REALISATION- A SHIVI OS PART11 PG14 COMPLETED - Page 6

Originally posted by: lourel24

Beautiful.I would like you to continue this scene with shiva complaining about where she has been for so long .Here her husband is injured n she is not available when he needs her for personal help and for attention something like that. They keep on bickering ravi giving info about where she has been but shiva is stuck up at being ignored n not cared enough like a kid.Then suman comes in with family announcing it would be disha who would take care of shiva in his personal space.shiva is super uncomfortable n angry says Ravi is there to take care so need of disha n ravi too can't tolerate it 😣 n claims she would herself take care of her husband.she gives suman back ignoring whatever Shiva will be angry or not.she has had enough of her tantrums n won't tolerate more.suman questions her ,shiva can't tolerate it n claims to love Ravi.Ravi doesn't say anything in shock.But while taking care of him plans surprise in hospital itself n proclaims her love n asks for forgiveness about how he has been treated by her friends n making him insecure.shiva starts crying n says for how long he wants to listen this from her but himmat hi nahi hui n apologizes for his mistakes too reveals his insecurities n take promise to never ever leave him n vice versa.I have full fledged imagined what I would like to read😂😂😄.I could go in detail more but zyada ho jaega 😁

now something is cooking in my matar ke size wala mind🤔🤔

let's see how much it will take to be a proper one

Awesome update 🥰💕❤️,please update soon

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Awesome update 🥰💕❤️,please update soon

Thank you so much for loving it💖💖

Please give some suggestions for shivi's confession....I am confused😤😅

Believe me I am no writer, but you ended the last update with Disha telling both Raavi and Shiva that their each have feeling for each other, but both of them haven’t knowledge their feelings/emotions either to themselves or each other.

I would like both of them to self-reflect on that, but a part of me still want Raavi to confess to Shiva 1st💕

Finally!! Both silently realizes the other lives them. Can't wait for their confession ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Believe me I am no writer, but you ended the last update with Disha telling both Raavi and Shiva that their each have feeling for each other, but both of them haven’t knowledge their feelings/emotions either to themselves or each other.

I would like both of them to self-reflect on that, but a part of me still want Raavi to confess to Shiva 1st💕

I think you are right..........I feel that I have messed up the story......uhh😫😫😫

now I need think hard to end it in a nice way.........

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Finally!! Both silently realizes the other lives them. Can't wait for their confession ❤️❤️

but I am stuck😭😭😭

I guess I create a mess in last........please help me to get out here🥺🥺🥺🥺

No, you haven’t messed it up, you still have option on which path to take, have them reflect on Disha’s words, or they choose to ignore the advice. But something has to give….either having an internal or external push for them to move forward.

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

No, you haven’t messed it up, you still have option on which path to take, have them reflect on Disha’s words, or they choose to ignore the advice. But something has to give….either having an internal or external push for them to move forward.

hmm.....I'll figure out something......but it will take time

Originally posted by: virangna2005

but I am stuck😭😭😭

I guess I create a mess in last........please help me to get out here🥺🥺🥺🥺

Till now I loved it. I don't think ots a mess. U wrote beautiful.

May be both speaks together 😊😊😊

at same time and confess.