Loved it ❤️❤️ both parts are amazing 😍😍
Loving intense shivi 🥰🥰
Waiting for next 😊
Thank you🤗❤️
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Loved it ❤️❤️ both parts are amazing 😍😍
Loving intense shivi 🥰🥰
Waiting for next 😊
Thank you🤗❤️
Shivi are completely mad.
Shiva and rishita make me cringe, lol
thank you for the interference by god Vishnu😆❤️
Well yes ShiVi are mad😆
Shiva and Rishita doesn't inspire me as a couple, that's why I can't write their romance🤣🤣
Someone had to interfere😉
Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales
this is just awesome and conversation between god and goddess is increasing my curiosity to another level. both shiva and raavi are insane. love it
Yes they are insane😆
Originally posted by: lourel24
That was fabulous.Dev is playing with fire but I m so so so happy you brought this twist n made him do that. Now both are going to burnt in their decisions but at the same time know their feelings more.Dev n rishita are also on the way I guess.Your dev is brave here n I liked it .
Dev has to be brave here, he's one of the main character😆
thank you❤️
Loving it so far. Have re-read the all posts again and still can't believe what's happening. Loving the Gods twist and can I say you've made me want to read up about the Gods properly now. Are they based on fact or your imagination?
Thanks a lot
Well, everything about Gods here is the real thing. Not my imagination😆
I'd love some recommendations for good mythological books if that's the inspiration!!
Not exactly mythological books. There are many shows which tells you the story of these gods.
Like there's Mahadev and Mahakaali. Also there's the shows on Lord Vishnu and Goddess Lakshmi. You could find from google too.
These things are normal for me, as I have been listening their stories since childhood
Ps: can't wait for the next update
Originally posted by: MeeraWrites
Loved it.❤️
ShiVi in this story are so intense and fire.
What I liked the most is Gods discussing ShiVi.
Waiting for the next chapter....
thanks a lot🤗
i almost had a heart attack......rishita and shiva.....god.......but i found dem cute......
looking at rishita and her dad's history, i almost thought her to be a villain but den this is a story and she can be good......actually i liked shiva and rishita......and den i scolded myself for doing that......their story seemed adorable.....
god only u can interfere and make dem understand....god my palpitations.........
shiva is almost hitting dev 🤣
hey can u update this story today plz I have been waiting for ur update for a long time plz
Thank you all for supporting me and for all of your beautiful reviews. I didn't have time to reply to each one of you. Sorry for that. Here's the next part. Enjoy!!
Part 5
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Raavi took a deep breath trying to understand what's wrong with her. It was her childhood dream to marry Dev and now that the alliance is fixed she feels even more restless. Its as if she's losing something.
Chal Raavi taiyaar ho ja, bohot jaldi teri doli uthegi, aur seedha Pandya House hi land karegi.
Raavi smiled with difficulty at Anita's words and got down from the bed. She doesn't feel like going anywhere. She felt as if something is closing in on her, as if someone is choking her.
Dhara ka call aya tha, kal sagayi fix ki hai dono couples ki. Aur 3 din baad shaadi hai.
Raavi took in a deep breath as soon as Anita said that. Her heart hammered as she clenched her fists at the news. Something is seriously wrong with her.
Bohot saara kaam hai Raavi. Tu fatafat taiyaar ho, humein rings lene jaana hai, Dhara aur Gautam ke saath.
Raavi sighed and moved towards washroom to change. Enough is enough, she does want to marry Dev, then why the hell is she so restless?? No!! She'll enjoy her functions fully.
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Raavi smiled at the whole Pandya family as she saw them standing outside the jewelry shop. She greeted everyone with a wide smile, even Rishita and was just going inside the shop when she saw Shiva standing in front of her glaring at her.
Jitni khushiya manani hai mana le, adhuri hi rehne wali hain ye.
Raavi glared back at Shiva at his words. What does he even think of himself? Does he really think that he could stop her?? She would never let him control her.
Jitni koshish karni hai kar le, rok nahi payega tu mujhe.
Raavi said to him determined and moved back slightly as he got even more furious. But before he could say anything else they both heard Dhara bhabhi's voice.
