Shivi drabble : Raavi Dance scene

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Posted: 4 years ago
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My dirty mind couldn't help but think what would happen if that dance scene played out a little differently when Shiva pulled Raavi down on to bed in mid step.

Shiva fearing Raavi would spoil their plan of scaring Rishitha with this night dance wanted to stop her somehow and make her sleep. He was ready to do anything for his plan to work including accepting defeat with this chipkali. With the same intention, he pulled her down on to bed, but her feet slipped on her silky dupatta which was sweeping the floor during her dance and she fell on him flat and their lips touched accidentally.

A warm blush spread on to Raavi's cheeks and Shiva felt his face get hot. He felt her heartbeat speed up and her lips were shivering slightly. She couldn't look him in eye and was training her eyes on his chest. Her silky hair fell on his face and he gently tucked it behind her ear. She looked into his eyes then and Shiva felt his eyes moving towards her lips once again. He couldn't believe he was thinking this, but he wanted to kiss his chipkali. His chipkali? When did she become his chipkali? He never even saw her as a woman, she was still his childhood frenemy. Raavi was also now looking at his lips. Maybe they both want the same thing. What's wrong in wanting to kiss his own wife? Maybe he should go ahead and taste her lips. He was moving to touch their lips again. Raavi closed her eyes and waited for his and he could feel her heart speed up again. But just then , Dhara bhabhi called out, " Shiva, Raavi yeh kya raat ko hallah machake rakha hai? Logon ko sone nahi do ge kya?" And the moment was broken. Raavi got up from him as if he is a current pole and he just realised what he was about to do. Thank god, bhabhi came at right time he thought otherwise what might have happened between him and chipkali. He switched off the speaker and both stammered at the same time.

Shiva: Main Dhara bhabhi ko sorry bolke aata hoon.

Raavi: Main so jaati hoon.

Shiva got out of the room and went to look for Krish.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Now that's what I call a good use of Raavi Shivaa screen time ... PS Writers please learn from the writers here . Good job 👌👌👌👌

Edited by mahajanaish - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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I was going to write about the accidental kiss too taking inspiration from a k drama😆

This was so good I wish it was a a short story!

Think about it 😆


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Posted: 4 years ago
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😭😭😭 if only Dhara didn't interrupt them 🙈🤣.


Really nice! ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#5

Thank you so much for encouragement you all. 😊

Edited by Honey272 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#6

So good, Dharaaa....

Write more :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Such a short but sweet moment! If only

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I wish something like this could’ve happen

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is just wow. ❤️

The writers could have given us at least a small cute moment similar to this.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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♥️ I’ll go to sleep dreaming of this now 🤣

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