This was amazing…
I readed both the chapters in one go….
Poor ShiVi, both are soo hurt…
Cant wait to see what is written in the dairy. And how Shiva will react
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This was amazing…
I readed both the chapters in one go….
Poor ShiVi, both are soo hurt…
Cant wait to see what is written in the dairy. And how Shiva will react
Ban gayi Raavi Shiva Jaisi❤️
Shivaaa stop being difficult
Hope he gets her back :)
Oh no!! Iss aar ya paar Mai Shiva chose paar😢. Hope he reads the diary and sees what she truly feels about him and wins her over. Continue soon! :)
Loved it.
It was quite an emotional rollercoaster ride.
You've portrayed their emotions beautifully.
The dialogues were crisp, natural and had the momentum.
I m very very very excited for next part.shiva is gonna regret big time,he wil realize the pain he had made ravi go through in his insecurities.
Exactly the words I want the Show's Raavi to say😒👏
Shiva is being too hard on Raavi, just because he feels he is being mahaan🤔
Beautiful update👍🏼
Update soon!!
Hi guys.
I am back with thelast update of this TS, with my last update’s ending many thought that the TSwas over. No guys I don’t write sad endings so you don’t have to worry from myside about that.
Okay so withoutblabbering much please read and tell how was it?
And yes, thank youfor your lovely comments on this story means a lot to me.
Part 3
Shiva was shockedhearing her last words, what does she mean she didn’t want this relation toend? She too was compromising. Right?
More than thisdiscussion her safety was important so he got up to go after her but as he gotup the diary she handed him fell down. He saw a heart in the opened diary, hisblood boiled but before he could react his eyes caught his name written on it,he picked it up and saw his name with a heart.
His hands opened thefirst page on its accord to see what was in this diary.
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Us Dev ne mujhemandap pe chod dia marne ke liye, lekin pata hai mujhe kisne bachaya? Shiva ne.Can’t believe jo ladka mujhe hamesha bachata tha wo aya bhi nahi dekhne mujhe.Or jo ladka meri jaan ke piche pada rehta tha vo mujhe bachane aya. Uske chehrepar tension thi jab main hosh mein ayi, par shadi karke room mein aane ke baadphir se wahi gussa. Pata nahi kaise rahungi main Shiva ke sath puri zindagi.
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Aj kuch gundo nekidnap kia hume main bahut dar gayi thi par Shiva tha. Pata nahi kyu par mujheaisa laga jaise jab us gunde ne mujhe chua toh Shiva ki ankhein gusse se laalho gayi mano bahut parvah ho use meri. Or jab pallu niche gira tab ek gentlemanki tarah usne meri help ki, khair itna bharosa toh mujhe uspe hai ki vo faydanahi uthayega mera.
Lekin usne mujhe vahichod dia gundo ke beetch, agar Dev Gaumbi na ate toh? Par mujhe Shiva senarazgi thi gussa tha, vo kaise chod ke ja sakta hai mujhe?
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Maine Shiva ko I hateyou bola aaj, kyuki main hurt thi. Par pata nahi kyu mera dil nahi manne koraazi ki vo nahi ja sakta lekin sach yahi hai ki vo gaya tha mujhe chod kar.
Kal hume Kuldevi kemandir jana hai toh main soti hu ab. Okay bye.
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As usual raste meinShiva ne mujhe bahut tang kia. Bhoothnath kahi ka. Lekin bahut ajeeb hai vo, orladko jaisa nahi hai. Aaj na khana khate waqt mujhe mirch lagi toh sab pyar sepith thap thapa rahe the kuch nahi ho raha tha lekin vo aya or usne zor se pithpar 2-3 bar mara or thik ho gayi main. Bahut mushkil hai is ladke ko samjhana.Mujhse ek galti hui aaj, main rishita ke sath milkar Dhara di ke khilaf ho rahithi lekin time par Shiva ne mujhe samjhaya. Thank you Shiva.
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Aaj finally itne dinobaad bed par soi main vo bhi us bhoothnath ke sath dar lag raha tha toh uskitange pakad li lekin uske liye bhi ladai ki us bhoothnath ne mujhse. Kitnanikamma hai vo, par usse lade bina maza nahi ata mujhe. Hihi.
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Aaj Rishita ne bahutsunaya mujhe ki meri life mein khushia nahi hai pyar nahi hai.
