ShiVi ts : aur bardaasht nahi hota!!! (Part 3- page 3)

This is basically a two -three shot on my favorite couple shivi.... After watching the precap of tomorrow episode I got an idea..... Don't know how the makers are going to show in the serial.... Bt i feel it should be somehow like this!!!

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Part 1- mujhe chodna itna aasan hai kya ??

Raavi pov...

I couldn't believe what I heard!!!!!!

Shiva - agar mein ajj bina kangan ke gaya toh raavi bhi mere saath nahi jayegi!!!!

Was Shiva really serious??? Was he really gonna leave me for that kangan???

I knew the kangan was really important for him... Bt is the kangan more important than his wife?? Forget about his wife!!! Is the kangan more important than a human????

I was broken..... I was hurt.... My own masi maa the woman who love me so much was fighting with my husband.... N my husband who has nothing bt hatred for me was giving her warning that he will leave her daughter!!!!!!

Kya mujhe chodna itna asan hai????

I was busy on my thoughts when I heard both of them shouting...

Prafulla - tu sach mein is kangan ke liye meri beti ko chod dega?? (Shock)

Shiva - iss kangan ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.... Kuch bhi!!!! (Angrily glaring at masi)

Raavi- mujhe maar bhi sakta hai!!!!! (Broken voice)

All look at me ......

Dhara - yeh kya bol rahi hai raavi?? (Shock)

Raavi- nahi dhara di..... Ajj toh faisla kar hi lete hai.... Bata Shiva iss kangan ke liye maar dega mujhe!!!! (Shouting)

He look at me shockingly!!!!

Raavi- itna shock kyu ho raha hai??? Mujhse chutkara toh chahiye na.... Toh puri taara se chutkara le na..... Chod ne se better hai maar hi do , atleast meri shakal dekhni toh nahi milegi!!! (Angrily shouting)

Prafulla- a raavi kya bol rahi hai??? (Shock)

Raavi- masi app toh rehne hi do.... App bhi toh yahi chahti hai na!!!! (Angrily)

Prafulla - yeh tu kya bol rahi hai!!!

Masi try to come near me bt I show her my hand

Raavi- ha masi thik bol rahi hoon mein.... !!!!

I couldn't say anything as I was already crying.... Dhara di came near me and hold me..

Dhara- bass raavi.. Maat ro , hum ghar jakar baat karenge!!! (Consoling)

Raavi- kon sa ghar??..... Mera koyi ghar nahi hai!!! (Broken)

Gautam - raavi abhi tu thik nahi hai chal ghar!!!

Raavi- nahi gombi mera koyi ghar nahi hai..... (Then I look at Shiva) aur jo ghar tha na woh bhi nahi raha.... Abb mein waha jakar kya karungi!!! (Crying)

Suman - asa kyu bol rahi hai raavi beta.... Hum sab hai na!!! (Sadly)

Raavi- nahi maa.... Mein thak gayi hoon humesha masi aur Shiva ke bich piste huwa (crying)... Humesha sirf ladaee karte hai.... Ek dusre ko kitna kuch sunate hai..... Kabhi yeh nahi sochte ki raavi ko kaisa lagta hai..... Sirf kud ki hi fikar hai un dono ko...meri toh feeling hi nahi hai!!!!

Prafulla- nahi raavi asa nahi hai!!! (Guilty)

Raavi- asa hi hai masi maa..... Agar abb ki side se kuch bolu toh Shiva ko lagta hai mein apki side hoon aur agar Shiva ki taraf se kuch bolu toh apko lagta hai mein uski side le rahi hoon.... Toh akir mein karu toh kya karu!!! (Crying)

Dhara - raavi....

Raavi- nahi dhara di ajj please mujhe maat rokiye.... Mein thak gayi hoon... Mujhse abb aur bardaasht nahi hota....!!!! (Broken down)

I kneel down n started crying..... Masi maa and Anita di try to come bt I stop them.... Dhara di n gombi hold me...

Raavi- (hugging her)dhara di kya mujhe choda itna aasan hai ki Sab mujhe chod dete hai..... App ne kaha tha na ki mujhe meri khushiyaan milegi.... Toh phir kyu abhi thak nahi mile!!!! Kya mein khushi deserve nahi karti (crying ) .....

Dhara - tujhe teri khushiyaan zaroor milegi!!!! (Consoling)

Raavi- kab milega??? Aur kon dega??? Woh jo ek kangan ke liye mujhe chodne ko bhi ready hai???

