Tales of the Heart- Shivi Drabble/OS Series. (Part 3- Pg no-5. Updated - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hello dear, this is such a beautiful series that you're doing..... I loved your previous works gadhedi, and how to fall in love as well.... Soooo much!!!

Hope you keep writing girl....

PS Do you mind me asking what I can call you?

You can call me Dyuthi. ❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chipkali n Bhootnath ❤️ story


U know something I had already imagine earlier as bachpan wala pyaar ..


The way you wrote is so cute waiting for next.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I haven't rechecked or edited this chapter. Kindly ignore my typos and grammatical errors.


2. Happy Tears.


One side love is the most divine feeling in the entire world. Raavi smiles to herself. Her expanse grows wide, melting down like an ice put in the warmth of sunlight. Love is a poetic prose, dangling in the charming tune to the music of her life. Raavi does not remember when and how she changed. The dark sky turned starry, the dawn caught her stary and the surroundings around her became the field of flowers. Her bright eyes starts to shine brilliantly. She can see the split of light even the most murky depth of her space. She herself became a star, twinkling in the delight of the love she is feeling in the chambers of her heart.

What did she think before falling in love with the most irritating person in the world? She knows not. His presence becomes a boost up for her, his steely glance a strength. So what if he does not know? She can live each and every moment with utmost care and love. She is only his, forever and ever.

There isn't a time when she does not pray for him, when she does not expect the best for him and when she does not expect to see a smile from him. His smile takes her breath away, he looks absolutely stunning with the sparkle in the eyes when he smiles. His smile calms her down, her deepest darkness becomes a soothing solace when he smiles from the bottom of his heart. She knows when his smile comes straight from within. He loves the little things, unlike the other people she has noted in her life. If somebody gives a hug wishing for his birthday with love, then gifts become nothing to him. He will celebrate that hug for all his life.

She had crushes before, one of them was his brother, Dev. Raavi shuts her eyes in irritation when the thought of even liking him comes forward in her head. Raavi thinks through it still. Deep down somewhere, Dev is a reason why she turned like this. She is grateful to him for showing her the light in her life.

She was just eighteen when she was running towards Dev for a desperate help. The first and foremost thought was to reach for him. He was her crush back then, she was too dazed in her dream world to get brainwaved by a reality check. She was frantic, totally trembling and beyond frightened to watch her college mate get married. She was eighteen and her parents were ready to get her married to an older man. Raavi asked for Dev's help, he refused for the sake of their reputation.

When Raavi cried in front of her childhood enemy, he didn't take a minute to rethink. He held her hand and took her to her friend's place and helped her out. There were fights, there were threats, there was ruckus and rebel. Yet, Shiva Pandya had no fear in his eyes. He didn't regret the decision for a moment.

Raavi couldn't help but watch him with galore admiration. She remembers how she felt to this moment. People talk about heartbeats racing, adrenaline rushing and world stopping. Those were just tales. With Shiva, she felt calm. Her fear turned into a strength, the depth became bottomless. She felt accepted, her tears and desperation were heard. Shiva heard them, he didn't break her hopes.

Raavi realized that falling in love does not change a person, it changes their perspective. Her perspective for Shiva changed, her perspective towards life changed. Days and nights became a spree for confusion. Shiva was in her thoughts, their fights seemed to pull her towards him.

Raavi grins at the prospect again. Her college days got etched with just one name, Shiva. And one day, when her neighbour's daughter made fun of Shiva, she pushed her down into the puddle. Childish it was, but her new found feelings drove her mad. She was drowning with confusion, desperate to know what made her think about him continuously without a break.

She found her reason on a rainy day. She was cheerful, enjoying the rain in ebullience. Ignoring Prafulla's protests, she ran to cherish the outpour. Just in that time, she found Shiva playing with little children. The joy in his eyes and flame in his smile was enlivening. He looked like the brightest star in the dark sky, like a cozy sunshine that gave her warm cuddles in a chilled morning. Raavi couldn't take her eyes off him, she still cannot take his eyes off him. He is Somnath's sabse handsome ladka after all.

Right in that moment, a lady came forward crying for some money for her little daughter's medical treatment. Shiva is not a man to say no. So without thinking, he removed his gold chain and placed it on her hand. It was his father's last gift for him. That was all he could do, to give the most precious and memorable thing without a slight flinch.

Love lives in giving.

Raavi found her world in that moment. She decided to live with his name imprinted on her heart forever. She continues to think so, she gleams thinking about that instance. She belongs with him. Even if he does not acknowledge her, she will live thinking about him all her life.

She grins as she watches Shiva look at his birthday gift in an awe. The expressions he beholds is priceless. Her heart wells with intense love for him. The teary eyes with sheer joy elevates her beyond words. He holds the chain that carries rudraksh in a trident pendent. Raavi is elated, teary and undeniably happy.

"Happy Birthday Shiva. You don't need to know who I am. Please don't deny this gift. This is priceless compared to your beautiful heart. This is a token of gratitude from me. Thank you Shiva, for being in my life. May you be blessed with all the happiness in this world. May Bholenath give you more reasons to smile." Krish reads out loud, teasing Shiva recklessly.

"Waah Shiva. You have fans. I wish I had them too."

Shiva's confused but amazed expression gives a Raavi deep satisfaction. The enchanting smile excites her. She watches him away from the crowd, blushing slightly. She was running from shop to shop in search of the right pendant. She has gifted him the most precious thing in the world, the chain, her father's last memory. He deserves that. Everything that belongs to her, belongs to him. On his happy face, a slight tear falls down from her right eye and then the left one. She loves him too much to not be happy.

Something happens in that stance.

Her world freezes the moment he smiles in her direction having a knowing look on his face. The intense gaze from him makes her stay rooted to her place. His eyes well up, yet the smile becomes beguiling and intact. He wears the chain without breaking his eye contact from her.


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Edited by ClumsyMe - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was so 🥺nice.. I can actually feel the connect ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

So touching I swear.... This Raavi is so mature too Dyuthi❤....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Omg wow this is so so beautiful and the ending He smiles knowingly at her❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Beautiful. No words for it.

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#18

It's was so beautiful 😍😍 loved it

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

This was amazing! Raavi falling for Shiva was beautifully done

The last part where he accepts her gift was the icing on the cake ❤️

Loved it!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I just died a million beautiful deaths reading this.🥰🤧

Love you...this was one the most pure and emotional piece....🥺♥️

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