ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 17

Created

Last reply

Replies

409

Views

82.4k

Users

81

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

Mountains_Lakes thumbnail
Easter Egg Contest Winner (2023) Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago

Oh man. This part made me feel multiple emotions and don't know which one is overpowering. Reading the the poem, I was dreading what was about to come.BBut is that foreshadow of ShiVi separation? I wanted inlaws to come but certainly not this way. Hasn't Raavi suffered enough?There's no man at home. Hope Shiva picks up the phone and comes home. Otherwise he's going to regret this. And Raavi will be seperated not only from Shiva, but her son too.


Also felt anxious and sad learning that because of her past Shiv and RAvi had to be stuck in room to avoid any gossip. Man want them to be married asap, so they can have their freedom.


And it was heart touching the way Shiv called Shiva as Papa. But I didn't know to be ecstatic at that fact or sad that it came at a time when Raavi claimed that she's got right to make final decisions in Shiv's life. I can't wait to see the time where Raavi addresses him as Shiv's papa and asks him to make a critical decision on his life. Think it may make up for this unintentional pain.


But please, please, please update next part soon and hope there's no seperation. It's time for the MIL and BIL to be put in place, not Raavi to suffer anymore.

Edited by Mountains_Lakes - 4 years ago
MeeraWrites thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago

It was amazing as always.👏 I'm loving the way you carry the story.

My heart is reaching out to Raavi.

Chotu laddoo is with Shiva, so he would be safe.


God! Finally they are at the pandya niwas to take Raavi back. 😭

Janardhan Seth ke log itne bhi nikamme kaise ho gaye? 😭

I hope Shiva will save her even before they could harm her physically. Coz, I'm already getting weird vibes from that Thakurain. And from this Adhuraj guy too.

I'm getting gut feeling that they would take Raavi back to haveli even before Shiva could reach home. 😔


Can't wait to read the next chapter....

Do update soon.

It's getting intriguing.

1200626 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Why this cliffhanger dear🙈😒

Post soon.. waiting for the ultimate confrontation

CheerlessIM thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Ohh God


Your poem n this update made Me scared 😨


Shiv called shiva papa 🤗🤗


Inka jhagda bhi abhi hi hona tha


Hope time pe shiva aa jaye


Kisi ko koi harm na ho


Air ye chaudhary ka chapter bhi hamesha ke liye khatam ho jaye


Update soon

Scribbled_tales thumbnail
Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail 5th Anniversary Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 4 years ago

Omg!! shocking...


amazing update. excited to know what will happen next.....please update soon......

Adrift_At-Sea thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago


[HIDDEN CONTENT]
The content of this post has been Hidden by User.
kavya12345 thumbnail
Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

hey...just read all the parts in one go...

nice ff

shiva and shiv bonding is nice👏

my fav part is raavi facing her struggles with the help of imaginary shiva...this is the proof of true love...even after going far from him she couldnt forget him

i just wanted to kill vaidehi😡

raavi raised a good point...even though vaidehi is a widow she didnt follow any rituals..the y should raavi follow it😡

shiva and raavis fight took an ugly turn....he could have waited in the house

i am sure shiva will save raavi now

and adhiraj...like mum like son😡

the way u described each of the emotions is awesome

do continue soon

will be waiting for ur update

love

KAVYA

ms.ObseSSeD thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 4 years ago

😲 Oh thr twist!! What an amazing update!! I'm literally at the edge of my seat. I want to know what happens! God I really hope that Shiva answered the last call and heard everything!! Bring the police!!

Amazing update! Like wow!

AsadZoyaILU thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 4 years ago

wow that was awesome

plz update next part soon

Shivi_forever thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 4 years ago

Shocking update😲

This choudhrain and her goons are dangerous😡

All wanted to help Raavi but were helpless😭

Loved Raav's escape moment, her inner strength Shiva helped her escape❤️

I think Shiva and rest will enter during the forced marriage and that will be the final encounter with Raavi's in laws

Hoping they will get the worst punishment

Waiting for next, update soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".