I look at Shiva..... He put his head down !!!

Raavi- abb toh mujhe meri khushi kabhi nahi milegi ..... Mein khushi deserve hi nahi karti....!!!! (Crying)

I stood up n look at everyone!!!! I straight away went to Shiva and masi...

Raavi- mein koyi khilona nahi hoon ki app dono khelo..... Mujhe na apki zaroorat hai (looking at masi) aur na hi teri (looking at Shiva) .... Itni hi problem hai na tujhe toh phir thik hai chali jaati hoon (angrily) par apke pass nahi aaungi masi

Shiva for the first time look at me!!!

Gautam- yeh kya bol rahi hai raavi?? (Tens)

Raavi- nahi gombi bohot problem ho rahi hai na in dono ko..... Meri wajah se ek dusre ko bardaasht kar rahe hai.... Toh phir thik hai jab wajah hi nahi rehegi toh bardaasht nahi karna parega!!!!

I run from there..... I heard all calling my name bt I didn't want to stay there any longer!!!

Raavi pov end

Dhara - app toh khush ho gaye na app dono.!!!! Shanti mil gayi ya phir kuch aur bhi karna hai (Angrily) ...... Aur tu Shiva tune soch bhi kaise liye ki tu raavi ko chodega.....!!!!! (Angrily hitting him)

Gautam- dhara samal kud ko..... Abhi Shiva ko chod aur raavi ko dekh..... Chal humein uske saath rehna hai!!! (Consoling)

Prafulla- mein bhi Chalti hoon !!! (Tens)

Dhara - nahi mami.... Apne already meri bachi ko kaafi hurt kiya hai.... Mein nahi chahti ki woh apko dekhkar aur hurt ho jaye!!!! (Sternly)

Then dhara n gautam run after raavi !!!

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Shiva pov....

I just couldn't believe what I heard right now!!! Raavi was very hurt by my words..... The words which I never mean!!!! I just told mami that because I knew mami loves raavi alot so I was sure she will return the kangan..... I never thought that it will lead to this....

Raavi tears were effecting me..... I couldn't bear the fact that she was crying only because of me... When did our relationship progress so much that my words effected her and her tears effected me????

I hurt raavi badly...

Suman - shanti mil gayi na tum dono ko!!!!! Khush ho gaye na uss bachi ko rula kar??? Na abhi thak maan bara nahi??? (Angrily).... Prafulla woh teri beti hai, apni beti ke baare mein ek baar bhi nahi socha tune ki usse kaisa lagega ya phir usse dard pochega!!!! Par tujhe kya bolu jab mera beta hi usse chot pocha raha hai (ashamed)..... Aur ha Shiva tujhe kya laga ki agar yeh kangan nahi degi toh hum raavi ko jaane denge, kabhi nahi woh pandya parivaar ki bahu hai usse hum kahi nahi jaane dete.... Mere liye meri bahu iss kangan se bhi zyada kimti hai.... Agar iss kangan ki wajah se raavi ke aakhon mein asu hai toh nahi chahiye mujhe ase kangan!!!!

I look at everyone guilty..... I have really hurt everyone.... N specially raavi!!!!

I couldn't help bt cry silently!!!!!

Shiva pov

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ohmygod!! this was so emotional😭

felt bad for raavi. but both massi and shiva doesn't deserve her. i really hated when shiva said he will not take raavi with him😡

excited to read next part

Honestly ,I kind of had the same idea of Raavi running away due to the whole mental torture. Had even plans to write a ss on this story but since u have portrayed it so beautifully ,I don't think I should write it now. This was so emotional 😥

I was😡 at shiva when he uttered those words....but masi is more responsible for this situation....she instigated him so much even after the fight. ..

she keeps on calling her my bachi and still can't return the kangan which are rightfully suman's for raavi....Anita and mami don't have any feelings for her coz they are still planning and plotting which can be bad for raavi....

this doesn't mean that shiva can speak like that....even when he didn't mean it....this hurts so much....

I so wanted to read something on precap! This is so good waiting for more ❤️

Loved it...❤️

Wanted to read something on this ... thanks🤗

Raavi's heartbreak was so emotional 😭

Loved Raavi , Dhara and suman gave reality check to both 👏

I want Raavi to not forgive them easily... they should first try to understand her pov 🤔

Waiting for further update

Loved it. ❤️

My heart is reaching out to poor Raavi. She is in so much of pain. 😭

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon.

