ShiVi ts : aur bardaasht nahi hota!!! (Part 3- page 3) - Page 2

This is getting interesting.

Poor Raavi. 😭

di agar usse guilty feel hoga toh woh kud aakar sorry bolega.... Par mujhe pata hai yeh kabhi nahi hoga..... Shiva ke aankhon mein mere liye nafrat ka parda hai woh mujhe raavi nahi mami ki behan ki beti ki tara dekhta hai (hurt) ..... Aur abb toh meri masi bhi mujhe raavi nahi balki Shiva ki patni ki tara dekhti hai!!!!

This hit me. 🥺

Shiva n Maami should realize how they messed up Raavi's feelings.

Update the next part soon.

Raavi was so broken 😭.. feeling bad for her

Shiva and mammi both now feeling guilty.. i just hope they reconcile their things for Raavi at least😛

Waiting for more

So emotional😭and heart wrenching💔

Read both parts

It was emotional😭

Poor Raavi, she is so hurt😭

Shiva and Maami are responsible for her state, both care for their fight than Raavi😡

Hoping Raavi will not forgive them easily

Let's see what Dhara wants to talk about

Loved both chapters ❤️❤️❤️

Poor Raavi 😢😢

Waiting for next update 😊😊

Poor Raavi!! She went through so much pain!! 💔😭

Interesting one!!!

I too want Raavi to outburst for once in show

This face must be shown (She is already too hurt and the way Pandya family story progress they always sway her emotions lets see if something sensible happens in show)

Right now I enjoyed your story and really want something sensible like this in real plot too

Keep writing waiting for next chapter

Everything is getting messed up for Ravi.No one is giving her time to heal but keeps on giving new wounds loved it.

Part 3: Promise

Shiva pov...

Bhabhi took us to her room...... Both mami and I were standing away from each other....

Dhara - mujhe bass ek sawal ka jawab chahiye?? (Calmly)

We nodded

Dhara - kya app dono ko raavi ki parwa hai???

We both were shock..... Why is bhabhi asking this question..... Of course humne raavi ki parwa hai!!!

Prafulla- dhara yeh tu kya bol rahi hai..... Obviously mujhe raavi ki parwa hai.... Beti hai woh meri!!!! (Calmly)

Dhara - par dikhta nahi ki app uski parwa karti hai... Nahi toh usse itni chot nahi pochati!!! (Sternly)

Mami put her head down in shame!!!

Dhara - aur tujhe Shiva...... Tujhe raavi ki parwa hai???(A big angry)

I just keep looking at her....!!!!

Abb kya kahu ki ha mujhe raavi ki parwa hai..... Ha uske asu mujhe effect karte hai!!!!

Dhara - Shiva bata kya tujhe raavi ki parwa hai??? (Angrily)

I nodded

Dhara - mu se bol..... Kya tujhe raavi ki parwa hai?? (Angrily shouting)

Shiva - ha mujhe raavi ki parwa hai!!!!

Dhara - abb dono ko raavi ki parwa hai, app dono raavi se pyaar karte hoon....

I look at bhabhi shockingly..... I never told that I love her..... I just told that I care of her...... Yes I wouldn't denied that nowadays I have started developing feelings of her....... Bt love??? Love is a very big word..... I dont know do I really love her??..... We have just started taking little steps in this relationship!!!!

Dhara bhabhi look at me and continue...

Dhara - agar parwa hai toh pyaar bhi hoga...... Aur agar app dono raavi ki khushi chahte hoon toh app dono ko aapas mein ladaee karna ban karna hoga ......

Both mami n I look at bhabhi shockingly n then to each other....

It was almost an impossible thing..... Mami and Shiva staying together with fighting was like india and Pakistan staying at peace, (its just a thought,dont take it personally) which is almost an impossible task!!!!!

Dhara - pata hai ki salo ki dushmani hai, jo ek din mein katam nahi hoga.... Par try toh karna parega na..... Kab thak hum raavi ko ase bich mein pisne denge..... Raavi ko apne dono parivaar ka saath chahiye.... Raavi ko apne masi aur Shiva, dono ke saath rehna hai.... Ek ke saath nahi!!!!!

Mami and I were just looking at each other....

