ShiVi TS: Shiva Ki Raavi (Last Part on Page 12, Updated 02/05/2021) - Page 3

This was such a good piece! Loved ShiVi banter and Raavi's challenge 😆

Can't wait to see how are misunderstandings about Shiva shatter

And the dialogues were awesome!

Please do update soon!

Can't believe I didn't see this yesterday. I was really looking forward to a quick ending for the MU but in ShiVi's tashan wala style.

Loved reading it. I could almost imagine all of this happening in that small store room. Shiva being grumpy and impatient. And Raavi's non-stop bhak bhak. Raavi vowing to expose him. 🤣

Tu… tu sachme kaat khayega kya?” she asked with wide eyes.

Shiva bit back a chuckle. She was so innocent sometimes.

Lagta hai isska ek time pe ek hi cheez kaam karta hai. Muh chalati hai toh dimaag bilkul off.

My fav bit from the story. Sometimes while watching the show I wish we had a look inside Shiva' head like what he is thinking. And I think you nailed it with his dialogues.

Can't wait to read more.

Love,

Abhi 🌼

Originally posted by: aashkairaan

This was such a good piece! Loved ShiVi banter and Raavi's challenge 😆

Can't wait to see how are misunderstandings about Shiva shatter

And the dialogues were awesome!

Please do update soon!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Abhipyaarhua

Can't believe I didn't see this yesterday. I was really looking forward to a quick ending for the MU but in ShiVi's tashan wala style.

Loved reading it. I could almost imagine all of this happening in that small store room. Shiva being grumpy and impatient. And Raavi's non-stop bhak bhak. Raavi vowing to expose him. 🤣

Tu… tu sachme kaat khayega kya?” she asked with wide eyes.

Shiva bit back a chuckle. She was so innocent sometimes.

Lagta hai isska ek time pe ek hi cheez kaam karta hai. Muh chalati hai toh dimaag bilkul off.

My fav bit from the story. Sometimes while watching the show I wish we had a look inside Shiva' head like what he is thinking. And I think you nailed it with his dialogues.

Can't wait to read more.

Love,

Abhi 🌼

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the dialogues ❤️

I ❤️ how close to reality you made ShiVi, but the last dialogue really had me! I would LOVE to see Alice say something similar, and I can already imagine Raavi saying this in her cute/angry voice!

Like the others have mentioned, can't wait to see how she finds out Shiva's true thoughts❤️

What an amazing creativity.. I can see this happening in our show.. can’t wait to read more

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

I ❤️ how close to reality you made ShiVi, but the last dialogue really had me! I would LOVE to see Alice say something similar, and I can already imagine Raavi saying this in her cute/angry voice!

Like the others have mentioned, can't wait to see how she finds out Shiva's true thoughts❤️

Thank you! ❤️

Lovely! I hope we get the next part soon! 👍🏼😊❤️

Originally posted by: mirai07

Lovely! I hope we get the next part soon! 👍🏼😊❤️

Thank you! I will update tonight (EST) ❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Thank you! Glad you liked it ❤️

You write such nice comments.. you should consider writing a story too 😆

I'm Aaliya.. what can I call you? 😳

Hi Aaliya! I like going by ML here.

Nice try.😆I don't want to torture people. 😆 Aur waise bhi itni mehnat se toh yeh forum active hua hai. Agar meine likha na toh sab bhag jayege😆.

Can't wait to read the next part.