I want something similar to happen in the show.. I completely understand where Shiva is coming from, but he hasn’t bothered to ask his mothers if she wants the Kangan back..

Suman herself said she doesn’t want them, because then they would have to reveal that her brother is thief...

I want Raavi to get the Importance that she deserves...

Her emotions have been neglected enough

This was soooo good…

I feel soo bad for Raavi..

But I am glad she has spoken…

Cant wait to read the next chapter..

Part 2: mujhe meri fighting ninja chahiye!!!

Raavi pov...

Bohot bardaasht kar liya??? Abb aur nahi.... Un dono ko samajhna hoga ki meri bhi feelings hai.... Aur unko meri feelings ki value karni paregi!!!!! Aur agar nahi kar sakte hai toh mujhe bhi nahi rehna unke saath!!!!

I was hurt..... I was broken..... How can Shiva and masi make decision for me without asking me!!!!

Aren't they treating me like a doll.... Both of them want to play with my feelings!!!! Both of them just want to rule me... I was crying!!!! I was hurt very hurt..

I was sitting at the temple..... The same temple where dhara di told me that I will get back my happiness!!!!!

Dhara - raavi!!!!! (Shouting)

Gautam- raavi!!!! Kaha hai tu!!!!! (Shouting)

Dhara di and gombi were very scared..... I could guess it from their voice..... But I didn't had the strength to call them I was very tired !!!

I closed my eyes n remember my marriage day!!!

The day when all my dreams broke ... The day when I lost all my happiness.... It was not only the end of my fairy tail world bt also the raavi inside me die that day....

Dhara - yaha par hai tu!!!!

I open my eyes to see dhara di n gombi staring at me.... Their face look relief looking at me...

Dhara - (hugging me) ase koyi jata hai kya??? Pata hai hum kitna daar gaye teh!!! (With broken voice)

I look at her with teary eyes!!!

Gautam - pata nahi kya kahu tujhe..... Bass itna keh sakta hoon ki maff karde humein.... Jo hum teri feelings ko nahi samajh sake!!! (Guilty)

Raavi- nahi gombi apko guilty feel karne ki koyi zaroorat nahi hai!!!! Apki galti nahi hai!!!

Dhara - par Shiva ki toh hai na.....!!!!

Raavi- di agar usse guilty feel hoga toh woh kud aakar sorry bolega.... Par mujhe pata hai yeh kabhi nahi hoga..... Shiva ke aankhon mein mere liye nafrat ka parda hai woh mujhe raavi nahi mami ki behan ki beti ki tara dekhta hai (hurt) ..... Aur abb toh meri masi bhi mujhe raavi nahi balki Shiva ki patni ki tara dekhti hai!!!! ( broke)

I broke down once again !!!!!

Raavi- dhara di aur bardaasht nahi kar pa rahi hoon mein..... Nahi saha ja raha..... Dard hota hai jab asi situation mein fas jaati hoon.... Mein mere dono family ke saath rehna chahti hoon ek ke saath nahi..... I know yeh mumkin nahi hai par phir bhi atleast....... (Crying)

Dhara - (hugging her more tightly) bass bass aur nahi rona!!!! (Consoling her)

Raavi- dhara di mere andar hi raavi maar rahi hai.... Kuch ka...........

Suddenly everything went dark..... The last thing I heard was dhara di's voice

Raavi pov end

Dhara - raavi!!!! Raavi kya huwa tujhe?????(fearfully)...... Gombi raavi!!!!!(Crying)

Both gautam n dhara got panicked they call krish!!!

Gautam- hello krish...... Jaldi mandir ke pass ek car lekar poch.... Jaldi ...... Abhi time nahi hai kuch batane ke liye.... Aur dev ko bol doctor ko call kare aur haveli par lekar aaye..... Ha ha sab theek hai...... Woh raavi behosh ho gayi hai jaldi aa!!!!

Gautam cut the call..... Dhara was continuously crying...

Gautam- dhara kuch nahi hoga hamari raavi ko.... Himat rakh!!! (Consoling)

Dhara - gombi bohot daar lag raha hai.... Kya mein yeh shadi karakar acha kiya??? Mujhe raavi ki yeh halat nahi dekhi ja rahi!!! (Crying)

Gautam- dhara kuch nahi hoga..... Aur rahi baat shadi ki toh woh toh Somnath hi jaante hai!!! (Consoling)

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Shiva pov

I was feeling very guilty for my words.....

