Shivi FF The Challenge Part 4, pg 9 (finished) - Page 4

So good! Thank you for the fast update :) <3

This was reallly good..

The way Krish introduced the 2 couples was just perfect...

Cant wait to read the 3rd part..❤️

This so well-written and hilariously cute! I'm dying to read the next part, please don't be bothered about writing too much, the longer the better if we're getting more of this content ❤️😆

I LOVED all of it, Krish's commentary was excellent and described them so wonderfully, it cracked me up so bad but I couldn't wipe off the grin on my face for a long time after reading that adorably cute intro.

Ye mile pata nahi kab... Shiva baby crying on the side, Ravi newborn awww 🤣

Raavi literally grew up with her boo.

I know this sounds greedy but I hope you post the next parts soon! If these comments give you the adrenaline to post faster I'll keep dropping em every hour 😎

Introduction was so funny🤣 Especially shivi's intro🤣

Amazing update....please update next part soon

Originally posted by: Felicie

This so well-written and hilariously cute! I'm dying to read the next part, please don't be bothered about writing too much, the longer the better if we're getting more of this content ❤️😆

I LOVED all of it, Krish's commentary was excellent and described them so wonderfully, it cracked me up so bad but I couldn't wipe off the grin on my face for a long time after reading that adorably cute intro.

Ye mile pata nahi kab... Shiva baby crying on the side, Ravi newborn awww 🤣

Raavi literally grew up with her boo.

I know this sounds greedy but I hope you post the next parts soon! If these comments give you the adrenaline to post faster I'll keep dropping em every hour 😎

The commentary part was my favourite too. I kept laughing like an idiot when I wrote it.

I'm writing the next part now. Will update when I finish.

Dekha dekha ! How confident Shiva is in winning 😂😂

Hayyee bande is full on confident that he knows everything about his Chipkali ♥️

I am sooooo soo excited for this ! I want to see Rishita eat her words and work in the kitchen for the whole daay 😂😂😂😂

Originally posted by: Felicie

This so well-written and hilariously cute! I'm dying to read the next part, please don't be bothered about writing too much, the longer the better if we're getting more of this content ❤️😆

I LOVED all of it, Krish's commentary was excellent and described them so wonderfully, it cracked me up so bad but I couldn't wipe off the grin on my face for a long time after reading that adorably cute intro.

Ye mile pata nahi kab... Shiva baby crying on the side, Ravi newborn awww 🤣

Raavi literally grew up with her boo.

I know this sounds greedy but I hope you post the next parts soon! If these comments give you the adrenaline to post faster I'll keep dropping em every hour 😎

Count me in ! I'll be on standby to comment on everything right along side you 😂😂

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Dekha dekha ! How confident Shiva is in winning 😂😂

Hayyee bande is full on confident that he knows everything about his Chipkali ♥️

I am sooooo soo excited for this ! I want to see Rishita eat her words and work in the kitchen for the whole daay 😂😂😂😂

Shiva just wants to ruin her manicure 🤣

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Count me in ! I'll be on standby to comment on everything right along side you 😂😂

Me too! 👍🏼😆

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Shiva just wants to ruin her manicure 🤣

See he was a little mad that only his Wife and Bhabhi were doing work in the kitchen while Rishita complains about her manicure getting ruined 😂