ShiVi OS: One Step Forward - Page 2

It was really great........loved it....... Will you continue it😘🥰

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Yessss❤️

Aaatiii rehna iss week, I will tag you daily subah and pester you 😂😂

Episodes are soo good tooo 😍😍

episodes ne toh dil ko itna khush kardia hai

I haven't felt this giddy in such a long time

I'm back to watching the episodes more than once

Originally posted by: Kfof

This was awesome❤💚

Their conversation what they felt, how they want and what they from each other and their romance😍😍

Their challenge - perfect ❤❤

thank you so much meri jaan 🤗

your comment means a lot, I appreciate you ❤️

Hayyyeee

Mera dil ab Gudgudi kar raha hai

This was soo cute jaan

Write more and thanks for the tag 🤗

I loved the way they both spoke and demanded things ❤️

Would be more than overjoyed to see PDA wala shiva

Haaayyyeeee Roka kyun?

Kitna Acha jaa raha tha ☺️

She swatting his hands away is something 90% of us want because we want to punish him but show mein tho Raavi iss kadar Lattu hui hai na... 😆

Anyway this was lovely! Every bit.

The end was cute and the conversation meaningful. ❤️

Write more.

Originally posted by: Foxii

After so long, something from you

This was cutee

Loved Raavi 1.0

Ab bhugat she said🤣

jaan 🤗

I know it's been about two months, can you believe it? 😆

I want raavi and shiva to tease each other endlessly 🤣 I want them to both trying one upping each other in flirting and wooing 😆

thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Aashuuu ❤️

You are back and how

First of all, wowww!

This is what the gadhedas need. A heartfelt conversation. The despair in raavi's voice.A perfect piece. Shiva voicing out his insecurities and raavi patiently listening.

Each and every dlg was bang on.you don't need to worry about the Hindi as it was perfect.i know I will read this 2-3 times more.

Raavi wants her aag boy back and we do too.

I love how you brought the respecting each other and Suman's namecalling bit.

The way she said that she needs public acknowledgement and respect before they move forward and lastly

Mai tujhe pakad sakti hu par tu mujhe nahi 😂😂

How adorable is she?

I admit my heart is raavi biased but this was a balanced piece where Shiva's insecurities and deepest fear was highlighted along with raavi's hurt and I must say I felt for both of them.the part where he says that he feels despite changing his looks and hair he won't be good enough for her 💔

Shiva will bring the world To her feet once she bares her heart out, raavi will give him all her love once she knows the real reason why he pushed her away.a conversation is all they need.

Thank you so much for writing this aashu.❣️

We need a part 2 😉😉

itna lamba comment 😲 mujhse compete karne ki koshish karahi hai kya? 😆

I really love the cutesy moments we've been getting but I want a conversation so bad

if it's brushed under the rug now, it's bound to come up later and then more misunderstandings and angst

I am also someone who is more raavi biased, so I'm really glad that you thought it was balanced 😳 I've been trying to understand and relate to shiva more now

ab tu badtameezi math dekha, only one part okay 😆

thank you thank you so much meri jaan for such an amazing comment 🤗

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

here

dork 🤪

aap aap aaye toh bahar aaye 😉

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It was really great........loved it....... Will you continue it😘🥰

thank you so much jaan 🤗

I don't think I will 😆 it was hard enough for me to write this one 😳 but if I ever feel like there is an extension I can add, I will for sure!

Ashuuuu you’ve no idea how much I loved this!! Their last bit of conversation where they were sort of setting out their expectations from the other was the best! Also the apology from both side and the way it was expressed has me sobbing! And of course. Bina tashan k yeh kaha baat kar paate hain! Loved the challenge! If you ever write second part to this do tag me! Just tag me in any and every of your upcoming updates!!😍😍❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥😭😭