Shiva! Raavi! Jaldi aao idhar.
Raavi decided to ignore Shiva for some time and sat beside Dev in front of the counter. She smiled slightly as Dev chose a ring for her but actually the ring looks too big for her hand. And she's really confused about the design. The ring is actually good but it's not her style.
Dev was just going to give the ring to the salesman when they all heard Shiva's voice.
Rishita tum khud choose karo, lifetime tumhe hi pehenni hai.
Shiva said pushing a ring box towards Rishita who's fortunately sitting just beside her and Raavi saw Dev shrugging lightly.
Actually Shiva is right.
Raavi sighed thanking her stars at Dev's words, she really doesn't want to wear the ring Dev chose for her. Raavi looked down at the ring box in front of her but sighed shaking her head in a no as all the rings are big in size. Raavi looked beside her at Rishita as she indicated Raavi to chose the ring from her box instead.
Raavi frowned with a sad look as she really didn't like any of the rings.
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Rishita rolled her eyes almost amused as she saw Raavi's sad face. It's not as if this is the only shop here. Rishita chose a ring for herself but frowned as she saw Shiva indicating something to the salesman with his eyes. What's going on??
That salesman brought another ring box and put it in front of Raavi and Rishita's eyes widened as she saw Raavi's face lit up as soon as she saw the rings inside it. What the hell!! It was as if Shiva exactly knew what Raavi wanted. Finally Raavi choose a ring and they all came out of the shop.
Ye kya majak tha?
Rishita whispered to Dev and Krish and saw them shrugging nonchalantly as if this doesn't even matter.
Bachpan se yahi chalta aa raha hai.
Krish said and Rishita rolled her eyes perplexed. How could a person hates and cares for another one at the same time??
Dev!!
Rishita stopped in her tracks as soon as she heard Raavi's shriek. What happened to her now?? Rishita sighed as Shiva glared at both Dev and Raavi as Raavi wound her arm around Dev's.
Haan kya hua Raavi?
Dev asked in a soft voice and Rishita grinned at his response. It's weird how calm this man is.
Ice cream!!
Even Rishita's face brightened as she saw ice cream parlor just across the road. She saw everyone shaking their heads as they all moved towards the parlor. Rishita gasped in shock as Shiva pushed Raavi as soon as she started having her ice cream. Rishita's eyes further widened as Raavi tried to bend down as her shawl along with the ice cream fell down on the pavement, but before Raavi could pick the shawl Shiva moved ahead crushing the shawl along with the ice-cream under his feet.
Oops sorry.
Rishita shook her head unable to comprehend what just happened as she saw Shiva looking at Raavi with a strange look of anger mixed with triumph. What the hell is wrong with him?? Why would he do this?? She looked at Raavi and sure enough the girl's eyes is filled with tears.
Raavi, I am sorry. I am sure Shiva ne intentionally nahi....
Rishita tried to handle the situation only to see Raavi looking down at the shawl with tears in her eyes.
Usey pata tha ki ye meri mumma ka last shawl tha phir bhi usne kharab kar diya.
Raavi said with a crestfallen look and Rishita looked at Shiva only to see his eyes darkened in anger. And she has no idea whom he's angry at. Rishita sighed and shook her head as Raavi ran to cross the road and Shiva continued to look at the shawl with furious eyes. She would never be able to understand this man.
Rishita shrugged having her ice cream but her eyes widened as she saw Raavi running across the road without even looking at the vehicles. Shit!! What the hell is she doing??
Raavi!!
She got startled at Shiva's almost panicked voice and managed to stopped herself from falling as Shiva ran pushing her slightly in the process. Rishita threw her ice cream in the dust bin as they all looked ahead panicked. She took a deep breath finally relaxed as Shiva pulled Raavi on the other side of the road just in the nick of the time. God!! She didn't know this girl has suicidal tendencies. And what's wrong with Shiva?? Why does he have to act so impulsively??
Oh shit!!
Rishita heard Krish's voice and saw Raavi losing her consciousness in Shiva's arms. They all crossed the road and Rishita saw Dev sitting in front of Raavi with a tensed look.
