Shivi : Ek khatti meethi lovestory part 07 updated page 6(23/09) - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART-4

Marching downstairs Raavi went in search for Dhara who herself was looking for Raavi found her coming down only. On reaching near Dhara

Raavi spoke - " Dhara di mujhe aapse aur Gombi se kuch jaruri Baat krni h please chaliye mere sath" saying this Raavi dragged Dhara towards the aangan area where they saw Gombi talking on phone with someone once his call got finished Dhara called him and told that Raavi wants to talk to them.

The trio then walked to the store room on reaching there Raavi told Gaura about what she had decided and says Gombi maine faisle le liye h aap please Maa ko mana lijiye kyunki shayad aap logo ko meri takleef se farq nhi padta hoga par main aap logo ko kbhi hurt nhi kr sakti.

Gombi shook his head at her complaint and caressing her hair softly said-"tu chinta mat kar Raavi mujhe bhi lagta h tu sahi Keh rahi h shyad filhal k liye yahi thik rahega main Maa se khud Baat karunga Iss bare main aur unhe

manaunga "

Dhara seeing the matters going out of hands tried stopping Gombi who shook his head in negative and spoke-Nahi Dhara sabne bohot faisle le liye Raavi k liye, Ab ussne ye faisla liya h toh soch samajhkar hi liya hoga aur waise bhi akhir main toh jo Maa bolengi hoga toh wahi, kyun Raavi Maa ka kaha toh manegi na agar unhone na manni teri baat.

"Haan Gombi Agar Maa ko mera faisla na manjur hua toh koi shikayat nhi karungi par mujhe nhi lagta Maa aisa karengi; khaskar aaj subha k tamashe k Baad wo jarur Haan kar dengi-"Firmly replied Raavi to his query.

Chal dekhte h saying this Gombi left towards his maa's room with Dhara following close behind.

Raavi looked on hopefully and closed the room and sat down near their make shift bed got lost in her thoughts.

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Once inside Suman's room both Dhara and Gombi narrated their entire talk with Raavi to suman who looked taken aback for a moment but didn't respond to their questions making them really anxious.

Finally after what seemed like an hour to Gaura Suman broke her silence and declared -" Shiva ko bol jo ye sath wale sehar main store kholne ka soch rahe the na tm log wo deal weal jake puri kare jb tak wahan ka sab settle hoga wahin reh k sambhale sab;Parso hi nikal pade dono miyan biwi apna samaan sab bandh k thik che.Tab tak yahan unke liye naya kamra waghera banwa denge kyun Gautam thik rahega na. Dhara looked totally shocked and dared to question her Sasu Maa-" Par Maa wahan Shiva aur Raavi akele kaise sb handle karenge kahin baat banne ki jagah aur bigad na jaaye?"

Ae bhagodi ki beti mujhe kya apni tarah bewakoof samjha h; Mujhe pta h main kya kar rahi hu un dono ko akele Rehne ki jarurat h thik waise jaise uss ameerzadi ko humlog ke sath taki Raavi ko Shiva ki aur uss 2nd no wali ko humari aadat ho jaye. Samjhe gyo pan baat ki dande se samjhau.

Gautam immediately interrupted his Maa and answered softly - Nhi maa jaise tu keh rahi h hum wahi karenge tu chinta mat kar aur Dhara tu bhi tension mat le somnath sab sahi karenge.

BS ab sham ko Shiva aayega usse tu baat karlena aur sab samjha dena pher main bhi bol dunga toh woh mana nhi kar payega. Haan thoda gussa hoga par tu mana liyo thik h.

Dhara also nodded simply as everything got decided already.

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After whatever happened since morning Dhara found it difficult to focus on anything and got lost in the talks about what Raavi said earlier in the morning

FLASHBACK TO THE STORE ROOM CONVERSATION

On reaching the ROOM Raavi immediately came to the point and said - "Gombi Dhara di main maasi k ghar Rehne Jaana chahti hu kuch dino k liye agar Shiva aana chae toh Aa sakta h uski marji h par mujhe inn sab se duri chahyiye Main aap logo ki aur Iss parivar ki apni hona chahti thi humesha se ;par ab jaise wo lagaav kahin kho sa gya hain aur sath sath main bhi dum ghutne laga h mere pandya niwas main aur Roj roj Rishita se ladne aur Dev ko dekhne ki himmat nhi h mujh me main move on karna chahti hu par wo yahan nhi ho payega mujhse.Kl uss situation main Agar main jaati toh wo galat hota par ab lagta h shayad mera jana hi thik hota aur agar aap logo ne parivar ka vasta dekar mujhe roka toh shayad main ruk bhi jau pr khush nhi reh paungi main isliye aap logo ko sb bta rahi taki aap Maa ko samjha sako so that unhe mere Jane se bura na lage. maine faisle le liye h aap please Maa ko mana lijiye kyunki shayad aap logo ko meri takleef se farq nhi padta hoga par main aap logo ko kbhi hurt nhi kr sakti.

"Bhabhi " "Bhabhi" the loud calls of Shiva broke Dhara's chain of thoughts who exclaimed - acha hua tu Aa gya mujhe tujhse bohot jaruri Baat karni. Hearing his bhabhi tensed voice made Shiva really stressed about the topic of this important talk ( becoz whenever this happens it never went in his favour ever)

Edited by frnd_ship - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Enjoying this story alot. Excited to see where it's heading. Great update ❤.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Amazing story!!

