Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 48

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Fate was on my side last night 😈😎

It's okay... Anyone of us here is all we need 😊😊

Unressed a LONG comment and HAAAYYYLOOO IMMA DED CAN'T FUNCTION PROPERLY>

What man...You put me in their UNIVERSE

I was..I can't-

I can't-

Imma indulge in the after effects

Mannnnnn !

Your updates both burn and satiate us. Not only Raavi and Shiva, but you, our dearest author, are a terrific tease🔥.

And why is disuuu here😶

Okay I feel burnt out after that looong chapter that literally sucked everything outta me!

So imma go on a ShiVi hiatus for a while.

Thanks everyone for reading so far! And apologies that last one didn’t stand up to the test!

Also sorry for the emo post - (am PMSing rn)

Sorry that last tag was a mistake Hinna!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Okay I feel burnt out after that looong chapter that literally sucked everything outta me!

So imma go on a ShiVi hiatus for a while.

Thanks everyone for reading so far! And apologies that last one didn’t stand up to the test!

Also sorry for the emo post - (am PMSing rn)

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

JUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTT

HHHHHHHHHAAAAAPPPEENEDDDDDD???!!

What didn't stand up to the test?

hua kya?

aisa matt karo please...

Don't break my heart 🥺

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

RES

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA 😈

*Inserts Evil Laugh

UNRES :

What did you just...Do to me-

What- ha-

SPEECHLESS. Gone. We dead.

The first scene? Holy cow I am so dead, flushed and dead. Damn girl...How the heck did you write this so perfectly? This was beyond sexy. Suddenly got too hot. November chill meant nothing to me. Every little detail was described so blissfully and precisely. From the start till the very end of that scene, up until the climax. Hot flashes are here.☺️

Thank you, Ritu! I have to say this is is the first time I wrote such a scene (with so much detail and descriptions added) so I was apprehensive how it would go down! I'm glad you thought it was done okay.

Okay not gonna lie didn't expect this Disha business but I hope it helps them confess.

I just had to bring in a little tadka (more precisely for a scene I had planned 😆)

I missed the bike ride intimacy wanted more of it, but that's just me, off screen bike content has given wings to my imagination man and I haven't moved on form it.

I love the intimacy of a bike too, but that just wasn't the time with Raavi being so emotionally off-kilter.

The back door? HALLELUJAH!

Best inclusion. Best, best and best.

Wait, are you saying what i think you're saying? ☺️😆. If yes, that wasn't my intention at all while writing the backdoor scene. It didn't even occur to me. I just wanted them to have privacy for their convo that followed.

For me the highlight of this whole chapter was their scene together. I am not lying by the time I was done I was sure to have been light headed, in the aura of it.

I am so loving her contemplations, those confusing, maddening ponderings over wanting him but not without the emotional connection. Oh, I love that, so much.

“Why? Was it that distasteful?”

“Noooo, I mean, I.. I was drunk and I clearly didn’t know what I was doing!”

Literally my expression after these lines.. Oh the horror I had of their upcoming fight and rightly so.

Him addressing all the feelings as THEIRS and not just him. Sigh. Made me so happy. He knows.

Yeah. He knows. He also knows Raavi's scared about admitting hers for him. The denial gets to him and he lashes out.

“Does Dev make you tremble like this when he touches you? Does he make you writhe and moan, Raavi?”

I was MAD! MAD! MAD! MAD!

This infuriating man. I would have slapped him, wouldn't want to wait with my initiation (which is impossible because Imma dying alone ) like her but then again she has fallen hard for him and men are a rotten lot when they're hurt so yeah in the end it was all very exhilarating and yes I was in THE SCENE. Like totally there, imagining them, being there in that universe.

Men can be rotten like that when things don't go their way. They don't think about what they're saying. Here, I think Shiva just wants to make Raavi mad. He wants to deliberately rile her up so much it shakes her from that fear thing she's got going in her head. And I think he succeeded.

Accusing her of being a tease even though it bought tears to my eyes was very intense to read because he was saying it anyway, even if he didn't like it. IT> WAS> INTENSE>

Yeah, I think at that point Shiva snapped. When she pushed him away because he was totally lost in the moment. He did not expect it and it made him say that. He regretted it the next minute. He does owe her an apology.

I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE HE POV IN THE NEXT ONE.

Really I cannot. I need it now. I'm greedy. I'm a wretched rat. But I need it now.

I don't think I can concentrate anywhere until I get one.

Aww. thanks for the enthusiasm, love! 🤗 And for the long-ass review (I only crave such reviews, barely get them)

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

Mannnnnn !

Your updates both burn and satiate us. Not only Raavi and Shiva, but you, our dearest author, are a terrific tease🔥.

And why is disuuu here😶

Thanks so much! ❤️

Aww, I don't mean to be a tease! 😕

Disha has a specific role to play, and I mean very, very specific for a scene I have planned. So I had to bring her in! 😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

JUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTT

HHHHHHHHHAAAAAPPPEENEDDDDDD???!!

What didn't stand up to the test?

hua kya?

aisa matt karo please...

Don't break my heart 🥺

Sowwwie! 😒

I just think this one didn't match up to expectations going by the number of shocked reactions and the lack of reviews

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Sowwwie! 😒

I just think this one didn't match up to expectations going by the number of shocked reactions and the lack of reviews

WHO IS SHOCKEDDD???!!!

And the reactions are less probably because of all of us being in the EDT constantly rather than reading!

ME speculations and all.

Its nothing to do with the chapter. Shush!

Stop being so self-critical bub.

Bht zaadaa acha tha..really. 🤗

There has been mature content on the forum...lots of it. Its always loved. ALWAYS. 😆