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Posted: 4 years ago

Riya 🤗sorry for being late.... past some days were quite hectic for me and I wanted to read this in peace and I am out of words..what an ending to a beautiful journey

This last one was all sorts of magic

Shiva is such a gentleman..he let her take charge even though he was dying to have her..he wanted her to have her moment...the amount of self control and love he has for her is commendable👏

And what do I say about him not letting her confess..he didn't want her decision to be clouded with anything and definitley not post pleasure bliss....how far this man has come from not being able to realize his feelings to this👏

The way he took her hand for the dance😍😍not even giving a chance to her or tushar to speak😆Their dance was beautiful😍😍

Shivi being shivi started their confession with chipkali, gadheda and their never ending challanges😆and that is what makes them adorable

Even in all this she didn't forget about his ideas regarding the store and he figured out the way for them being together and her diploma but still just gave her idea and clearly told her that its her decision...the loove and adoration these two have for each other and their respective work is what people crave for..having someone who respects and help you out in your career is a blessing

Oh my my no. 11 was a total shocker🤣🤣

I never imagined it to be this..raavi and her colourful mind😆

You create magic with words. This story is one of my favourites here🧡 . This definitely will be in my re read list. It has the perfect amount of every flavour be it love, laughter, romance, their banters, family, sexual tension....everything is beautiful. Your tags always used to make me happy as I knew a masterpiece is what I am gonna read🧡

Your shivi definitely took my breath away and that too quite often.

I know this was the last one but can we pleaaase get one more where raavi fulfills his sand romance wish along with #4 and #8....an epilogue maybe pleaaaaaaaaaaaase(with puppy eyes)😆

Loooooooooved the update riyasmiley31

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Coleus

Riya 🤗sorry for being late.... past some days were quite hectic for me and I wanted to read this in peace and I am out of words..what an ending to a beautiful journey

This last one was all sorts of magic

Shiva is such a gentleman..he let her take charge even though he was dying to have her..he wanted her to have her moment...the amount of self control and love he has for her is commendable👏

And what do I say about him not letting her confess..he didn't want her decision to be clouded with anything and definitley not post pleasure bliss....how far this man has come from not being able to realize his feelings to this👏


Oh yes! He had come a long way indeed! From not realizing his feelings to putting her first in every way! I wanted to bring in that part where he stops her from confessing at a vulnerable moment. I think it was important that their confession came at a time when neither of them are feeling obligated or beholden to the other.


The way he took her hand for the dance😍😍not even giving a chance to her or tushar to speak😆Their dance was beautiful😍😍


Yes the dance was my favorite part too!


Shivi being shivi started their confession with chipkali, gadheda and their never ending challanges😆and that is what makes them adorable

Even in all this she didn't forget about his ideas regarding the store and he figured out the way for them being together and her diploma but still just gave her idea and clearly told her that its her decision...the loove and adoration these two have for each other and their respective work is what people crave for..having someone who respects and help you out in your career is a blessing


Yes, I'm not sure how it is in canon but I really, really wanted the Shiva in my fic to want to complete his education. And of course, Raavi had to support him in his dreams! In fact, she had to push him towards them given Shiva's lack of self-belief.


Oh my my no. 11 was a total shocker🤣🤣

I never imagined it to be this..raavi and her colourful mind😆

You create magic with words. This story is one of my favourites here🧡 . This definitely will be in my re read list. It has the perfect amount of every flavour be it love, laughter, romance, their banters, family, sexual tension....everything is beautiful. Your tags always used to make me happy as I knew a masterpiece is what I am gonna read🧡


Aww, thank you so much, Alisha! 🤗


Your shivi definitely took my breath away and that too quite often.

I know this was the last one but can we pleaaase get one more where raavi fulfills his sand romance wish along with #4 and #8....an epilogue maybe pleaaaaaaaaaaaase(with puppy eyes)😆


Ha ha. Yes, I've gotten a few requests for an epilogue and though I'm not saying Never, I'm also not promising anything immediately. I'm kind of on a ShiVi hiatus right now, so let's see how and when inspiration strikes.


Loooooooooved the update riyasmiley31


Thanks so much for reading, Alisha!


Thank you!!! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yes yes... Riya when is the next one!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Also i will be back to finish giving my thoughts on the last two chapters (I'm sure I'm caught up till then) soon. I took a quick peek and saw that they were long 😍😍 so I'll read peacefully and comment properly

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Also i will be back to finish giving my thoughts on the last two chapters (I'm sure I'm caught up till then) soon. I took a quick peek and saw that they were long 😍😍 so I'll read peacefully and comment properly

Just curious- did you get around to finishing this? 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Also Roopa - did you read the last chapter at all?

Hope you’re feeling better now after your booster shot

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Just curious- did you get around to finishing this? 😳


Not yet.. I've been lurking but not had a proper catch up... Tomorrow I've got time so I'm going to catch up!!!🤞🤞🤞

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Posted: 4 years ago

killing disha was the best part....not of the story but her imagination in that is so perefecr.....she is so creative


Shiva is epitome of self control ....not just respecting her wishes but keeping in check his own desires is next to impossible but this boy does it all the time and Iove and respect him immensely for this


her dreams, her list, her satisfaction was his priority and she understood that....they are so in sync


the truck ride made me blush so hard....they create some magic and u r bound to get lost in it....technically u create this magic thru dem.....love it so much....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

killing disha was the best part....not of the story but her imagination in that is so perefecr.....she is so creative


Shiva is epitome of self control ....not just respecting her wishes but keeping in check his own desires is next to impossible but this boy does it all the time and Iove and respect him immensely for this


her dreams, her list, her satisfaction was his priority and she understood that....they are so in sync


the truck ride made me blush so hard....they create some magic and u r bound to get lost in it....technically u create this magic thru dem.....love it so much....

Thanks Roopa! I kinda liked Raavi’s innovative ways of torturing Disha myself! 😆

And yes, Shiva needs to be applauded for his amazing control but most of all for putting Raavi first and recognizing her needs and her desires above his own. Goes to show how much he loves her and like you rightly pointed out, respects her!


I’m glad you enjoyed the truck experience! 😆

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a review! Appreciate it! Happy Holidays! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Thanks Roopa! I kinda liked Raavi’s innovative ways of torturing Disha myself! 😆

And yes, Shiva needs to be applauded for his amazing control but most of all for putting Raavi first and recognizing her needs and her desires above his own. Goes to show how much he loves her and like you rightly pointed out, respects her!


I’m glad you enjoyed the truck experience! 😆

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a review! Appreciate it! Happy Holidays! ❤️

happy holidays dear....do keep writing....❤️

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