REALISATION- A SHIVI OS PART11 PG14 COMPLETED - Page 4

hey guys......here is the 4th part......as I said I took the base from show and create my own story.........I moulded the success party of rishita in my way......hope you will like............all kind of views are most welcome...........ignore the errors 🤗🤗🤗

PART 4

(time lapse: evening)

Rishita entered the house and found it totally dark. She called out raavi and dhara but none of them answered. She called out again and was answered back by krish that one of the phases of house had gone and all family members went to kanta kaki’s house for Navratri function. He asked her to get ready. Rishita went to her room and got ready.

She came out of her room and heard loud party music. She got confused. As she steped forward, all lights opens and she found that whole house was beautifully decorated. She rushed to the hall and got surprised as krish and raavi shouted ‘surpriseeeeeeee’. Everyone came out and rishita was happily shocked. Everyone got dressed in black. Dhara tells her that all were very happy for her and wish that she becomes successful in her life. Rishita thanked everyone and hugged dev. Dev hands over her a beautiful party wear and asked her to change. Rishita quickly changed and came. Suman’s asks dhara about shiva to which dhara replied that he’ll be arriving shortly. Prafulla and anita arrives. They wished rishita. Prafulla didn’t want to attend the party but she was told that shiva’s prospective wife will also be there, so she came just to see that girl.

Everyone was chatting when krish shouted “shiva aa gya………ab party start hogi…yeahhhhhh”. Everyone turned around him and got shocked. He was dressed up in his usual style – shirt, vest and denims. Only raavi was happy at this shock. She couldn’t take off her eyes from him. He was looking damn handsome in the black shirt. Yes, the black shirt she gifted him before their divorce. She observed him from head to toe- black shirt with white vest and light blue denim. She was just staring like a puppy when dhara went up to him. Dhara asked shiva that why he didn’t wear the suit she brought for him? Shiva answered that he was bit uncomfortable in them and he found them not suiting him and his character. He mentions that he is according to the theme as he was wearing black. Gautum and suman agrees with him. Dhara also agrees but was sad as she wanted to see her child in suit but she knew that he comfort was more important.

Shiva’s eyes searched for raavi. His eyes landed on raavi who was staring at him. He too observed her from head to toe. She wore a beautiful black dress with her hair tied up in a bunn. They both looked each other till krish called them for dance. Krish played ‘sweety tera drama’ and dev, gautum and he start dancing. Rishita, dhara and anita joined them respectively. Shiva and raavi stood on opposite sides secretly taking glance on each other.

(whole dance sequence is same as in show. But here dhara didn’t ask them to dance. They were apporched by family in starting of second para and they danced)

all the family ended up dancing around suman.

Now this was time for cake cutting. Krish brought the cake. Rishita was about to cut the cake when prafulla intrupted. She said that rishita can’t cut cake as the girl, shiva's would-be wife, hadn’t arrived till now. Raavi got furious at this. Her own maasi was willing her husband to marry someone else. Prafulla added that there is no use to waitng for her as she won’t come. She adds, “ab iss jungalee, gawar se kaun shaadi karega……har koi meri bachi ki tarah seedha sadha toh nhi hota, neh”. Shiva looked at her furiously and then turned his gaze towards who looked shocked. Raavi took stand for shiva this time and asked her maasi not to create a scene here. If she wanted to ruin their happy moments, then she can leave. Shiva’s heart raced at this. Chipkali took stand for him.He was happy at this and it was evident by his small smile.

Raavi asked rishita to cut cake saying that her family is with her, there was no need of anyone else. Suman intruded her saying that the girl she chose for shiva will soon be part of their family.Raavi felt bad, infact very bad. Rishita asks everyone to come and cut the cake together. Raavi looked shiva with sad face whereas shiva had a smile on his face. Raavi was confused that for what he was smiling, for her taking stand for him or for that girl? raavi was too angry, sorry, jealous to process anything.Only anita noticed raavi whereas shiva was only noticed by dhara. Rishita cut the cake and fed it to everyone. Raavi too fed cake to rishita and walked away to wash her hands. As she was going she saw shiva heading towards table of snacks, smiling. She was not sure but she thought that it was because of that girl. She was furious.