Yes raavi hold a very important place for both of us.... She is so much dear to us.... Her tears affect us.... She was in that situation because of us.... Bt than 10 years ki dushmani, kadwahat kaise bhula du..... Jo bhi mami ne mere family ke saath kiya kaise bhul jau.....!!!!!

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Already 2 hours has passed, bt still raavi is unconscious..... I was getting sacred.... I was just roaming around my room...

Gautam- Shiva bet (sit) ja...... Raavi ko kuch nahi hoga...... Dawai ka asar hai aur kuch nahi.... Jaldi hosh aa jayega!!!

Prafulla- pichle do ghante se tu yahi bol raha hai ki dawai ka asar ha ......par dekh na gombi raavi abhi toh nahi utti!!!! (Crying)

Suman - oi prafulla shant reh.... Kuch nahi hoga meri raavi ko (scared)

Rishita - maa chai!!!!

Then rishita bhabhi gave the tea to everybody...

Rishita - Shiva chai?? (Giving the cup)

Shiva - nahi bhabhi..... Nahi chahiye!!!!

Rishita - mami chai???

Prafulla- nahi chahiye!!!!!

Rishita bhabhi was leaving bt then dhara bhabhi took the tea cup n gave to me and mami

Dhara - dono ko raavi ki bohot fikar hai..... Toh phir woh kyu nahi karte jisse raavi ko khushi mile!!!

I look at bhabhi.... She gave me the tea.... At first I denied bt she force me.... N the same thing she did with mami....

I knew all were trying to remain normal bt I knew that all were very scared!!!

I couldn't stay here anymore or maybe I feel like checking raavi once

Shiva - bhabhi mein raavi ko dekhkar aata hoon!!! (Tens)

I didn't wait for bhabhi reply..... I just want to my room

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As I enter the room , I saw her trying to reach the side table...... I run to her n hold her

Shiva - kya kar rahi hai??? (Concerned)

At first she look at me shockingly n slowly her eyes got teary .... She push me

Raavi- ja yaha se??? (Hurt)

I knew she was hurt..... Her voice was the evidence...

Shiva - nahi jaunga!!!!

Then I help her to lay down on the bed!!!

Raavi- kyu nahi jayega..... Tujhe toh khush hona chahiye na...!!! (Hurt)

May heart broke hearing her voice.... She was so much in pain.... I have emotional kill her!!!

Shiva- ra.....

Raavi- nahi Shiva aur nahi please..... Mein already thak chuki hoon...... Tu please yaha se ja , mujhe akele rehna hai.... Aur waise bhi tune aur masi ne toh Faisla le liya hai na toh abb kyu aya hai yaha par.... Yeh dekhne ke liye ki mein zinda hoon ya maar gayi??? (Broken)

My heart broke listening to her statement..... Did she really thought I will come to see whether she has die or not!!! .... Suddenly my hurt was replace by my angry...... How dare she even think of that.... Doesn't she know me??? Bt I have to calm now..... Right now she is broken n I have to be there for her...... I can't go on hurting her with my angry...... N so I calm myself...

Raavi- Shiva..... Abb tu mujhe divorce dega??? (Broken)

There was a unknown feeling when she ask me this question.... Or maybe I didn't want to name this feeling!!!!! I did knew the answer..... Bt right now I need to fix something else.....

N so I left her n went out

Flashback

Dhara - pata hai raavi ne mandir mein kya kaha??? (Shouting)

Both mami n I got confused.... What is bhabhi talking about??

Dhara- raavi andar se maar rahi hai!!!!!! Usse abb aur bardaasht nahi ho raha!!!!! (Crying)

Mami n I look at each other shockingly

Prafulla- dhara kya bol rahi hai saaf saaf bata..... (Tens)

Then bhabhi told us everything that raavi told her in the mandir

Dhara - raavi ko apne dono parivaar ke saath rehna hai.... Apne masi aur Shiva dono ke saath.... Usse ek ka saath nahi chahiye... Abb dono ka saath chahiye.... Kya abb dono uski yeh wish puri nahi kar sakte???

We didn't reply anything

Dhara - mujhe toh daar lagta hai ki sayad raavi phir se woh kadam na utta le!!! (Fearfully)

No this can't happen????

On her wedding day when she try to suicide..... We all were shock by her act n were every sacred for her ...... I never wish to see her in that situation ever again ..... Still remember I was so scared when I find found hanging !!!!! Her imagine brings goosebumps ...