Meine kaafi hurt kiya hai!!!!!

All look at me disappointed..... Mami was continuous crying n anita was consoling her...

Prafulla- meri raavi kaha chali gayi!!!!! (Crying)

Anita - fui sambhalo apne app ko..... Kuch nahi hoga hamari raavi ko!!! (Consoling)

Suman - aa prafulla rona ban kar gombi aur dhara gaye hai na !!! (Tens)

Ring ring... Krish got a call

Krish - gombi ka call hai!!!!!

I was tens.....

I hope unhein raavi mil jaye!!!!

Krish - hello gombi........ Par kyu...... Reason toh batao.... K thik hai..... Doctor ki kya zaroorat sab thik hai na.... (We all got tens) ..... Raavi bhabhi behosh ho gayi!!! (Shock)

My heart broke ...... For the first time I was scared, scared to lost raavi .......... I was broken I just wanted to run to her....

Krish - mein abhi aa raha hoon!!!! (Tens)

Then he cut the call

Krish - maa !!! Raavi bhabhi mandir mein behosh ho gayi hai.... Mein ja raha hoon!!! Aur dev Tu doctor ko call kar aur haveli bula.....app log bhi haveli aa jao (Tens)

Telling this he run...... I needed to be with her..... Mujhe raavi ke pass hona hoga!!!!! I run behind krish!!!

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We reach the temple..... Krish was also angry at me... At first he didn't wanted to take me.... Bt then I please him so much n so he took me with him...

We reach upside..... I saw raavi lying in dhara bhabhi lap..... While bhabhi n gombi was rubbing her hands!!!

Dhara - raavi utt na!!!! (Crying)

Gombi saw both of us.....

Krish n I run towards them.... Bt then..

Dhara - wahi rukh ja shiva....... Yaha aane ki koyi zaroorat nahi hai!!!!! (Shouting)

I stood there numb..... Krish went towards raavi..

Dhara - chalo raavi ko utta kar car mein le jao!!!

I saw bhabhi,krish and gombi were trying to pick up raavi..... I went to help them..

Dhara - kaha na raavi se dur reh!!!! (Angrily shouting)

I wanted to cry looking at raavi.... I was broken seeing her face...... I was just wishing to go back to past and change everything ..... I wish I could erase all her pain....

I stood there watching them....

Krish - Shiva jaldi aa!!! (Shouting)

I came out of my thoughts n went towards them.... I wanted to sit with raavi bt then I sit with krish in the front seat while gombi, bhabhi n raavi sit backside!!!!!

Yeh sab meri wajah se ho raha hai!!!!

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We reach the haveli in 15 minutes...... N then krish, gombi, bhabhi hold raavi n took her to our room .....

The doctor was already present there.... They lay down raavi on the bed....

Doctor sima - app sab log bahar wait kijiye !!!!

We all nodded n went out.....

Mami, anita n bhabhi were crying...... Krish, gombi, dev look tens, gombi was crying while rishita bhabhi was consoling her...... Bt I was broken..... Broken , I couldn't see her like this....

Mujhe yeh wali raavi pasand nahi hai..... Mujhe toh meri fighting ninja chahiye.... Jo sirf mujhse ladaee!!!

Dhara - agar raavi ko kuch bhi huwa na toh mein app dono ko kabhi maaf nahi rahungi !!! (Angrily shouting)

Both mami n I put our head down feeling guilty ...

After few minutes the doctor came....

Gautam- Doctor raavi thik toh hai?? (Tens)

Doctor - ji ha raavi bilkul theek hai.... Sayad stress ya phir unhone din baar kuch nahi khaya hoga isliye weakness ki wajah se behosh ho gayi..... Mein unhe injection de diya hai.... Kuch ghante mein hosh aa jayega ...... Aur yeh kuch medicines hai.... Hosh aane ke baat kuch Khilaye aur phir yeh medicines de dijiye!!

Gautam- ji doctor..... Dev doctor ko chod de!!!

Dev- ji gombi.....

Then the doctor went.....

I was going inside my room bt then ...

Dhara - mujhe app dono se kuch baat karni hai!!! (To mami n Shiva)

Both mami n I look at each other n then nodded...

Shiva pov . . . . . .