Shivi FF The Challenge Part 4, pg 9 (finished) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Competition Time!!


Love this idea ❤️ Rishita really needs a dose of reality. She just can't keep assuming something about others relationship. Not only should Raavi and Shiva win but they should win by a landslide so Rishita can truly feel the humiliation that Raavi had to face because of her.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yesss ! I can just see it ! Along with winning, it'll give clear indication to both Shiva and Raavi how much they have been with each other through out their lifetime ! It'll make them realise just how much they mean to each other and how much they noticed each others present. More than Shiva, I think Raavi and the whole family will be surprised at just HOW MUCH Shiva knows about Raavi. With all his pomp of hating her, I can already see the things only he notices about her ☺️


And I'm hoping you'll slid in a one liner from Krish teasing both of them 🤣



Great work ! If you can, please just update it today ! But if you'll do it tomorrow also would be awesome 😍♥️



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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Yesss ! I can just see it ! Along with winning, it'll give clear indication to both Shiva and Raavi how much they have been with each other through out their lifetime ! It'll make them realise just how much they mean to each other and how much they noticed each others present. More than Shiva, I think Raavi and the whole family will be surprised at just HOW MUCH Shiva knows about Raavi. With all his pomp of hating her, I can already see the things only he notices about her ☺️


And I'm hoping you'll slid in a one liner from Krish teasing both of them 🤣



Great work ! If you can, please just update it today ! But if you'll do it tomorrow also would be awesome 😍♥️



You’re so right! Raavi will see that Shiva also pays attention to her and it’ll soften her towards him! Shiva himself will maybe realise that he pays way too much attention to his MBKB 😆


No story would be complete without Krish’s one liners 😋


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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was Soo good..

Finally Raavi said something back to Rishita...

Loveed How Shiva said that she should answer back and that he will handle the rest...


i realllyy hope you will update today the other half.. can’t wait to read the other part.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

You’re so right! Raavi will see that Shiva also pays attention to her and it’ll soften her towards him! Shiva himself will maybe realise that he pays way too much attention to his MBKB 😆


No story would be complete without Krish’s one liners 😋



Yesss ! And also in comparison, you can make Rishita and Dev realise just still how much of each other they have yet to know. Come on, knowing and dating someone for 2 years can't be compared to knowing someone your whole life, even if half of that time is hating each other and the other half teasing each other. Dhara and Gaumbhi will be in the sidelines feeling elated and surprised with how much ShiVi is actually attached to each other and Suman'll be all smug and proud of her Shiva. I hope Mami will be there too ! Just so she can FINALLY be rest assured that her pyaari Raavi wil be well settled with Shiva. Oh And Shiva ? Being embarrassed and covering his blush with anger about how much he actually pays attention to his girl ☺️☺️


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanyshah


Yesss ! And also in comparison, you can make Rishita and Dev realise just still how much of each other they have yet to know. Come on, knowing and dating someone for 2 years can't be compared to knowing someone your whole life, even if half of that time is hating each other and the other half teasing each other. Dhara and Gaumbhi will be in the sidelines feeling elated and surprised with how much ShiVi is actually attached to each other and Suman'll be all smug and proud of her Shiva. I hope Mami will be there too ! Just so she can FINALLY be rest assured that her pyaari Raavi wil be well settled with Shiva. Oh And Shiva ? Being embarrassed and covering his blush with anger about how much he actually pays attention to his girl ☺️☺️


Omg Mami’s reaction to the while thing will be hilarious 😂😂 I am getting so excited to read the next part!!

Please update soon 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting concept ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Omg Mami’s reaction to the while thing will be hilarious 😂😂 I am getting so excited to read the next part!!

Please update soon 😊


Turns out part 2 is also getting too long 😆 So I'll post three parts in total. The second part will be up in sometime 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya269


Turns out part 2 is also getting too long 😆 So I'll post three parts in total. The second part will be up in sometime 😊


Eagerly waiting!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya269


Turns out part 2 is also getting too long 😆 So I'll post three parts in total. The second part will be up in sometime 😊


YEESS !! Looks like our comments are making you more excited to post !! ♥️😍♥️😍♥️😍

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