Dhara - mein bass app dono se yahi binti karti hoon ki please raavi ke bare mein sochiye!!!!!

Flashback end

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

Yeh again Shiva left me..... He don't care even though I cry, shout or faint..... For him his ego his bigger than anything else....

Yesterday night when he save me from the boys, I thought that he has change , I thought he care for me, I thought our relationship is changing ..... Bt no I was wrong!!

Since childhood I try many times to change our equation , thought he was always angry on me I always try to maintain a friendly relationship..... I hoped with time he will see me as raavi and not as his mami ki behan ki beti bt no I was wrong..... He will never change.... For him his ego is more important than our relationship . ...

I was busy on my thoughts when I heard a knock on my door....

I saw everyone coming in the home..... All look very tens..... Masi maa sat beside my right side n dhara di in my left

Prafulla- kaise hai raavi??? (Concerned)

I saw that masi maa was very concerned for me... Bt I just ignore her

Raavi- dhara di mujhe jana hai !!!!!

All got shock....

Dhara - kaha jana hai???? (Tens)

Suman - raavi Tu kahi nahi jayegi..... Tu pandya parivaar ki bahu hai.... Tujhe hum kahi bhi jane nahi denge!!!!

Gautam- maa ne bilkul theek bola!!! (Caring my hair)

Raavi- nahi mein yaha par nahi reh paungi!!!!

Shiva - kyu daar gayi kya???

Shiva came inside the room..... I look at him angrily..

Raavi- daar woh bhi tujhe!!!!! (Irritated)

Shiva - kyu daar ke hi toh bhagh rahi hai na...???

Is he stupid???? He himself told he don't want me then now....

Raavi- mein koyi daari waari nahi hoon..... Aur mein kyu darungi??? (In regular tone)

Shiva - nahi tu jane ki baat kar rahi thi na toh socha sayad mujhse daar kar bhagh rahi hai!!!!

Raavi- oi Shiva..... Bhaag mein nahi rahi Tu mujhe bhaaga raha hai....!!!!! (Hurt)

Shiva- toh phir thik hai..... Abb mein hi tujhe bol raha hoon ki abb tu kahi nahi ja rahi..... Teri freedom cancel!!! (Chuckle)

I look at him confusingly...... Is this boy gone insane???

I saw everyone had the same expression...

Shiva - meine soch liya hai ki abb mujhe teri saath rehkar tujh par hukum chalana hain.... Isliye abb tu kahi nahi ja sakti ..... Aur rahi baat mami ki toh thik hai ajj se mein usse ladaee karna avoid karunga!!!!

We look at him with wide eyes ....... Was this boy the real Shiva Or m I imagining??

Dhara di went n hug Shiva.....

Dhara - finally tune meri baat sun li !!! (Smiling)

Kya baat??

Raavi- dhara di kya baat??? (Suspiciously)

Shiva - yeh bhabhi aur dever ki secret baatein hai... Tujhe kyu bataye!!!!

Raavi- Shiva!!!!! (Annoyed)

All laugh at me...

Shiva - i m sorry I know mein app sabko bohot hurt kiya hai...... Specially raavi (we both look at each other n have a small eye lock) mujhe woh sab nahi bolna chahiye tah..... I know meine kaafi hurt kiya hai tujhe.... Tere liye decision bhi le liya.... I m sorry!!!! (Guilty)

I look at him..... He was really guilty.... He was ashamed of his actions.... It was clear in his eyes, how much he feel guilty after telling all that..... His apology was so true , no filter nothing just direct to the point....

Suman- tune apni galti maan liya wohi kaafi hai... Maaf kar diya hai humne!!!! (Smiling)

All nodded

Then suddenly masi got up ..

Prafulla- sorry!!!! (Guilty)

We all were shock, masi telling sorry.... That also to the pandyas was shocking!!!

Prafulla- bohot hurt kiya hai meine app Sabko.... Specially meri beti raavi ko..... Raavi Tu meri beti hai.... Aur teri khushi ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakti hoon..... Tune ajj subha mujhse ek vada liya tha na.... (I remember asking her not to fight with Shiva n so I nodded) toh thik hai mein woh vada pura karungi.... Ajj se mein Shiva ne ladaee karna chod dungi (we all look at her with wide eyes) ... Mere liye teri khushi se zyada kuch important nahi hai.... (Hugging me)

I look at her with teary eyes..... I knew it was difficult for her.... Telling sorry to pandyas n declaring not to fight with Shiva...... I hugged her back...

