Shivi TS- Dor (Part 2 link updated on pg 11) - Page 6

You write so amazingly! Supernatural stories are so your thing. Please write so much more. Like a whole book and I will personally buy at least 20 copies. Your other story made me turn on the light because I got scared but I just HAD to read more. Who really needs sleep when you have coffee.

Another super interesting story Maahi!! Shiva saved Raavi by jumping into the river and they came to a strange location ❤️

I'm loving the drama and positive vibes.. this is my kind of drama..will the village elders force them to get married? 😆

Waiting for the next!!

Phast Phast update...yayyyyy🥳

Maahi this was so cute and adorable❤️

Raavi's realisation that Shiva is her Dor for life was so beautiful. The girl has my whole heart. I would love to know Shiva's side of story too. I am sure we will be getting to read more about their feelings for each other in the upcoming chapters. Me all exciteddd❤️

Waiting to know what happened to Raavi's health...what are her gifts to Shiva!!! Please give us the answers soonnnn❤️

💕🥰😍Very interesting story, totally intrigued…..can wait to read how Raavi falls for Shiva during the flashbacks🥰

My curiosity has reached several folds.............. Want to read more.....

Ayo pretty chapter!!!

update soonnnnnnnn

This was amazing😍❤

Loved it❤❤

Excited to read further❤💖

superb poem.......

m excited to read further........

preggy to nahi ho sakti.....i mean to expect kuch aur bhi hua hona chahiye......which i doubt had happened.......

oh boy this has taken a very different turn

Maahi di🤗!!! Your stories are very quickly becoming pre exam favorites😆! I like where this is going.... Jungle main mangal? The question is if Veerana had anything to do with it though, I think.

My favorite line,

"She was wearing a dark shawl around her and her face emerged from it like the moon from the clouds".

I read it and I could see Shiva and Raavi in front of my eyes, her with tears in her eyes, shawl covering her head, the store without lights on in the main room, moonlight shining on her face from a high up window... What can I say? You're an amazing storyteller di...

Ok, bye!!! I'm off to study!