Aawara Shaam Hai - A ShiVi OS - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

So much pain and so much left unsaid! Please write part 2!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Very interesting os👏

This suits Shivi, the pain and the unsaid words👏

Waiting for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

take it slow but pleas upload a part 2

this was so well written I'd love to read more

lovely os!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Well written. ❤️ The setting, dialogues and your way of portrayal are all amazing. It was so natural. I loved it.

I'm craving hard to read further.


Do update soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Uff... Loved the angst🥺💔

Please please write a second part. *(haath jodne waale emoji)*

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful ❤🤗


Amazing with different plot , and their emotions n wishes👍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Very well written! I like this anticlimatic ending as well. You want their love story to unfold slowly, won’t be surprised if that’s what actually happens in the show.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

This is not done ..you cannot leave us there ..it was beautifully portrayed. Please do continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Namita-M

Oooh, very interesting!!!


Yeh dil mange more!!

Aww thank you ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

that was interesting! though i have to say that like shiva i was a bit confused at the end too 😆

hoping there's a part 2!

Haha 😆 Thank you! Hopefully part 2 (if I can come up with something) can clear things up 😉

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