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Posted: 3 years ago
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Seems interesting

Update soon❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting prologue👏

Waiting for first part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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whats happening 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phoebe16

Seems interesting

Update soon❤️

just started to write😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 1:

Episode started with someone watching through the window , the dark night with the bloom of moon the twilight scattered on the black sheet of sky and luminous the air space clouds brighten up with the glimmer of the moon the addition of cherry blossom twigs make the scene of heaven ....

Man holding a diary... and started to write in it

kitna haseen hai yeh manzar ....

magra phir bhi kuch adhora sa hai ...

sb kuch hai magar sathi bs ek teri kami c hai ...

nigah ko aj bhi teri talash hai ..

ek dhundli c yad sath hai ...

chehra ankhon mn liye ghumtay hn dar ba dar...

kabhi mil to tujhe batain kitna chatay hn hum ....

suddenly his fone rang he wipes his tears and pickup the call

Man : Hello han aman bol ...

Aman : sir wo aj wali party meeting dobara arrange karnay k liye nai man rahi ..

suddenly his face contorted with rage clutched his jaw and talk with bared teeth

Man : How dare they ... They dont konw me at all?

Aman : sir mn to har try kar k dekh li ab ap hi kuch kar sktay hn

Man : ok mn a raha hn ...

n he left the room with opened dairy lying on table...

before leaving for office he ordered mohan for dinner arrangments

Man: Mohan ...

Mohan : g sahab

Man : rat k dinner ki tyari karo r dinner bantay hi sb ghr walon ko serve kar dena mn shyad aj rat na aon tm sb ka dhiyan rakhna

Mohan : ok sahab

and he left the place ... and take his place in car and start driving

Thought:

this time they are crossing their limits.... enough is enough i will not spare them this time ... i will destroy their generations if they didnt agree the whole world will witness their distruction....

here aman try to stop the party so that his boss arrived and talk to them but party was in no mood to wait one more second

Aman : sir boss bs atay hi hon gaye 2 min ruk jaiye ap ap r wo beth k sb sort out kar lena ... bs 2 min ka to sawal hai....

they left there seat n about to left the place receptionist inform the Aman about the arrival of boss...

Aman : sir sir boss a gaye hn

Party : hum nai milna chatay ab tumhare kisi boss woss se... itna non serious attitute wo bhi bussiness man ka... radiculous ... smjha kia hai wo khud ko ...

i m not going to finalize deal with such a man.....

suddenly he felt some burden around his collar

Man comes face to face with frowned head....

Man : a janardhan seth.... teri itni okat hai k tu meri deal cancle kare... 400 crore ki deal ki hai mn n tere sath... main tujhe barbad kar doon ga.. tujhe teri asliyat p le aon ga...

suddenly his expressions changes in to soft and he left janarthan collar

Man : chal ek tasveer ka rukh mn dekhata hn tujhe ...tu bhi kia yad kare ga...

he opened his laptop n set it with projector and start the presentation on cenimated screen

Man : meri company n har jaga thoray thoray kar k 600 crore invest kiye hue hn ... agr tu deal nai bhi karta tb bhi meri comapny ko koi nuksan nai hoga islye na tere anay ki khushu na tere janay ka ghum hoga mujhe r meri company ko...

lakin... lakin.. laikin...

teri company ka budget 400 s uper ka nai hai..r uper s loan bhi bank ka tu n chukana hai... to deal cancel karnay k sath sath tu barbad bhi hoga... isly meri manrt rok le khud ki barbadi ko ... r sighn kar de deal..

sochna chata hai soch le ... le lay apna time tu aram s... he put papers on the table..

janardhan left with none other option other the agree with him and sign the papers ...

man smiles vicotiously... and left from the cabin as janardhan signs and turn he saw the man face to face...

Man : SHIVA PANDIYA naam hai mera ... yad rakhna

n finally he left the place


guys i know i m not good as the other people here but i will try my best plz comments and tell hows it ? ignore my mistakes

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Awwwwwsome ❤❤❤🤩🤩🤩


Cont soon🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

on the edge

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

oh boy this is awesome

shiva seems ruthless businessman

I love it....

waise bhi Janardhan ko kuch bhi kare I would love that....

he is the boss? baki ke log kahan gaye? he is giving orders so m thinking 🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

oh boy this is awesome

shiva seems ruthless businessman

I love it....

waise bhi Janardhan ko kuch bhi kare I would love that....

he is the boss? baki ke log kahan gaye? he is giving orders so m thinking 🤔

Thanks alot dear... Lols sb a jain gaye nazar ek ek kr k 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

oh the ruthless business man troupe I love, continue soon jaan!

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