Jab main ro rahi thitoh pata hai kisne chup karvaya? Us Bhoothnath ne or usne kaha ki jisne bhimujhe rulaya uski jaan le lega vo. Is baat ka kya matlab samjhu main?
Vaise I am glad merishadi Shiva se hui Dev se nahi kyuki Dev ke pass kuch nahi tha mujhe dene ko orvahi Shiva ka sab kuch mera hai. Ha vo alag baat hai ki abhi uska gussa hi merehisse mein hai par chalo jo bhi hai vo shiddat se mera hai. Thank You Bholenathis bhoothnath ke liye.
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Aaj hum mukhteshwargaye the aur maine Shiva se bahut gandi tarah baat ki phir bhi vo mujhe bachaneaya. Usne kaha ki vo mujhe chod ke nahi gaya tha gundo ke beetch. Thank youBholenaath ki vo mujhe nahi gaya tha chodkr. Usne mujhse vaada bhi kia ki vokabhi mujhe chod kar nahi jaega, pata hai ek ajib sa sukoon mila mujhe yehjankar ki life mein hai koi jo mujhe kabhi bhi chod kar nahi jaega.
Thank you Shiva usvaade ke liye, yeh Raavi bhi kabhi tujhe nahi chodegi.
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Main aaj washroommein gayi or fisal kar Shiva ke sath tub mein gir gayi. Bahut karib tha vo merebahut zada, par mujhe ajib nahi laga, acha laga in fact. Ek baat toh hai merapati gentlemen hai pura koi or hota toh shayad fayda uthata par vo bahut sweethai is mamle mein
Thank you Bholenath
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Sorry main 1-2 nahilikh pai kyuki meri pag phere ki rasam thi. Main walk par gayi or Shiva nemujhe bachaya, main itna attitude dikhati hu use uske baad bhi vo mujhe musibatmein kabhi akela nahi chodta gundo se bachane aya mujhe or phir ghar tak chodke aya. Man kara ki vo waqt khatam hi na ho kabhi, hum bas chalte rahe us raatmein. Hey bhagwan yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe, vo bhoothnath ki company pasandaane lagi hai mujhe? Uff
Lekin usne mujhevapis ghar le jane se mana kia bahut bura laga mujhe kaise kar sakta hai voaisa? Usne kaha tha na kabhi nahi chodega phir?
Lekin bahut drame kebaad uska plan samajh aya. Yeh Bhoothnath bhi na ek baar bata deta toh main tohuski hi team mein hoon na. Is bhoothnath ko samajhna bahut mushkil hai par koini zindagi padi hai puri aram se samjhungi use. Thank you Bholenath.
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Ek baar phir sorrybahut din se nahi likha kuch par kya karti bahut kuch ho raha tha. Us Janardhanne shiva ko fasa dia tha. Use mera Shiva hi milta hai kya har waqt?
Usse bhi zada kuchhua Shiva ne meri diary pad li or vo gusse mein chala gaya bahar kisi kaam se.
Shiva tu aise kaisekar sakta hai? Main dil se tere saath rishta nibhana chahti hu Shiva pleaseaise mujhe khud se dur mat kar please. Aaja jaldi.
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Shiva kab aega tumain bahut miss kar rahi hu tujhe. Ek waqt tha jab tere tel masalo ki badbumein dam ghutta tha or ab yahi tel masale zindagi ban chuke hai meri.
Jab tak teri shirt kokhud ke kareeb nahi rakhti usko smell nahi kar leti tab tak bechain hoti rehtihu. Jaldi aa ab yeh shirt ki smell bhi fiki pad rahi hai mujhe teri smellchahiye ab, tu chahiye ab.
Thankyou Bholenaathmere Bhoothnath ko meri zindagi mein bhejne ke liye.
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Pata hai aaj mujhesapna aya Shiva ka, Aise laga jaise wo vapis aa gaya ho. Phir Main dukan pargayi toh vaha Sneha ayi I hate her uski vajah se mera Shiva mujhse durgaya.
Shiva vapis aa gayaaur humne sath mein khana bhi khaya lekin isse pehle main kuch kehti maasi maaaa gayi or itna kuch bolke chali gayi. Shiva phir chala gaya, vapis aane do usemain bata dungi ki main usse pyar karti hu or phir uske baad kal maasi ke gharjake unhe samjha dungi ki vo Mere Shiva ko kuch na kahe age se, unhe ab Shivako accept karna hoga.
