Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 46

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Dance.😳

Classical dance? What dance form do you learn?

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Classical dance? What dance form do you learn?

Yeah, Kathak. I've finished with my Prabhaakar years ago.

I still practice once in a while and work on the details whenever I can! 😆

Which isn't much.🤡

RES

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA 😈

*Inserts Evil Laugh

UNRES :

What did you just...Do to me-

What- ha-

SPEECHLESS. Gone. We dead.

The first scene? Holy cow I am so dead, flushed and dead. Damn girl...How the heck did you write this so perfectly? This was beyond sexy. Suddenly got too hot. November chill meant nothing to me. Every little detail was described so blissfully and precisely. From the start till the very end of that scene, up until the climax. Hot flashes are here.☺️

Okay not gonna lie didn't expect this Disha business but I hope it helps them confess.

I missed the bike ride intimacy wanted more of it, but that's just me, off screen bike content has given wings to my imagination man and I haven't moved on form it.

The back door? HALLELUJAH!

Best inclusion. Best, best and best.

For me the highlight of this whole chapter was their scene together. I am not lying by the time I was done I was sure to have been light headed, in the aura of it.

I am so loving her contemplations, those confusing, maddening ponderings over wanting him but not without the emotional connection. Oh, I love that, so much.

“Why? Was it that distasteful?”

“Noooo, I mean, I.. I was drunk and I clearly didn’t know what I was doing!”

Literally my expression after these lines.. Oh the horror I had of their upcoming fight and rightly so.

Him addressing all the feelings as THEIRS and not just him. Sigh. Made me so happy. He knows.

“Does Dev make you tremble like this when he touches you? Does he make you writhe and moan, Raavi?”

I was MAD! MAD! MAD! MAD!

This infuriating man. I would have slapped him, wouldn't want to wait with my initiation (which is impossible because Imma dying alone ) like her but then again she has fallen hard for him and men are a rotten lot when they're hurt so yeah in the end it was all very exhilarating and yes I was in THE SCENE. Like totally there, imagining them, being there in that universe.

Accusing her of being a tease even though it bought tears to my eyes was very intense to read because he was saying it anyway, even if he didn't like it. IT> WAS> INTENSE>

I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE HE POV IN THE NEXT ONE.

Really I cannot. I need it now. I'm greedy. I'm a wretched rat. But I need it now.

I don't think I can concentrate anywhere until I get one.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

RES

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA 😈

*Inserts Evil Laugh

Ab so jao! I'll maybe post tomorrow, or perhaps as per your wish on Saturday night! 😆

Waiting impatiently l... Fan club member 2 here... (@euphoricdamsel is currently at spot 1)

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Waiting impatiently l... Fan club member 2 here... (@euphoricdamsel is currently at spot 1)

Thank you, Min! I'm sweating buckets at the thought of posting this! I don't wanna do it and at the same time want to get it over and done with.

I have a feeling y'all are going to hate this!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Thank you, Min! I'm sweating buckets at the thought of posting this! I don't wanna do it and at the same time want to get it over and done with.

I have a feeling y'all are going to hate this!

Riya we would never ever hate something you've written!!

Never... Don't sweat it just do it quick; Like ripping of a bandage.. The summary sounds so good I'm sure we'll all love it! Looking at the clock and low key stalking for you to post (and I don't stalk just anyone's posts 😘)

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Riya we would never ever hate something you've written!!

Never... Don't sweat it just do it quick; Like ripping of a bandage.. The summary sounds so good I'm sure we'll all love it! Looking at the clock and low key stalking for you to post (and I don't stalk just anyone's posts 😘)

Done. Ripped off the bandaid! 😒 Ok, Bye!