Love lost - A Shiva Raavi TS [COMPLETE] - Page 6

Hi there ! Are you updating the last part soon?

Helloo🤗

Plzz update soonish na❤️😳

Hello,

I'll need a little more time. I'm not happy with the way the last part has turned out so I'm rewriting it. Will post as soon as it's done! Thank you for your support!

Hello,

I have finally managed to write a somewhat satisfactory third part for this piece and with that it finishes. It was difficult to decide how this should end as the vision in my head kept getting turned around, but third time is a charm, hence I've posted the third draft that I finished.

Thank you for loving the first two parts. I hope I have done the same for the third. Constructive criticism is most welcome.

Enjoy 😊

It was amazing🔥❤❤

I loved how Raavi has shaped her life and future❤

Loved their meeting after one year😍❤

Overall, I loved the whole story, it was one of the realistic story❤❤

Min🤗!!! Although I've read most of your stories, I'm pretty sure this is the first one I'm commenting on... I love this story for so many reasons... I liked that Raavi left not because she was hurt (although she was in pain), but because she felt that it wasn't worth staying anymore. She had no place there and she was overstaying her welcome. The act of a woman who wants to maintain dignity.

I liked that when Suman finally showed concern for Raavi the family shut her down, then got her to admit it of her own accord. I loved that Shiva and Raavi put in the effort for themselves, especially Shiva, learning to curb his more negative tendencies despite the high probability of the one he was doing it for never coming back to him again... I loved that you showed Gaumbi's playful nature and how Raavi kept abreast of their lives through Krish's SM accounts... And I loved how you let it be open ended...

Overall, as you can see, I loved a lot of things about this story... Do keep writing Min, and I'll make sure to keep reading❤️!

I really really loved this story the journey of Raavi was so beautiful. My heart hurt and healed for Raavi. In love with your version of Raavi. You are a very good writer. What can I say I loved each and every line of this story. I look forward to your works. So realistic and practical story.

I loved this soo much ❤️

Again a beautiful chapter ❤️

Min, perfect ending for Raavi. She needed to be out of that toxic environment and be independent and have a life of her own. Raavi indeed has a great friend in Abha, who really helped turn around things for her.

I hope she stays as friends with Shiva for the rest of her life. No need to get back with him. But I sensed in the epilogue that she is going to back to Somnath. not sure how it will turn out.

Anyway thanks for writing this TS. I just loved it.❤️