She was looking at him without realising that she was about to collide with decoration. She walked forward and her hand touched the lighting which were hot. She got startled as she felt the burn. anita who was observing everything came too raavi immediately and asked “jalaa kya….”. raavi stared at her in shock. How come she knew that I was jealous? She thought. Anita again asked “haath jala kya…….”.raavi immediately said no and went towards kitchen leaving anita smiling at her innocence. Shiva was enjoying snacks with the repeat telecast of raavi taking stand for him. He was thinking about that only when dhara came and asked him “acha laga?”. Shiva saw her with shock. How come Bhabhi know that I was happy as raavi took stand for me? he thought. “khana acha laga?” dhara said pointing towards plate. He sighed and nodded his head in yes. Dhara gave him smile and left nodding her head in ‘iss ladke ka kuch nhi ho sakta’ and laughing.

Party was not over yet. Krish asks rishita and dev to do a romantic couple dance. Rishita refuses as she was feeling shy but dev asked her to do. Everyone in family including suman encouraged her and finally rishita agrees. Krish played ‘tujhe kitna chahnelage hum’.

dil ka dariya beh hi gya,

ishq ibaadat ban hi gya,

khud ko mujhe tu sop de,

meri zarrorat tu ban gya......

Dev-rishita got lost in each other other as they danced. Everyone enjoyed their dance. Raavi was also happy to see them. She turned her eyes towards shiva who was looking them. Shiva eyes fell on raavi who was looking him with pleading eyes. He tried to read her eyes. Her eyes were asking him to dance with her. Shiva acknowledged her request and headed towards her. He stood in front of her giving a beaming smile, took her hand in his and dragged her to the dance floor. Dev-rishita saw this and left dance floor for shivi.

Iss jagha aa gyi chahte ab meri,

Cheen lunga tumhe saari duniya se hi……

Shiva-raavi were lost in each other. They danced without any care or concern. They both gave each other a big beaming smile. Raavi loved this. They were very close to each other. She loved this proximity.

tere saath ho jayenge khatam,

tujhe kitna chahene lage hum

as lyrics finished, shiva sat on his one knee, took her hand in his, kissed it and said “I LOVE YOU RAAVI”. Raavi was too happy and replied “I LOVE YOU TOO SHIVA” when she felt someone tapping on her shoulder. She turned around and found was krish saying “cute hain na” to which she replied yes giving a beaming smile and turned her face only to see dev proposing rishita in front of everyone and shiva was standing on side smilng at them. Wait, what? It was a dream!!!!!!!!!!

so guys ending this part here only.........here raavi's pain and shiva's fear is not shown but it will continue in upcomings...............give your views for upcoming and do tell the loopholes and minus point...........thanks for reading...............next part bt saturday..............

PART 5- SAME PG

hey guys..here is the new update..........hope you liked it............do review, all type comment are welcomed......

PART 5

Party was over and everyone headed to their room for rest. Raavi lied down on her cot tensed. Her dream was bothering her too much. Why her heart wants something which can’t be hers? Why isn’t it accepting that she and shiva can’t be together? She felt sadness and jealousy at the same time. Sadness because she thought shiva hates her and jealousy because that girl. She can’t even imagine shiva with someone else but can’t say this because of her self-respect.For once she can keep her self-respect aside and confess, she thought, but what about the fact that he hates her, what about heart break. Though she knows everything but she didn’t have the strength to listen it from his mouth. Tears flowed down her eyes and he slowly drifted to sleep.

Elsewhere, shiva was sitting on his mattress smiling. Moments that he spent with raavi were flashing in front of his eyes. He was happy as raavi stood for him. It was not first time, but still every time she did this he felt proud. He lied and closed his eyes but got startled. Same thing was happening again. As he closed his eyes,he again saw the last part of his dream. He was going crazy again. He went out of the room and saw raavi sleeping in the hall.He sat on the swing and keep looking at her. He just stared and stared her andfell asleep on the swing. She was relief to the fear of his heart. His heart wants her to be in front of him always.

Next morning, all were set for normal day. Everyone had breakfast and left for the work. Raavi and shiva were already worried because of their uncontrollable feelings and top of that suman called that girl in today’s garba function. Raavi was furious, jealous and sad at the same time. She can’t listen her name and she is going to come home today. What on the earthis bholenaath planning for? Can’t He wait for their divorce? Shiva was least interested in all this. He tried to make his maa understand that he doesn’t want to get married again but she is stubborn. He finally gave up and decided to ignore this topic. He felt that one day maa will understand his dilemma.Raavi and shiva did their work with heavy heart. They just can't got of their confusion. The confusion was about - should I confess my feeling?what if he/she rejects? It’s not necessary for him/her to feel the same. What should I do?