Dev!! Raavi ko leke chal.
Gaumbi said in a stern voice and Dev picked up Raavi while Shiva moved back but not before she saw the glare he shot at Dev. Rishita took a deep breath as Dev took Raavi in an auto along with Maami and Anita di.
Chalo Shiva, kya hua?
Rishita asked as she saw Shiva still standing like a statue and looking towards the ice cream parlor.
Tum chalo main aata hu.
Rishita frowned slightly but moved towards where the Pandya family stood as she doesn't want to argue with Shiva. She turned around to look at him and frowned slightly as she saw Shiva going to the ice cream parlor again. Now what happened to him?? She shook her head and moved ahead again. She has no idea if she would ever be able to understand Shiva or not.
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Goddess Lakshi sighed as her husband, Lord Vishnu, laughed out loud at whatever just transpired between Raavi and Shiva. Their emotions are raw, and she just can't understand how they'll ever understand each other's importance in their lives. And why is her husband laughing like a maniac??
Aap hans kyu rahe hain??
She asked confused about what's going on.
Dil ka dard hai Shree, chhupta bhi nahi aur dikhta bhi nahi.
Goddess Lakshmi shook her head at how emotionless her husband is behaving. Can't he see how much Shiva has hurt the girl??
Wo bacchi sach me dard me hai bhrata.
Lakshmi looked ahead as she saw her best friend Parvati standing in front of them with her husband, Mahadev. Her eyes narrowed as her husband smiled slightly as he looked at Mahadev. This smile looks full of conspiracy.
To uska dard kam bhi wahi karega jisne dard diya hai.
Mahadev said looking at Parvati and Lakshmi raised her eyebrows amused. How will Shiva do that?? Is it even possible for him to ask forgiveness from Raavi??
Ye dard akhir kab tak rahega Prabhu??
Parvati asked looking at Mahadev confused and Lakshmi sighed seeing Mahadev's sad smile.
Jab tak ye apni bhaavnao ko sweekar nahi kar lete ye dard kam nahi hoga Parvati. Kyuki dava bhi tabhi di jaati hai jab beemari pata ho.
Lakshmi nodded her head in yes as she heard Mahadev's words. He's right. There's no cure till you diagnose the disease. And here too, how will their pain go away if they don't even realise why they're in pain??
Mehsus kar sakta hu main, Shiva ki tadap bhi aur Raavi ka dard bhi. Inhe ehsaas dilana itna aasaan nahi hoga.
Lakshmi sighed almost irritated at her husband's words. Lord Vishnu is right though. Both Shiva and Raavi are totally oblivious, how will they ever understand what they means to each other??
Aur faisle ki ghadi bohot pass hai.
Laksmi stiffened at Parvati's comment. Just 3 days are remaining and then it's their wedding day.
Inke paas bas 3 hi din bache hain.
Laksmi said in a tensed voice and saw both Mahadev and Lord Vishnu stiffening slightly.
Aur humare paas bhi.
They both said with a grim look much to Laksmi's annoyance. If only they could actually tell those idiots about why they both are so restless, angry and hurt.
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Shiva gritted his teeth as he looked at the ring in his hand. They just finished the engagement ceremony and he felt suffocated sitting here on the couch along with Rishita while Dev and Raavi sat on another couch in front of them. Honestly, he felt like burning this whole world, that's how furious he is right now.
Shiva!!
Shiva came out of his thoughts as he heard Rishita's whispering his name beside her. He just can't believe how conflicted he is. He was the one who agreed for this alliance. He even felt happy the day he met and talked to Rishita, then what the hell is wrong with him now?
Dhara Bhabhi ne abhi bataya ki couples bhi gifts denge, maine to Raavi aur Dev ke liye kuch bhi nahi liya.
Shiva sighed as soon as he heard Rishita's problem. He knows what to do though. He didn't remember that Raavi was wearing her mother's shawl and in his anger he actually did what's unacceptable. That's why he took the liberty to pick up the shawl and get it dry-cleaned.
Krish!!
He called Krish as everyone sat beside the couples to open the gifts.
Meri cupboard me ek packet rakha hai, wo le aa.
