A scene after their wedding - updated on page 16 - Page 9

Originally posted by: bookworm123

He was quiet for a bit then he said..".I could not stop thinking about you all night. As I was entering the hospital I could only think about you"... after a pause he added..".every night after that I thought about you"

His nearness in that cramped space, his words, that deep voice, his gaze, it was all too much and she could not meet his eyes anymore

Asfand ran his eyes over her delectable form slowly ...from the wisps of damp hair at her forehead, to her eyes that were lowered, dwelling on her lips and then lower ..her chest rising and falling with every breath she took...and then back to her lips...

"I think I should go" she said softly.

"Ok", he said quietly looking into her eyes..

Originally posted by: SS88

Part 5- WOW. I absolutely love it. I can't wait for their engagement. Is Asfand going to talk to Rehan? Or will he just ignore him as he ignored Zubiya for so long?

OMG so beautiful👏👏

Originally posted by: .Anya.

OMG so beautiful👏👏

I want next update right now

Originally posted by: bookworm123

For that I need time and inspiration...

Tomorrow's episode should take care of the inspiration part but time?? 😆

Loving the updates Lizzie (hope you don't mind me calling you by your name).

You captured the general awkwardness of Zubiya so well.

Asfi being Asfi and he brought up the message! 😆

OMG, I am totally blushing, 😳gosh you are such a wonderful writer, this is sooo romantic, loved it so much, I just loved the way you got the Text here ☺️ I so wish they do that in the show too. You conveyed their emotions so well, loved their interaction, Please do continue soon. I can not wait to read the next chapter..

She looked at him from under her eyelashes ..watching his strong hands gripping the steering wheel, the muscles under his shirt shifting as he changed gears...she could see the strong column of his neck, his shirt slightly open, his chest hair visible..she looked up to see that he was looking at her..while she was looking at him..oh lord...she blushed and looked away...

So beautiful, I am totally☺️

Great fun to read Ch 5 and 6. I love the way the good doctor dosent do so well with most conversations, except where you allowed him to boss. His insufferable bossiness is so irritating and cute. Loved it.

Originally posted by: octaverider

Loving the updates Lizzie (hope you don't mind me calling you by your name).

You captured the general awkwardness of Zubiya so well.

Asfi being Asfi and he brought up the message! 😆