~*Paas Ho Kar Kitne Door Thay Hum*~

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey everyone, this is my first story for PSF...I had actually started it as a fan-fiction last summer, but never finished it. So I will just continue with that one😊

Two girls are shown in their room. The older one is cleaning her closet and the younger one is using the computer. Their mom, Fariha (yes I am an aunty)šŸ˜†, comes into their room.

Fariha: Madiha, packing kar li? Jaldi karo aur...aray Kiran! Ye koi waqt hai hai computer use karne ka? Chalo ab utho aur apni baji ko packing ke liye madad karo.

Kiran: Okay mama!

Fariha goes and Madiha-Kiran start packing. They are going for Madiha's wedding to another city.

On the other hand, a family is gathered in their front yard for their evening tea when the wife asks her husband…

Naina: Wo log kitne baje tak pohnchenge?

Daniyal: Kal shaam ko paanch (5) baje tak aa jayenge.

Yasir: Bhaiyya, chai thandi ho rahi hai.

Hammad: Han main pee raha hoon...

Yasir: Kya baat hai bhaiyya? hone wali bhabi ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai? šŸ˜‰

Hammad: Yasir! chup! He gets up to hit him when Yasir runs into his room! He gets online and starts chatting with someone. Yasir doesn't realize how much time has passed by while chatting. His mom comes into his room.

Naina: Yasir beta bahut raat ho chuki hai ab tum so jao. Kal bahut kaam hain.

Yasir: Okay mom, bas thori der aur.

Naina goes and Yasir continues chatting.

Yasir (to his friend): Okay, now I gotta go. Kal hamare ghar Islamabad se bhaiyya ke susraal walay aa rahe hain.

Girl on the other hand: Wow that's great! Hum bhi kal subah Karachi ke liye nikal rahe hain. Baji ki shaadi hai na. But I will miss you a lot 😭

Yasir: Me too 😭 Par Tum mere sheher (city) mein aaogi to phir hum zaroor milenge. Acha ab to apna naam bata do.

Yasir presses enter and the power goes out!😔

Yasir (to himself): Shoot! Light ko bhi abhi hi jana tha! Shayad aaj wo apna naam bata deti.

The girl who was talking to Yasir types "Kiran" when she notices that Yasir is offline. She turns off her computer and goes to sleep thinking of "y4yazi" (Yasir's nick)

***Kiran's nick is "cutefairy"***

End of Part 1

What will happen now? Was this the last time Yasir and Kiran talked? Will they ever find out each other's identity? How will their paths cross once again? To find out...stay tuned to read the next part of Paas Ho Kar Kitne Door Thay HumšŸ˜›

Hope you all liked it,
Fariha

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow fariha dat's a gr8 story plzzzz plzzzzz post the part 2 ASAP plzzzzz 😳 😳 l luv it šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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O Wow!!! I didnt notice that it was ur own story!! while i was waiting for it for days now!... thanks a lot for posting dear... will edit my post after reading it!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG.. this is soo interesting Fari! U r a very good writer.. shall be waiting for next part.. post it soon.. 😊😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Fariha Baji!!!!Excellent Job!
At first i didnt wanted to read it but as i read i kept glued to it!!!!
Plz Post the Part 2 as soon as possible!
😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wen r u gonna post part 2 i hoope is ASAP 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: daniacute99

wen r u gonna post part 2 i hoope is ASAP 😳

inshallah later today or tomorrow😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was an awesome story hun.. it sounds like lovey dovey story .. i luv readin luv stories:S.shhhh dun tell ne wun hehehe.... newayz i'll be waitin for da next part... iigh tc later hun
muah(L)nuff luv
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cant wait till the next part...but it was good😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good...but i think you got this idea from that drama..."Phir Youn Love Hua"....lol

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