ShiVi OS: One Step Forward - Page 6

Wow...sweet and cute romance👏 It seems like after ages read your story 😊

I misssed your storiessss! ❤️

This was so cute. Shivi conversation 💯

and awwh the little sppon moment they are so cute, this Raavi is ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Ashu!!! I've missed your stories, and you, on the forum...🤗

Loved this OS. Finally their sanskaari, strictly no action, bed gets to see cuddling at the very least🥳. And the haq with which they were making that list of demands to each other? Come make a human out of the molten puddle I've become on my hostel floor, will you?

Loved that Shiva sees the comfort of being the little spoon, because I straight out refuse to be the big spoon with anyone I'm comfortable enough to actually cuddle with for the same reason... 🤣

hi jaan 🤗

I have missed being on the forum hopefully will be more active

I hate being the little spoon LOL, I need control over my body and I love flailing my limbs over others 🤣

thank you so much for reading and commenting jaan 🤗

Originally posted by: Anon21

Can there be a next part? Pretty please?

if I am able to think of a second part I will for sure write one, for now I have zero ideas 😆

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

This was such a wonderful update, love.🤗❤️ I enjoyed it very much, Mrs Dhillon.😆

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗

ahh it feels good to hear that name

Originally posted by: sapphir

Thanks for the tag😍😍

Vese toh 1 hr me u already have 4 pages of compliments 🙈 ,mei jo bolungi vo repeat he hoga sabka😅

But I really fell (like fell down- kindof fell)

For the promises that they made to each other💖💖

N the way that they stop- is on Baingan🤭🤭

The way Raavi (ur raavi ☺️) makes him earn his 'rights' , like she's firm abt wt she wants.... Didn't just give in or smthng....

But at the same time doesn't shy away from claiming what is rightfully hers👏

Also, Shiva ka confession, was heart touching 🥺. Not that it justified his actions, just said it out in a way that would kindof make sense😌

So....🙈🤭when Is the next update

I'm waiting, this was Fab!

🤣🤣

baingan because raavi is the only one who can make him eat it and he'll happily do so

raavi really said I'll torture him but I won't let myself be tortured 😆

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗 your lamba comment means a lot

ab next update in another two months 🤣

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Love it

It was great

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗

Originally posted by: Jia21

Beautiful ❤️

Thanks for the tag ☺️

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Compete nahi kar rahi, it's my khusiii after reading your work after soo long 😂😂

You said whats on my mind aashu, I am also loving the cutesy moments but they they need to talk about the elephant in the room.I am also trying to understand shiva because it's so much better to watch shivi if you connect with both of them.

And this again became long, now I stop spamming your thread 😂😂

pixu yaar ab toh bhabhima ka track shuru 😭 who knows when we'll get a conversation

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

This is so refreshing and fun to read in its own unique way🌺

Really miss your work

So glad that you chose to write something ❤️

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗

hopefully I'll update something soon ❤️