ShiVi OS: One Step Forward - Page 3

Proud of u always

This was a beautiful story

Balanced n showing both the POVs instead of one

Showing both their faults instead of one

Amazingly written🌸

Keep it up gudiya🖤

Ashu!!! I've missed your stories, and you, on the forum...🤗

Loved this OS. Finally their sanskaari, strictly no action, bed gets to see cuddling at the very least🥳. And the haq with which they were making that list of demands to each other? Come make a human out of the molten puddle I've become on my hostel floor, will you?

Loved that Shiva sees the comfort of being the little spoon, because I straight out refuse to be the big spoon with anyone I'm comfortable enough to actually cuddle with for the same reason... 🤣

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

jaan 🤗

I know it's been about two months, can you believe it? 😆

I want raavi and shiva to tease each other endlessly 🤣 I want them to both trying one upping each other in flirting and wooing 😆

thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

oh yes!! They should☺️

Can there be a next part? Pretty please?

Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

Hayyyeee

Mera dil ab Gudgudi kar raha hai

This was soo cute jaan

Write more and thanks for the tag 🤗

I loved the way they both spoke and demanded things ❤️

Would be more than overjoyed to see PDA wala shiva

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗

I feel like at some point in life you have to have that conversation with your partner about what you want and I'm hoping ShiVi are at that stage now

I want lots of PDA wala shiva ☺️ but abhi toh Raavi is taking the lead

Jaaanu... I am finally here... I waited for the longest time and then had to drive home from work....detailed comment later as always, but know that I love this and you and I'm soo glad you're writing again!!! 😍😍😍

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Jaaanu... I am finally here... I waited for the longest time and then had to drive home from work....detailed comment later as always, but know that I love this and you and I'm soo glad you're writing again!!! 😍😍😍

And it's not letting me tag 😔😔

This was such a wonderful update, love.🤗❤️ I enjoyed it very much, Mrs Dhillon.😆

Thanks for the tag😍😍

Vese toh 1 hr me u already have 4 pages of compliments 🙈 ,mei jo bolungi vo repeat he hoga sabka😅

But I really fell (like fell down- kindof fell)

For the promises that they made to each other💖💖

N the way that they stop- is on Baingan🤭🤭

The way Raavi (ur raavi ☺️) makes him earn his 'rights' , like she's firm abt wt she wants.... Didn't just give in or smthng....

But at the same time doesn't shy away from claiming what is rightfully hers👏

Also, Shiva ka confession, was heart touching 🥺. Not that it justified his actions, just said it out in a way that would kindof make sense😌

So....🙈🤭when Is the next update

I'm waiting, this was Fab!

🤣🤣

Beautiful ❤️

Thanks for the tag ☺️