ShiVi OS: The Dove - Page 2

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

❤️ this was beautiful! I love how you compared the bird to their relationship and the way they healed over time. also, the way you described Shiva's emotions over the situation, can definitely be real because I think we are all realizing that Shiva might start to feel inferior to Dev when he finally falls in love with Rishita and you portrayed that emotion beautifully.

What were you thinking about as the banner? I can try making a gif but I'm not sure what scene that they already have that would work for this.

I was thinking of a simple poster. 3 parts in that. Pictures diagonally divided. On the top left corner sad Shiva and Raavi, bottom left happy Shiva and Raavi. Inbetween these two a Dove with the title name. I didn't think of any specific pics. Just a wild idea of this poster. 😋

Honestly I don't have any idea on making gifs or posters or banners or editing pictures... So I don't even know if it's feasible...

Any gif like the one where she holds her hand in phere time would do.

Thanks a lot for asking...

Loving this. Please do give us more such Shivi OS.

The two words that disappointed me in this fic were

La fin

pls pls write another hot part of them coming together

Write it hot with their bickering

I loved this story

I loved how you built it up

So well written

😍

Wow pliz give more update i loved how you wrote everythingpliz keep on writing more on shivi ❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍

Beautiful os. Loved reading it. Pari was bridge between them

Wonderful 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Very nice concept 👌

Beautiful narration. And very well written. 👏🥳

You wrote his inner turmoil so fluently. 👏

Loved the hurt wing and caged bird symbolism.

Have you written more stories? If no, do consider writing more. And if yes, can we please get an index?

You are an excellent writer! Much love🤗