Shiva whispered to Krish and waited as Krish ran to his room. As soon as the gifts were exchanged Dhara Bhabhi told them to open their gifts. Shiva looked at Raavi as she opened his gift and sighed as he saw her slight smile. He knows she loves it.
Kya Shiva tu bhi, kaha se utha ke laaya hai ye purana sa shawl?
Shiva looked away at Krish's words and saw Rishita smiling at him brightly. Looks like she recognised it along with Dhara Bhabhi who's smiling widely at him right now.
Shiva nodded at Dev as he saw the picture frame Dev gifted them. It's actually good. They all finally finished in one hour and everyone got up to leave.
Shiva smiled awkwardly as Rishita hugged him. What he didn't notice was Raavi's furious face and clenched fists.
Dev!! Tu Janardhan Seth ke saath ja kuch documents laane hain unke ghar se.
Shiva frowned slightly as he heard what Dhara Bhabhi said. What's going on?? What papers??
Par Raavi ko drop karna hai Bhabhi.
Dev said and Shiva stiffened slightly at whatever is going on. He's getting even more restless and he has no idea what the hell is wrong with him.
Haan to ye Shiva kar aayega. Ab uski bhi to Bhabhi banne wali hai Raavi.
Shiva sucked in a breath at Dhara Bhabhi's words. No way in hell!! That Chipkali is not going to be his Bhabhi.
Shiva sunn!!
He clenched his fists and looked at his Bhabhi.
Ghar tak chhod kar aana Raavi ko. Raaste me mat patak ke aa jana. Aur apna behaviour sudhaar thoda. Teri hone wali Bhabhi hai wo.
Shiva's blood boiled at Raavi's smile at his Bhabhi's words. He's going to kill her today. He stormed out of his house without even looking at her. Shiva nodded at Raavi as she thanked him for the shawl and started his bike. He doesn't actually want to talk to her, he's way too furious right now.
Shiva closed his eyes irritated and stopped his bike mid way to Raavi's house as she kept on talking about her and Dev's upcoming wedding. Enough of this bullshit.
Utar neeche.
Shiva said sternly and looked at the side mirror only to see Raavi looking around scared. He's not actually going to leave her here but she's going to shut her mouth up.
Dekh S..Shiva main itni raat ko akeli kaise jaungi. Please ghar chhod de na.
Shiva gritted his teeth as he heard her pleading voice. He bend down his bike and smirked slightly as she shrieked gripping his shirt tightly.
Neeche utar.
He told her again, this time with a more harsh tone and parked his bike near a tree. He turned around and saw Raavi looking at him with tears in his eyes. Her tears don't affect him, he doesn't care how she feels, but she's not going to marry Dev, not in next 2 days and not ever.
Shiva grabbed her hand and pulled her in the woods along with him. She's going to remember what happens when she refuses to give in.
Shiva chhod kya kar raha hai.
He heard her shout but he kept on dragging her towards his cabin which he made when he was 15 years old. And she has been here before, and he's sure this cabin is her worst nightmare for he left her there for whole 6 hours when she didn't stop chanting Dev's name before him in the school.
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Raavi sucked in a breath as she saw the cabin in front of her. No way!! She's not going inside this cabin. She's not going to get locked out here again. Her heart beat increased as she looked around. These trees have become big since last 10 years, and everything is scary.
She put all her strength in standing still as Shiva tried to pull her ahead.
Nahi main yaha nahi jaungi tere saath. Shiva chhod!!
Raavi shouted wriggling her hand and saw him glaring at her. She gulped in fear as she saw him moving towards her and she automatically stepped back. This cabin is a horror for her.
Shiva please nahi. Dekh tu dobara mujhe yaha baandh kar akela nahi chhod sakta.
Raavi said as he dragged her inside the cabin and latched the door. She moved as far away from him as possible. He looked ready to murder someone. Most probably her.
Shiva Pandya hu main. Kuch bhi kar sakta hu.
She took a deep breath as Shiva came towards her furiously. She can't just give in to him. She's Raavi for god sake, the same Raavi who faked illness after Shiva's cabin stunt and made him serve her for whole 3 days.
