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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

WHO IS SHOCKEDDD???!!!


And the reactions are less probably because of all of us being in the EDT constantly rather than reading!

ME speculations and all.

Its nothing to do with the chapter. Shush!

Stop being so self-critical bub.

Bht zaadaa acha tha..really. 🤗


There has been mature content on the forum...lots of it. Its always loved. ALWAYS. 😆


Oh I know you loved it. Can't speak for others though.

Kya karoon, writer hoon, always need validation 😒

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Posted: 3 years ago


In pointersss:


  • You did the first scene brilliantly. Period.
  • NOOOO! I wasn't saying anything promiscuous. I just loved them sneaking behind the house and the inclusion of backdoor because of the endless possibilities of Raavi sneaking Shiva in her room at night which only intensified by the portion where he climbs down the tree. Solely for this did I LOVE the prospect of the back door present. [He could sneak her out too yk☺️]
  • I'd love reading an apology scene but more than that I'm so interested in reading her reaction post this confrontation. You write contemplation scenes brilliantly... (Yeah I caught on after the Gym update ) and I'm waiting.
  • I didn't lie when I said I was light headed by the time I reached the end...You put me in a trance.
  • Why don't you put the story in EDT and DT? That will get you reads...and start tagging man. Mtlb...I know previously PMs ka scene tha and that didn't feel intrusive and tagging does but still tag people. Its really just a notification nothing much plus a LOT of readers dig mature stuff on the forum ain't lying. 😳


Are you really going to stop? 😭😭

Please don't.

How many chapters have you planned?

10? 11?

We've already finished 7. Just 4 more.


YOU'LL BREAK MY HEART.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


Oh I know you loved it. Can't speak for others though.

Kya karoon, writer hoon, always need validation 😒

Sabko acha laga hai bruuhhh..

Its just MahaEpisode discussions have tired everyone isiliye sb aloof hain..

don't sweat it ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.


In pointersss:


  1. You did the first scene brilliantly. Period. Thank you!
  2. NOOOO! I wasn't saying anything promiscuous. I just loved them sneaking behind the house and the inclusion of backdoor because of the endless possibilities of Raavi sneaking Shiva in her room at night which only intensified by the portion where he climbs down the tree. Solely for this did I LOVE the prospect of the back door present. [He could sneak her out too yk☺️] Well, this was precisely why I set up the premise of the backdoor and the window and a tree. Setting up an inlet for Shiva and an outlet for Raavi! 😆
  3. I'd love reading an apology scene but more than that I'm so interested in reading her reaction post this confrontation. You write contemplation scenes brilliantly... (Yeah I caught on after the Gym update ) and I'm waiting. Thank you again!
  4. I didn't lie when I said I was light headed by the time I reached the end...You put me in a trance. Wow! 😳
  5. Why don't you put the story in EDT and DT? That will get you reads...and start tagging man. Mtlb...I know previously PMs ka scene tha and that didn't feel intrusive and tagging does but still tag people. Its really just a notification nothing much plus a LOT of readers dig mature stuff on the forum ain't lying. 😳

Idk man. See I recognize that I'm not really part of the fandom. Not the inner circle of people that watch the show. The only people I know are the ones that have already been following this story.


Are you really going to stop? 😭😭

Please don't.

How many chapters have you planned?

10? 11?

We've already finished 7. Just 4 more.


YOU'LL BREAK MY HEART.


Ngl, this last chapter literally took a lot outta me. Feeling kinda wrung out. So rn, I feel like a hiatus. Not really feeling the writing, if you know what I mean. That could change though (maybe it's my hormones 🤔)


Thanks, love! You really are the sweetest! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


Thanks, love! You really are the sweetest! 🤗

Imma keep waiting 😭❤️

Hopefully My Toota Dil makes you rethink and update jldi jldi

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lizzie🤗 Oh, how I missed this story.😆 I can't express how much I love your version of ShiVi. 😆 Shiva really has an interesting way with Raavi and viceversa and this story is my innermost deepest desires of them getting their way with each other.

But, The heart wants more and more😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Lizzie🤗 Oh, how I missed this story.😆 I can't express how much I love your version of ShiVi. 😆 Shiva really has an interesting way with Raavi and viceversa and this story is my innermost deepest desires of them getting their way with each other.

But, The heart wants more and more😆

Bas ek hi tho Ye hamare aarmaan pure karne wali story hai Pooh!

☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Bas ek hi tho Ye hamare aarmaan pure karne wali story hai Pooh!

☺️

IKR😆

Lizzie you're our God!!!😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

IKR😆

Lizzie you're our God!!!😆


😆


Ye thoda zyaada ho gaya, but in my current mood I'll take it!

Thank you, Pooh! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Lizzie🤗 Oh, how I missed this story.😆 I can't express how much I love your version of ShiVi. 😆 Shiva really has an interesting way with Raavi and viceversa and this story is my innermost deepest desires of them getting their way with each other.

But, The heart wants more and more😆


Thanks. I understand my version of ShiVi is really different from the show (P.S. I read the last few episode updates )


What did you enjoy about this update? (or didn't enjoy)

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