Shiva I can’t wait tostart my life with you. Jaldi aa.
Thank you Bholenaath.
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Shiva read the wholediary, it had small small glimpses of their life from her POV. The diary onlyhad Shiva in it, and it ended with two big hearts connected with ShiVi writtenon it.
He got up and wipedhis tears.
He took his bike anddrove in her house’s direction. When he was driving his eyes fell on a girlsitting in the park alone when drove further he found it to be Raavi. He parkedthe bike and ran to her. She was crying. He knelt down in front of her and kepther hands on her knees.
‘Raavi’ he spoke.
She looked at him andwas shocked, she didn’t expect him to be here. ‘Kya kar raha hai tu yaha?’
‘Tu yaha kya kar rahihai? Ghar jane ke liye nikli thi na?’ Shiva asked concerned.
‘Shiva Dhara di nekaha tha na ki sasural ki baat mayke nahi jani chahiye? And main nahi janachahti thi vaha kyuki phir maasi tujhe bahut kuch sunati aur woh main nahi sunpati.’ she told him sobbing but soon anger took over her emotions as sherealized their previous encounter.
‘Tujhe kya matlab?Kahi bhi jau main. Tune keh dia na ki main sahi nahi hu tere liye. Ja yaha se.’Raavi spoke in anger.
‘Raavi pagal hai kyatu? Kuch ho jata toh?’ he was hell worried about her.
‘Ho jata toh acha haiShiva. jo bhi ho raha hai na usse acha main mar jati ya koi mujhe maar deta yamujhe kidnap kar leta kam se kam tera mujhse picha toh chutta’ she spatted inanger.
‘Chup kar ja Raavi.Bakwas mat kar, soch bhi rahi hai kya bol rahi hai? Kuch ho jata toh mera kyahota?’ he spoke.
‘Kuch nahi hotaShiva, jaise Dhara di ne mujhse shadi karva di vaise hi kisi or se karva detior tab tu khush bhi hota kyon ki uska koi past nahi hota, vo teri maami kibehen ki beti bhi nahi hota. Acha hi hota Shiva agar main usi din mar jati toh,tere gale yeh aafat toh nahi padti kam se kam’ she spoke whatever poisonouswords came to her mind.
Shiva had enough ofher bakwas he pulled her closer to him and kissed her, the kiss was not at allslow or smooth. It was rough like him, but Raavi instead of protesting ordenying she too poured all her emotions in that kiss. She didn’t even realisethat it was their first kiss, she just took revenge from him for hurting her.How dare he leave her? She bit his lips mercilessly, scratched his neck to hurthim for hurting her.
Shiva could feel howangry she was so he controlled his wrath and took her anger and let her hurthim in her own way. She broke the kiss when she felt the need of air andrealisation dawned on her. She touched her lips and looked at his swollen lips‘Tune mujhe kiss kiya?’
‘Maine?’ he was shocked.‘Tune kiya aur vo bhi kiss nahi kia tune khaya hai mujhe jungleeo ki tarah.’ hespoke, making her blush.
‘Bakwas mat kar. Tunemeri first kiss kharab kardi Shiva, kitni pyari imagine ki thi maine ter sathpar tune kharab kardi’ she pouted like a kid and fake cried.
Shiva was amazed.They were having such an intense conversation minutes ago, they shared such anintense kiss and what she was worried about? Her first kiss which got ruined.
He got up and pulledher up to his level, he pulled her closer to him by her waist. ‘Shiva kya karraha hai tu? Hum ladai kar rahe the na? Kiss toh kharab kar hi di ab ladai tohdhang se kar’ she huffed.
Shiva smiled at hercuteness and their relationship. He cupped her cheek with the free hand andplaced his lips on hers, their eyes closed on their accord. Raavi clutched hisshoulder as the proximity was making her weak on her knees. Shiva pressed hislips with hers for a few seconds before sucking her lower lip. Raavi too tookhis upper lip and sucked it lovingly, her hands went to his hair and pulledthem.
They both kissed eachother’s lips simultaneously and enjoyed the smooth yet passionate kiss. Theybroke when they felt the need of air. Their foreheads joined and both pantingfor air.