Shiva!!
She said his name softly but gasped in shock as he pushed her to the wall with a force. She closed her eyes as he put both of his hands on her either side of the wall and pushed himself too close to her.
To tujhe Dev ki biwi banna hai.
Raavi opened her eyes startled at his question. Wait!! Why is he even asking this?? Of course, it's her dream to be Shiva's sister in law and have all the advantages that her Dhara di has in her life.
Shiva tujhe pata hai ki bachpan se lekar aaj tak mera sirf ek hi sapna raha hai, teri Bhabhi banne ka.
Raavi said totally clueless about Shiva's mind but she frowned as she saw Shiva snickering at her words. What's wrong??
Meri bhabhi ya dev ki biwi?
Raavi narrowed her eyes at Shiva's question. Both are same. What the hell does he want to ask??
Same hi to baat hai.
She said confused and tried to move back as Shiva came even more close to her. She clenched her fists as Shiva stood so close to her that there's no space between them, not even for air. Raavi tried to inhale some air and all she could smell was his scent.
Itna paas main bachpan se hu tere, darr laga Kabhi?
Raavi looked at Shiva and shook her head in a no. She has never been scared of him, not even when he treated her brutally, because he never really hurt her. She trusts him. This is not the first time she's this close to him, they always fight like this.
Dev ke itne kareeb ja payegi?
Raavi's eyes widened at Shiva's words and her breath almost stopped as she pictured Dev this close to her instead of Shiva. Her hands shivered in fear as the thought settled in her mind. She would be Dev's wife and he will come close to her.
Raavi took a deep breath as Shiva grabbed her hand and her shivering stopped. She knows his touch and it gives her peace. But all of a sudden Shiva started tracing his finger on her hand upwards and she sucked in a breath as her hand felt on fire wherever he touched her.
Kya karegi jab teen din baad iss tarah se haath lagayega wo tujhe??
Raavi closed her eyes tightly as her skin crawled with disgust as she imagined Dev touching her like this. Tears came out of her eyes as he trailed his finger on her neck.
Shiva please!!
Raavi whispered totally miserable and opened her eyes as he grabbed her neck with a force. She could see his furious eyes.
Sochne se hi tere aansu nikal aaye, to zindagi bhar jiyegi kaise??
Raavi took a deep breath and blinked her eyes as she saw the ring on his finger. He's engaged. He's getting married too. Who the hell does he think he is?? How dare he question her??
Tu toh ek ajnabee ke itne kareeb jaane wala hai, apni tension le. Main to phir bhi Dev ko jaanti hu.
Raavi said with a slight smirk but hissed in pain as Shiva grabbed her hair more tightly.
Ek baat apne dimag me baitha le, agar Dev ke kareeb jaane ki socha bhi na, to pehle tujhe khatam karunga phir dev ko aur phir iss poore sheher ko. Yeh Shiva Pandya ka vaada hai tujhse.
Raavi blinked her eyes looking ahead in shock as Shiva pushed her back with a force and stormed out of the cabin. She sighed and wiped her tears while coming out of the cabin. He can't do this to her. She's not scared of him. She looked ahead and saw him waiting for her outside the cabin.
If he really thinks that she's going to back off because of this stunt of his, then he's wrong. She's not going to back off. Not at all.
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See you all soon. Till next chapter, stay healthy and happy.
I felt like puking when he asked if she can stand dev's touch ... yuck.....shiver ran down my spine.....
they are so in sync and y these 2 don't realize 🙄 😳 y hurting each other in process....their every fiber screams love and possessiveness for the other....
m sure raavi has never thought anything else except being his bhabhi....being his bhabhi and dev's wife are 2 separate things .....y can't she understand....shiva will u be able to touch anyone the way u do to raavi? gyan mat baanton....dimag ki💡 jalao
shiva u can't blame her....u are also getting married ....m sure rishita will be happy for you both if u tell her....but khud to realize karo....
kya bhagwan aap bhi....jaldi madad karo.....akal do dono ko warna somnath jala denege....🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
can't wait to read further...
thank you for the update dear.....🤗👍🏼