How did I miss this!!!

totally loving it❤️

Please update frequently if possible

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Amazing update😊

Loved Raavi's decision and Suman also supported her😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was such a wise decision on Suman's part! Really excited to see how this new chapter in their story unfolds ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART-5

After serving him dinner Dhara settled down beside Shiva - wo darasal Shiva ;

actually main aur Gombi;

Not liking the buildup his BHABHI was doing as it is making him more panicked he uttered irritatetely -"Bhabhi jo Baat h sidhe sidhe bta do"

Seeing shiva's mood shifting Dhara cajoles him saying-" wo main toh bs Gombi ka wait krr rahi thi wo Aa jate toh sath main bta dete"

Bhabhi ab aap mujhe tension main daal rahe ho aise kya Baat Ho gayi jo aap mujhe batane se hichak rahe ho; btado mujhe

Dhara took a deep breath and uttered in one breath Humne socha h ki tu aur Raavi kuch mahino k liye sath wale Ahmednagar(fake name h) main jaa k settle ho jao aur wahan par humare store ki nayi branch kholo.

Hearing his Bhabhi monologue Shiva got more irritated & frustated (here he was trying to avoid that chipakli upar se bhabhi usse hi uske sath chipka rahi h)

So to avoid this unnecessary problem Shiva said iski kya jarurat h bhabhi wo toh main waise bhi yahan se handle kar hi raha hu aur agar Phir bhi koi problem h toh main akela chla jaunga uss mami ki behen ki beti ka wahan kya kaam.

"Kaam h Shiva Raavi kuch Waqt k liye kahin jana chahti thi aur kyunki ab wo Sirf humari MKBKB nhi rahi teri biwi bhi h toh uske sath dene ki aur khyal rakhne ki teri zimmedari banti h"- uttered Gombi entering the kitchen who was hearing their talks till now standing outside.

Hearing Raavi's is responsible for this all of his frustration and irritation took the form of anger and he spoke rudely-"Ohh to ab main samjha ye sab uss chudail ki sazish h wo mujhe mere parivar se dur karne k liye ye sb tarike nikal rahi jarur ye sab mujhse badalne lene k liye kar rahi h wo apni uss Massi k Kehne pe usse toh main chodunga nhi"

Seeing the ever famous anger of their very own Shivaji Dhara narrowed her eyes and glared at Gombi (as if saying look thats what i meant)

Gautam stopped the angry bull from raging by holding his hands and pulling him inside the kitchen and told him all that transpired in the house since morning

From Rishita Raavi fight where Rishita accused Raavi, to her decision of going to her Massi's house and then later on suman's decision of sending them to the other city which somewhat calmed his anger but only on Raavi but he felt double rage towards Rishita for insulting Raavi for reasons unknown even to him but before he could do something about this Dhara spoke - "dekh Shiva main janti hu tujhe shayad bohot gussa Aa raha hoga Pr Rishita thodi immature h isliye insecure ho jati pr Jb tm log yahan nhi hogi uski bhi insecurities shayad khatm ho jaye aur tu shant kar khudko aur soch isse tera bhi sapna pura hoga humare store ko expand karne ka aur yahi pass hi toh h jb mann kare Aa jaya karna kyun Gombi" questioned Dhara raising her eyebrows at gombi who immediately nodded to her.

But instead of calming his anger his Bhabhi words were oil drops that raged the extinguishing rage on Raavi and Increased his anger on Rishita again and said Gussa toh shant nahi hoga Bhabhi uss ameer Baap ki beti ki akal tikhane ye shiva pandya hi layega aise nhi manegi aur rahi uss chipakli ki Baat toh usko bhi dekh lunga main. Saying this Shiva marched away from there ignoring his bhabhi's call to finish his dinner.

Seeing Shiva walk away in Dhara angrily turned towards Gautam and said - jiss baat ka darr tha mujhe wahi hua Shiva kbhi nhi manega Jane ko upar se Raavi se jhagda karega so alag wo bacchhi pehle se dukhi h aur iski gusse se aur hurt ho jaegi Gombi plzz kuch toh karo.

Looking at Dhara's tensed face Gautam said woh apni problems kaise handle karte h ye unhe sikhna hoga Dhara aise ladkar toh nhi Kaat sakte na sari umar tune unhe bandhan main toh bandh diya ab isse jodna h ya todna ye unn par chor de.

Aur yahi Maa ka idea h unhe dur bhejne ka jisse wo tolerate karna sikhe ek dusre ko jb koi tesra nahi hoga madad krne ko toh apne aap ek dusre k pass Aa jayenge wo bs tu fikar krna kam kre- Gautam tried to console his worried wife who in turn hugged him and muttered hope Maa aur jo tm soch rahe ho waisa hi ho Gombi.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Interesting update👏

Shiva is angry on Raavi due to the shifting decision

Hoping he will understood Raavi's problem soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awsome update 😀👌


Sabke idea ek taraf aur mahasaas ek taraf🤩


Ab shivi mast akele hoge, I m seeing so much jhagda n so much romance 🥰🥰🥰🥰


Cont soon🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for the update. Enjoyed this chapter alot. Cannot wait to read what happens next 🤗❤.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing update 😊 loved sasuma's idea 😍😍

Waiting for next update ❤️❤️

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