‘Le teri first kiss.’Shiva managed to speak.
A blushing smileformed on Raavi’s lips. ‘Thank you’ she said.
‘Kitna thank youbolegi?’ he asked, remembering her diary.
‘Jitna bolu utna kamhai Shiva.’ she replied but suddenly remembered the early situation ‘Shiva yehkya tha? Tune choose kar liya tha na? Phir kyu aya vapis? Goodbye kiss dene?’ sheteased.
‘Good bye kiss kariwaz nahi hai hamare yaha Raavi. Pehli kiss promise thi ki agar tune phir durjane ki baat kari toh bhi jane nahi dunga, marna hai mar le lekin chod kar nahijana. Or dusri kiss promise hai hamari nayi life ki start ka jo ki mix hogiteri fairytale or meri junglee pan se’ he told her honestly.
‘Shiva’ Raavicouldn’t complete it as she was feeling very emotional.
Shiva kept his fingeron her lips ‘sshh. I am sorry Raavi. Mujhe laga ki tu mujhe nahi chahti sirfzindagi se compromise kar rahi hai isliye main dur ja raha tha. Mujhe us diaryse utna bura nahi laga kyuki main janta hu usme jo likha tha vo tu sabko batachuki hai lekin bura mujhe is baat ka laga ki shayad main vo nahi hu jise tupasand kare. PAr teri diary padne ke baad ehsas hua ki tu sympathy nahi karrahi thi mujhpe sach mein mujhse…’ Raavi cut him in between as she wanted tocomplete ‘Pyar karti hu Shiva.
HAmesha se tu hi haior aage bhi tu hi rahega. Bas Choti vali Raavi farak nahi kar pai Dev or Shivamein, lekin badi Raavi ko ehsas ho gaya ki bachpan se hi tu hai. Meri duniyatere hi ird gird ghoomti hai. Vo toh bas Dev ki kindness dekhkar laga ki voacha hai. Lekin shhukar hai Bholenaath ne bacha lia or khara sona mujhe de dia.Bholenaath ne mujhse aajtak sab kuch cheena hi hai lekin tujhe dekar unhone harek bat ko compensate kar dia Shiva. Main har din unhe thank you bolti hu kiunhone tujhe mere liye banaya. I love you Shiva’ she screamed happily.
‘I love you Raavi.Sahi kaha tune meri bhi zindagi tere hi aage piche ghumti hai, bas maami kinafrat ne patti bandh di thi. Main bhi Bholenath ko thank you kehta hu ki sahiwaqt pe unhone plan badal dia or tujhe meri bahon mein bhej dia varna kon bantimeri Gauri, kon bardasht kar pati mujhe?’ He spoke honestly.
Raavi held his collarand said dangerously ‘Aaj bol dia aage mat bol dio. Mere alava na koi thi na hihogi. Teri Gauri sirf main hu. Or mera Shiva sirf tu’ she spoke blushing.
He smiled. She lookedin his eyes and took his lips for another kiss.
Shiva broke the kiss‘Dekh. ghar chalte hai. Main yaha kuch nahi kar paunga. Samajh na’ he saidlooking at the surroundings.
Raavi blushedlistening to him, she pecked his lips and pulled him towards the bike. ‘Chaljaldi phir.’
‘Bahut jaldi ho rahihai tujhe’ Shiva teased her igniting the bike. Raavi held him tightly andspoke ‘Itna hot husband itne time tak resist kar liya, ab bhi jaldi na ho kya?Huh’ she spoke blushing but bold at the same time.
‘Acha ji?’ he spokeand she snuggled more into him, he took her hand which rested on his chest andkissed it.
They reached home andShiva applied some ice on the area where he found a bit of redness, Raaviprotested but he didn’t listen as now he had full right on her.
Later the nightwitnessed the union of two souls.
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So, how was it guys?
I hope you guys likeit.
Will see you soonwith other stories.
Woohoo. A great ending with them realizing it has been only them from childhood
Outstanding 😍😍😍😍 superb 😍❤️👌 loved it ❤️
love love love
just caught up on all the parts, and this story is so beautiful
I always love raavi fighting for shiva and vice versa and you showed that so amazingly
I'll have to say my favorite part was the kiss ☺️ and raavi complaining about it and Shiva giving her another one ☺️ raavi complain more please 🤣🤣
amazing story jaan 🤗