Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 27

Woahhh!!! This was amazing😍❤

I seriously so anticipate their intense movement like "abhi hojaayega" but nhi hua but the way you wrote it ❤❤❤❤

Their swimming was so perfect in their character😍🔥🔥❤

Waiting to read aage kya hoga with 😂😂❤❤

Originally posted by: Miss.M

And I thank you for the canon divergent dynamics that are essentially still canon shivi.

The exact ages are unknown in the show (since there is some difference from pre leap and post leap) so this may well be possible and a fresh angle to look at it from.

You are definitely one of the few fiction writers that provide enough for the imagery, making the experience more enjoyable.

Cannot wait to see what other experiences you churn out. (Now I'll stop gushing so you can do some more writing 😆)

Let me confess to something. I have never written fanfiction on a show or couple that I've never watched. I thought it couldn't be done. But now I have you and so many other readers telling me I've captured the essence of ShiVi in my writing and I'm beginning to wonder if I wasn't wrong. I have Prats to thank for pushing me into adapting one of my stories into a ShiVi one and the reception it got convinced me I could. I'm so so glad you think I managed to recreate canon ShiVi in my fics!

Originally posted by: Kfof

Woahhh!!! This was amazing😍❤

I seriously so anticipate their intense movement like "abhi hojaayega" but nhi hua but the way you wrote it ❤❤❤❤

Their swimming was so perfect in their character😍🔥🔥❤

Waiting to read aage kya hoga with 😂😂❤❤

Abhi ho jayega aur phirse nahi hua.. ab Lizzie ko joote maaro! 😛😆

Idk how much patience you guys will have, mujhe lagta hai jald hee joote padne wale hain! 😆

Again, everytime you say I wrote ShiVi in character it makes me feel soo thrilled that I got their characters right!

Thanks for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Oh wow! What did I just read? Girl, you are one of the best in terms of writing a scene between Shiva and Raavi and make sure you include all their characteristics and tashan to make it very interesting. Loved their swimming pool encounter❤️ But the ending though, Shiva is angry and disappointed, Raavi is stunned😕

Can we have a continuation to this one to see how both come out of this mess and make Dev spill the beans about him being in love with another girl. I just want Shiva and Raavi to move ahead as there is clearly an attraction between the two.

Thanks so much! 🤗You don't know what it means to me to be told I got their characteristics right from just reading an occasional update and doing a little bit of internet research.

And yes, this will continue, though I'm still calling it an OS series because I intend to have little things in each update that will make it readable as stand-alones, and not leave the reader too stymied as to what happened before. It's not that much of a storyline really. It's more little incidents between ShiVi. So I hope it works!

Chapter by chapter this is getting so interesting.🤗Lizzie,this was a great update.❤️ I swear if the real ShiVi makes me disconnected with them, your ShiVi makes me tied to them tight.😆 The swim scenes are so spicyyyy😳 Waiting for the next update patiently.

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Chapter by chapter this is getting so interesting.🤗Lizzie,this was a great update.❤️ I swear if the real ShiVi makes me disconnected with them, your ShiVi makes me tied to them tight.😆 The swim scenes are so spicyyyy😳 Waiting for the next update patiently.

Thank you, Pooh! 🤗 I'm glad you find the distinction between my ShiVi and the real ShiVi given the level of frustration people are experiencing with them! I'm glad my ShiVi aren't making you want to quit reading! 😆

Thanks for your patience in advance because the next update may take some time coming! 😳

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Oh Lord, I'm cackling like a goose reading this comment!

Holy mother of weasel with hot cross buns is going to be my go-to expression from here on! 🤣

And dear God! 😳I'm no master or anything, but so kind of you to say so.😳

I love writing 'almost' moments, more than actual moments. I find the build-up and the raw, unresolved sexual tension more delicious than the actual sex! So I'm glad you thought this one was raunchy without anything actually happening which is exactly what I was aiming for! 😳

Ha ha., poor Krish. He's being unnecessarily vilified just because I decided to make him the party pooper this time. 😆 Don't kill the messenger guys! 😆 Dev ko maaro, Krish ne kya kiya? 😆

Also, I love your nickname for Shiva- Aag Boi Shiva! 🤣

And yes, God Bless Tushar! 😆

Hahaha!

Thank you. The weasel stuff is so apt literally everywhere! I use it so often man! 🤪

You are. Teach me ma'am. Imma your fan!

This update was so so so good. I wasn't lying about all the YIKES and bushing. My palm went to my mouth like 5 times during the race, can't even-

*The staring though* ☺️☺️

Aag Boi Shiva is EDT product man 🤣

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT!!!

I loved it Lizzie❤️!!! Raavi and Shiva's inherent competitive nature kicking in, them tricking each other and dirty playing is all soooo them... The fact that Raavi knows she kissed Shiva, that Shiva admitted to it all just added up to it... I really, really hope Raavi protests and that kicks Shiva into action, whether it be of the punch Dev in the face type or of the kiss Raavi in front of the family type... Personally, I'd love the second followed by the first, but the story's all yours!!!! Will be waiting for the next update...

We'll get a next part right?

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Hahaha!

Thank you. The weasel stuff is so apt literally everywhere! I use it so often man! 🤪

You are. Teach me ma'am. Imma your fan!

This update was so so so good. I wasn't lying about all the YIKES and bushing. My palm went to my mouth like 5 times during the race, can't even-

*The staring though* ☺️☺️

Aag Boi Shiva is EDT product man 🤣

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT!!!

Thank you again! And I’m glad you’re enjoying this slow burn cos there’s more to come! 😄