lil bean deserves the world and I hope she gets it soon! Waiting for update!💕

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