It was evening and function starts. Kirti also came. Rishita was happy to see her but suman was still angry about what happened with krish whereas krish is busy admiring kirti. Shiva and gautum notice this. They warns him tobe in control other wise he will get into a big trouble like dev and they smirks. Krish laughed at this. Kanta kaki came with a girl. Kanta kaki introduced her as disha, the girl suman chose for shiva. Raavi, who was smiling at her initialy, turned pale. she was shocked. Whole family was shocked. Shiva frowned at this. He left the place immediately without getting in others notice. Anita also arrived. Disha touched suman’s feet and suman introduced herto everyone. Raavi wasn’t able to take this anymore, she left and headed to the kitchen. Anita followed. Raavi was angrily serving the juice in glass when anita came.

An: (making a fake angry face) kya din aa gye hai mere bhi?..............main aayi aur meri behn ne mujhe dekha tak nhi…..(as she entered the kitchen)

Ra: (noticing her pressence) aap aa gye di………aisa nhi hai, bas main kaam busy ho gyi thi…..dhyaan nhi gya(continuing the work)

An: (sarcasticly) hn bahut busy thi tu………dekha maine…………kisi ko ghurne me…………..

Raavi saw her with awkwardness. She took the tray and rushed out of the kitchen.

An: (to herself) kab samjhegi tu raavi……………accept karle……..kahin bahut derr na ho jaye…………

Elsewhere, kanta was trying introduce disha to shiva but whole family was trying their level best to stop this, but no one can disobey suman. Kantadragged shiva in front of disha. Disha says hi forwarding her hand towards him but shiva folded his hand and replied her as if someone kept gun on hishead. Kahan phasa diya maa, he thought.

Krish played music and all started doing garba. Shiva and disha, who were standing on side, were dragged by kanta on the dance floor. Raavi noticed this. Though shiva was dancing reluctantly, raavi was very sad to see them together. Though he was dancing with disha, but his eyes were searching atraavi. Raavi can’t take this anymore. She left dance in b/w and ran upstairs to terrace. Anita observed her and followed. Shiva, who was looking at raavi continuously, found her missing. He got tensed and was about to leave the dance floor when suman stopped him. He couldn’t say no to his mother but he looked all around to find her.

Raavi reached terrace and fell down on the floor as if she was scattered. Anita came near her to console her but raavi asked her to go. She says that she wants to stay alone for some time. She requested anita to leave. Anita leaves her alone considering her request. Raavi want to cry in alone,want her heart to get a little light. She was stuck in a mess. How could shechoose one of these: love and self-respect? No she can’t. she cried and cried.

Anita came down with sad face and was noticed by dhara. Dhara asked her that what happened. Anita recited the whole story. Dhara was shocked to all this. She says anita to come with her and tell all this to shiva. She says thathe need to feel raavi’s pain and agony. They both headed towards shiva when they heard a loud sound from the mcb box which just under the staircase of the house. Shiva and dev head to check out but till then fire broke out because of a short circuit. The fire was spreading very fast.

Sh & dev : (shouting)jaldi ghr se bahar niklo…….aag lagne waali hai………gaumbi jaldi fire brigade karo………..krish jaldi sabko baahar le ja…

Everyone panics and rushes out. Shiva didn’t know where was raavi. He got more tensed. Anita, only one who knew that raavi was upstairs, ran in that direction. Shiva was about to say krish to find raavi when he saw anita heading towards the stairs which was on fire the most.

Sh: (shouting at anita and holding her) aeee anita…….kya kar rhihai………paagal ho gyi hai….tujhe bahar jaane ko bola…………(pushing her towards door)

An: (screaming) shiva raavi upar chat pe hai…………….

so guys I wind up this part here next update by monday......stay tuned.........

Loved it ❤️eagerly waiting for the next part.

this is awesome....he is going to save her

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Loved it ❤️eagerly waiting for the next part.

next update by monday👍🏼

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

this is awesome....he is going to save her

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let see what's going to happen.......will he be able to save her?🤔🤔🤔

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Read the last two parts now....loving it so much❤️

The dance sequence and Raavi's dream was so beautiful and romantic!!

Waiting to see Shiva save her and I hope both of them confess their feelings for each other!!

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Read the last two parts now....loving it so much❤️

The dance sequence and Raavi's dream was so beautiful and romantic!!

Waiting to see Shiva save her and I hope both of them confess their feelings for each other!!

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🔥🥰💕Amazing update, please update soon 🥰

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🔥🥰💕Amazing update, please update soon 🥰

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next update will be posted by tomorrow........😊😊😊

one more shivi ff 'HUMARI SHAADI MEIN' by me is going on.....you can check out😊😊.....link in below

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pandya-store/5255234/humari-shaadi-mein-shivi-os-part7-pg8-updated