ShiVi OS: One Step Forward - Page 5

This is so beautiful . Their conversation ❤❤❤

shechu dono ke dono

loved the conversation....it was long overdue

the pent-up emotions came out...MUs sorted and genuine concerns and feelings shared

nothing can be better than this....❤️

PERFECTION AS ALWAYSSSS!!!!

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LOVED! LOVED! LOVED IT!!!!

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I sooooo lovvveddd This os..

Hey thanks for tagging me!!!!
really good story, their raw emotions and discussing n putting forth everything they’ve felt and expect from each other with so much honesty!
Really well done 😊
Haven’t been watching the show much, so not much idea abt the current tracks, but hope that when they patch up they are this upfront and honest with one another!!

Happy thanksgiving 🎉😊

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Haaayyyeeee Roka kyun?

Kitna Acha jaa raha tha ☺️

She swatting his hands away is something 90% of us want because we want to punish him but show mein tho Raavi iss kadar Lattu hui hai na... 😆

Anyway this was lovely! Every bit.

The end was cute and the conversation meaningful. ❤️

Write more.

well given today's episode, it looks like raavi will be waiting for shiva to make the first move now 😆

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗

will for sure write more if any ideas strike 😳

Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui

Inny's Reswa

unres bhi kardena 😆

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Ashuuuu you’ve no idea how much I loved this!! Their last bit of conversation where they were sort of setting out their expectations from the other was the best! Also the apology from both side and the way it was expressed has me sobbing! And of course. Bina tashan k yeh kaha baat kar paate hain! Loved the challenge! If you ever write second part to this do tag me! Just tag me in any and every of your upcoming updates!!😍😍❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥😭😭

thank you so much meri jaan for reading and commenting my jaan 🤗

I hope I was able to add the shivi tadka in 😆 I don't plan on continuing but I will definitely tag you in my other stories!!

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Proud of u always

This was a beautiful story

Balanced n showing both the POVs instead of one

Showing both their faults instead of one

Amazingly written🌸

Keep it up gudiya🖤

thank you so much momzi 🤗

I'm really glad you liked the story you know how much I value your opinion ❤️

Jaanu meri Jaan!!!!

You are so good at writing!! Mujhe aur chahiye (Always!!)

The awkwardness right at the start is so cute! They've both been avoiding one another and almost in sync they decide not to..And then comes the undertones of desire, to be closer and he even succeeds to a certain extent till she puts him in place (Hello savage Raavi, so nice to see you!!) I love little Shechu Raavi who thinks she is a sherni (well thodi si...but she is also chuimui so...)

Also foreshadowing now are we jaanu?? Raavi wanting to know Shiva's dil ki baat??

She is so right though, she talks a lot, always foot in her mouth and he doesn't say anything. Her deep words of talking things through, so they aren't making the same mistakes twice are words that are possibly in every single relationship bible (are there any?) Their conversation that follows is so deep, it was all questions we've all had at some stage about them, what would be spoken about in an everyday marriage. We see Shiva's insecurities, but we also see Raavi's. he hated himself for not being the man she wanted and when he changed, he hated the man he had become losing himself (haaye your words...dil karta hai padh te hi rahu!!)

And then their promises to each other...And how they're going to deal with the rest of the family was just a big awww moment!!! And it flowed so seamlessly from one to the other, like all their other interactions do..stuck on the same point but going around in circles 😆.

She wants PDA (hhhaaaw kitni bold hai yeh Raavi!! I love it..lekin i wish woh hi kare sab ke samne...not the sharmili Raavi we saw before the fight on screen who didn't know how she felt) And then pushing him away to earn his right to hold her and sleep and then (Shechu?) is back...spooning Shiva (bechara small spoon ban gaya!! glad at least he liked it..Although I always see him being big spoon kyunki overprotective teddy jaisa dikhta hai Raavi ke samne)

Jaaanu dont only look at the comment. The feels I have for this OS are soo big, I dont think I can fully express in words!! Aur likha kar!!!

LOVE YOU!!!