Shivi : Ek khatti meethi lovestory part 07 updated page 6(23/09) - Page 4

This is getting interesting....

Waiting for the authentic khatti meethi phase of ShiVi.

Update soon...

Part - 6

Burning with anger Shiva walked towards his room

(postponing to confront his dearest new bhabhi later)

and saw Raavi packing her luggage;coming close to her he snapped the suitcase shut with so much force which scared the hell out of Raavi that she jumped startled and scattered the clothes in her hands all around the room and was about to fall entangling in them when suddenly shiva pulled on her arm breaking her fall and taunted smugly

" Badi jaldi h tujhe lagta h Jane ki,Mere sath akele Rehne se darr nhi lagra tujhe kahin ye junglee bhalu noch na jaye tujhe Haan"

"Itna attitude bhi acha nhi hota Shiva tere Saath jana marji nhi majborri h meri kyunki aur koi option nhi h mere pass"

Seeing Shiva opening his mouth to retort Raavi cut him in between and said

" aur rahi baat tujhe ghar se dur karne k Iss ke liye mujhe blaim karne ki sochna bhi mat

Shiva looked completely shocked not knowing how she understood his thought so apatly

main toh waise bhi Massi k ghar jana chahti thi (mujhe ache se pata tha tu wahan Rehne ko manega nhi) aur yahi Baat gombi aur Dhara di se bhi kahi thi

Par kaki k samajhne par mujhe realize hua isse dono families ki kitni insult hogi isliye mujhe unka faisla manna pada samjha

FLASHBACK

Raavi remember clearly how in the after noon

Suman kaki called her

On reaching there kaki has asked her to sit beside her and lovingly caressed her face and said

Dekh Raavi beta ye Dhara aur Gautam ne btaya mujhe jo kaha tune inse

Haan kaki wo main Raavi interrupted in between but before she can complete suman took her hands in her own and spoke -

Sunn Raavi beta pehle mujhe apni Baat puri kar lene de pher agar main jo kahun wo galat lage to batana

main samjhati hu teri Baat aur manti bhi hu pichle kuch dino main tere Saath bohot kuch hogya aise main tu kuch din inn sab se dur jana chahti h wo bhi sahi par soch

Kal tune khud apni Massi ke Saath Jane se mana kar diya tha wo toh le jaa rahi thi na tujhe ab agar agle hi din tu wapas jayegi unke pass wo bhi Rehne k liye toh kya betegi unpe khas kar mere jagiya par upar se log tanne denge ki ek beti toh pehle hi bin byahi bethi h upar se dusri bhi sasural se laut aayi toh kya izzat reh jayegi unki

Mujhe toh isse koi farq nhi padta ulta mujhe toh sukoon milega uss kagdi ki bezzati hote dekhar

But soch wahin agar tu shiva k Saath jayegi toh Shyad tere mauspa or teri Massi ko bhi lage tum apne rishte ko ek mauka dena chahti ho aur kisiko tumhare wahan Jane se koi dikkat bhi nhi hogi baki jo tujhe thik lage wo kar saru che. Main ye faisla tujhe chorti hu thik tu jo faisla legi main tere Saath hu" completed Suman

Manipulating an emotional Raavi easily who clearly seemed effected by her talks.

And Gaura just shaked their heads understanding their mother's tactics knowing very well if not emotionally blackmailed Raavi will never agree to go with Shiva.

Shiva's PoV

On hearing Raavi words Shiva become silent and just went towards the cupboard to take out his clothes to pack not really having another option

As he clearly remembered what Gombi said to him in the kitchen

Dekh shiva agar tu dusre Seher nahi jana chahta toh koi problem nhi bas samaan pack rakhna kyunki pher tujhe mami k ghar shift hona padega kyunki Raavi to jaayegi Maa k strict instructions h toh ab tu decide karle kahan tere Saath yaa tu uske Saath

Remembering those words shiva felt his temper rising as it felt like its his loss on both side

ye toh wahi Baat hogayi khrbuja chaku pr gire ya chaku kharbuje pr katna toh kharbuje ko hi and once more his fears proved to be true Dhara bhabhi's important talk means always his bad luck - murmured Shiva to himself.

Tune kuch kaha? Questioned Raavi suspiciously as she heard him speak something as she was just beside him as she was picking up her clothes.

Shiva just shook his head in negative and and started packing.

Raavi looked completely shocked as well as surprised by this and thought Iss bhootnath ko kya hua waise toh meri haar Baat pe mujhe katne ko ever ready rehta par aaj silent mode pe kyun h

Isko shock wock toh nhi laga na. Raavi grew curious and probed further tu thik h na Shiva!

Kahin tune kl mere Saath na ladne wali Baat seriously toh nhi leli

Dekh agar Aisa h na toh ye khyal bhi nikal de dimag se tu bhi janta h aur main bhi ki hum dono ek dusre se lade bina nhi reh sakte aadat h Bachpan ki toh agar chid machrahai h toh sidhe sidhe bol de main kaki se Baat kar lungi

Her continuous blabbering irritated the hell out of shiva and turning he pulled her towards himself he gritted out-

"Dekh tu na jyada meri himayati banne ki koshish maat kar jaise tera janna majburi h waise hi tujhe

Lekar janna meri majburi toh bhul k bhi mat sochna Maa se kuch kehne ki warna mujhse bura koi nhi hoga saying so he jerked her away and turned to leave but stopped and said aur ek Baat wahan hum dono apni zindagi apne hisab se jiyenge na tera mujhse koi Lena dena na mera tujhse samjhi and walked out of the room.

