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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Riya!!!


I am very very late!!! But I'm here... I've just read part 10.


That's okay Min. You're here. That's what's important! 😳


My mind is still processing what I read!!! Wedding functions + Raavi on a mission +sexy outfits = Shiva losing his marbles.


The start scene with Mrs. S fits in so well. Once again they come together to make up a story to convince her that they're together and champak has a dysfunction 😂😂😂.


Ahh, I'm glad you thought the Mrs. S scene fit well. It's one of my favs too! 😆


Then we have Raavi's seducing Shiva, first at the sangeet, by refusing to not dance with him. Their teasing each other, waiting to see who breaks down first is too hot. Then the tasting of dessert (omg.. I will never look at dessert the same 😂😂😂), she plays him soo well, knowing that she's also going to suffer.

Turn the ac on!! A confused, turned on Shiva is a good read, because he's always sure of himself. So when she plays him for the earring and leaves him wanting more I slow clapped for our girl!!!


She certainly upped her game! 😆


Shiva describes himself perfectly at the reception... A besotted school boy.. As he should be, because she should consume his every thought. Rishita's need of the perfect colour for her reception table was apt, very bride-sy, wanting everything to be perfect and Dhara sending Raavi and Shiva together.... I was expecting him to gwt her worked up, but what a pleasant surprise... She is a minx definitely, making no. 7 on her list true.... That's called going after your own wishes and more power to her!!! Also hello bold Raavi can you please stay even in the show!!


You mean stay bold in the show? If ShiVi stop hurling insults at each other long enough they just might be able to confess their love for each other! 🤪


Riya... I know it is really late, but it was definitely worth the wait, because i savoured each and every word and feeling that you've penned down. Also I cannot believe the next part is the last one.... I'm a bit sad 😢


Hope you've got something new in the pipeline already??


Nope. Nothing in the pipeline. I feel like I'm losing steam where ShiVi is concerned once I started following the show updates. 😒 I was better off when I didn't know the canon version much. 😒



Thanks for reading and the long comment, Min! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Riya!!!

Hope you've got something new in the pipeline already??


Pipeline has shut down. Broken. Not existing. Pipeline gone. Nothingness.

Something hi tho aa nhi raha....kbse intezaar kr rhi main. 🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.


Pipeline has shut down. Broken. Not existing. Pipeline gone. Nothingness.

Something hi tho aa nhi raha....kbse intezaar kr rhi main. 🥺

Content ke liye idea, inspiration aur time - teenon chahiye. Teenon nahi hai 😒

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Content ke liye idea, inspiration aur time - teenon chahiye. Teenon nahi hai 😒

Plot kween is here...wo tho main de dungi...bharmaar hai idhar...baki tho ab..kya hi bolu..🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago

No no no - this is not me at all.

Mere saare works jitne bhi maine IF mein post kiye hain to date are in my Master index which you’ll find in my siggy

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

No no no - this is not me at all.

Mere saare works jitne bhi maine IF mein post kiye hain to date are in my Master index which you’ll find in my siggy

Ohhh acha I forgot about the Master Index lol. Ab tho mere bhi itne index hain soch rahi ek bada wala bana hi lun....🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Imma veryyyy close to a re-read this. Like super sonic close. 🤡

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Imma veryyyy close to a re-read this. Like super sonic close. 🤡


Sacchi?

I really need the assurance rn

#MeriWritingTelLeneChaliGayiHaiAurWapasAaneKaNaamNahiLeRahi

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


Sacchi?

I really need the assurance rn

#MeriWritingTelLeneChaliGayiHaiAurWapasAaneKaNaamNahiLeRahi

Mat hi bolo ye tho...maine December 27th se ek OS ke 2 scenes likh ke rakhhe hain...ab tk aage nhi badha.

I hyped it so much...it was such a fresh one aur phir bhasad.

Everyone's been asking about my bonfire-college Shivi and Imma like..."KYA KARUN MAIN?" 😭


This is one of the best stories on the FORUM.

Imma say it over and over and over again. ❤️


PS : IF issues wala thread kidhar hai I can't find it

Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 3 years ago

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