Then the next thing that she did shock me

She took our her bangles..... The kangan for which all this drama happen..

Prafulla- is kangan ki wajah se tere aankhon mein asu aaye na..... Mein yeh kangan nahi pan sakti.... (Then she went towards maa) suman behan yeh apki amanat !!!! (Giving her the kangan)

Suman - prafulla..... (Shock)

Prafulla- nahi Suman behan mein jaan gayi hoon ki mere liye meri raavi se zyada kuch kimti nahi hai.... Na yeh kangan na mera ego!!!!!

I couldn't handle , I went n hug masi....

I knew the kangan was so much dear for her , thought she took that in an inappropriate way still she love that.... Bt today she return it to maa for me!!!!

Raavi - masi I love u.....!!!! ( I kissed her cheek)

Prafulla- I love u too!!!! (Kissing my cheek)

Krish - that means ajj se no Shiva v/s mami!!! (Making a pout)

Prafulla and Shiva - asa nahi hai!!!! (Together)

We all look at them....

Dev- abhi toh kaha na!!!! (Confusingly)

Shiva - meine avoid karunga kaha..... Ladaee karna chod dunga yeh nahi kaha!!! (Annoyed)

Prafulla- aur agar Shiva avoid karega toh mein bhi sirf avoid karungi..... Ladaee nahi karungi, iski garantee mein nahi le sakti!!!

Shiva - Tu phir se meri acting kar rahi hai mami!!! (Annoyed)

Prafulla- aa Shiva meine teri acting kab kiya!!!!

This two will never stop fighting....... Bt its k.... I can't even imagine masi n Shiva not fighting, can u???? ..... It's just that I dont want their fights to be big..... I dont want to be a refri in their fight!!!!

We all chuckle looking at them arguing!!!!!

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I was looking at the window when I heard Shiva entering the room...

Shiva - oi chipkali Tu waha kyu beti (sit)hai ..... Chal bed par aa ja ..... Mein tere liye khaana lekar aaya hoon... Yeh kha aur dawai ka kar so ja!!!!

I didn't reply..... I just kept looking him....

Shiva - kya huwa ase kyu dekh rahi hai???

Raavi- thank u!!!!!!

Shiva look at me with wide eyes..... Next he came n sat beside me!!!!!

Shiva - Tu thik toh hai... Bukhar toh nahi hai??? (Cheeking my forehead) bukhar toh nahi phir yeh thank u kis kiye!!! (Laughing)

I got irritated!!!

Raavi- Tu abb bhi mazak kar raha hai!!! (Irritated)

Shiva - k thik hai.... Chal bata kya baat hai??

Raavi- thank u so much ki tune mujhe choda nahi aur masi maa se bhi sulah kar liya!!! (Smiling)

Shiva - pehli baat toh meine mami se sirf deal kiya hai ki hum dono avoid karenge, par ladaee nahi karenge yeh garantee nahi liya..... Aur dusri baat mein tujhe kyu chodunga??..... Mana ki Tu chipkali hai, chipakti hai par jo bhi hai meri hai!!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- huh????

Shiva -(thinking) yeh kya bol diya!!!!!

Shiva - I mean abb toh tu..... Woh......chal jaldi khaana kha aur so ja!!!!

Then he brought the food n start feeding me

Raavi- mein kud kha lungi !!!

Shiva - mein khila kara hoon na .... Chup chap kha!!! (Annoyed)

I make a pout n start eating..... After eating the food he feed me the medicine n pick me in bridal style n lay me down on the bed..

Shiva - abb tu so ja aur chinta maat kar...... Mein tujhe kabhi akela nahi chodunga!!!!

Raavi - promise???

Shiva - ha promise!!! (Smiling)

N that day I realised that whatever situation is coming in future Shiva will always be by my side n I by his side.... N it's a promise

Raavi pov end

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So this is the end of my story...... I so wish they end this kangan drama fast..... Till the kangan drama is solve , I think shivi progression will be very slow

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