Acha h Iss gadhede ne khud k hi sab clear krdiya isko kya laga wahan jakar main iski biwi bnkar iske saar pe nachungi. Waise bhi aise Insaan se kya hi umeed rakhna jo mujhe gundo ko beech akela chod sakta h wo kya hi mera dhyan rakhega kisi dusre sehar main muttering so Raavi closed her luggage leaving the minor packing for tomorrow and slept off.

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Next Morning

As the family sat down to have breakfast suman Maa asked Shiva - Ae Shiva hogya tm dono ka packing kab nikal rahe ho aur kahan.

Shiva kahin Jaa raha h Maa aur dono kaun asked Dev.

Dono mane dono miyan biwi kyun tujhe koi pareshaani.

Maa aap aise kaise kar sakte ho humare saath love marriage toh meri or dev ki hui h aur aap inko honeymoon pe kaise bhej sakte ho.

Aur waise bhi karenge kya ye jake wahan

And laughs

Ae bade baap ki beti kal jo tamasha kiya kam tha kya jo phir shuru ho gyi Haan

Aur ye dono kahin bhi jaye tere izazat leke ya tujhe batake jae jaruri nhi lagta mujhe kyun k jaruri h

Aur Rahi Baat bewajah ghumne ki toh ye Faltu k chochle tere ameer baap k ghar par hote honge yahan nhi.

Shiva have a satisfied smile seeing the insult of Rishita he felt the anger subsiding in him a bit.

Ae gadheda kahan kho gya bolega

To which Raavi said kaki hum dono Massi k ghar nhi Jaa rahe.

Woh toh pata hi tha mujhe chl acha h tyari ho gyi sab kab nikal rahe ho

To which Gombi said Maa wo kuch kagazi kaam

H wo khatm karna h to sham ko nikal jayenge dono kyun Raavi Thik. H na karlegi puri tayaari tab tak Haan gombi ho jayega sab

Seeing everyone ignoring her presence Rishita angrily gotup and left the room.

After her one by one everyone left to their respective works.

In the evening Raavi has almost completed her packing and then looked at Shiva's luggage

Raavi thinking Iss bhootnath ne pata. Nhi sab rakh liya h ki nhi check karu kya par mujhe kya jisse jarurat hogi karlega khud.

But then looking at the clock Raavi realised if his packing wasnt complete toh it might delay them

So she checked around and collected his remaining things keeping them on the suitcase just then shiva Arrived in a rush and was about to collect his things when he saw everything placed over his bag neatly ye kisne kiya. Seeing Shiva looking at her Raavi got engrossed in checking her handbag totally avoiding looking at Shiva.

Tune rakha ye samaan.

Main kyun rakhne lagi dhara bhabhi puch rahi thi unhone hi kita hoga but Shiva knew better agar bhabhi ne kiya hota toh sara samaan bag main hota aise upar nhi rakha hota but he didn't commented on that.

Keeping everything inside shiva turned to her Ab yahi bethi rahegi ya chalegi bhi.

Raavi arranged her bags properly and shiva looked shocked tu lekar toh 2 bag aayi thi ye 4 bag kahan se ho gye tere🤔🤔🤔

Aisa kya thus k leke jari h wahan sab milega jo jarurat h le sakte h

Tujhse matlb tujhe kaha kya main uthane nhi na tu le ja apna

Just then krish entered aap dono ko aaj hi nikalna h baki ka raste main ladte rehna

layeye bhabhi dijiye main leke chlta hu

Raavi turned passing her bags to krish and smirked at shiva. Haan Haan krish leja waise bhi Iss phool kumari se do kadam nhi chala jayega itna samaan leke

Saying so shiva walked outside towards the taxi they booked for the travel.

Once outside krish kept all the luggage waise sachii bhabhi aisa kya bhara h ki itna samaan.

Arrey wo before dhara can say Raavi hugged her and said aapna khyal rakhna dhara di and please mujhe maaf karne maine aapse gusse main jo kuch bhi ulta seedha bola uske liye

Then Raavi hugged Gombi and Krish and took blessings from Suman kaki also. Shiva looked entranced at her seeing her behaving so sanskari

Ye itni seedhi bhi h.

Shiva jyada ladna mat aur apna aur Raavi ka khyal rakhna thik che said dhara.

Shiva hugged his Maa and bhabhi and was about to sit near driver

Arrey Arrey agae kya beth raha h piche beth bhabhi k sath.

Saying so krish pushed her beside Raavi. And closed the door.

The driver started driving and all waved their goodbye to them.

Finally shivi left for a new journey of their life which will be more salty aur extra sweet only time will tell.

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Loving this AU story from kidnapping track. And knowing what we know now, the best part is that ShiVi successfully escaped from this BhabhiMa Niwas.

Please update soon this time. Looking forward to see how the MU gets cleared and they begin to adjust with one another.

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Loving this AU story from kidnapping track. And knowing what we know now, the best part is that ShiVi successfully escaped from this BhabhiMa Niwas.

Please update soon this time. Looking forward to see how the MU gets cleared and they begin to adjust with one another.

Yupp will try not to delay it any more

And this escaping inthe AU world is reason i felt like writing it ahead nhi toh show se toh vibes hi nhi aate story likhne wale 😅😁

Thank you for reading M_L

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful update ❤️💞

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Amazing update 👏❤

Loved it

Plzzz update soon🤗

Soonish toh nhi but still posted an update padho aur tell how it is🙈🙈🙈