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intro- Okay, This FF, Is about a girl named Sapna, who moves from Japan to America πŸ˜ƒ Her dad's buisness makes him travel alotπŸ˜† So when they get to America, Sapna slowly finds out she has a long long, long, loooong lost sister she never knew about πŸ˜† So naturally, She tries to find her πŸ˜‰

I know it sounds sorta cheesy but its pretty good once I get into it πŸ˜ƒ

The Purple letters are what people are thinking πŸ˜† In this case, its sapna.... I'll remember to put the character's names next to their thoughts next time πŸ˜‰

Japan*----

Sapna and her friends, Seiko, and Kimi are playing in the park 😳😳😳

They buy some icecream.... their favorite icecreams 😳( I wont get into confusing details πŸ˜†)

They enjoy their favorite park... The Park of Roses πŸ˜ƒ Messing around...Taking lots a pics also 😳

They go to the pond nearby... and take more pictures πŸ˜†πŸ˜† They rip some paper out of Kimi's Hello Kitty notebook and make origami swans (???) πŸ˜†

Seiko- Lets promise to be best friends forever no matter what 😊 If Sapna becomes a manga artist in Russia, Kimi gets admitted into a Mental hospital or whatever πŸ˜› We'll always be friends right???

Sapna-Of course!! Like how the mailmans say--- Through neither rain nor--

Seiko-*Aheeemm* πŸ˜›

Sapna- Oh.. sorry πŸ˜†

And with that, they let go of their swans and let them float away in the pond😳

awwwwwwww πŸ˜ƒ

They take more pics..... more masti πŸ˜† Kimi falls into the water πŸ˜† Seiko get icecream all over herself πŸ˜† Sapna takes pics of them looking ridiculous πŸ˜†

They plan for a sleepover πŸ˜ƒ And they make sure if its alright with K's and S's parents πŸ˜† Sapna's say yes and they stay at Kimi's house πŸ˜†πŸ˜Š

***They reach Sapna's house***πŸ˜ƒ

s and K stand oustide while sapna's parents talk with sapna....

S, we have sad news... we are moving πŸ˜› yep.... in 1 week.... pennsylvania... uh-huh.... stop crying.... get packed soon.... say ur goodbyes.... and hurry up naa πŸ˜ƒ


blah blah.... oirbh[oweihkdnf;sdeh[ew9rho;khlUIFOQ8e


oqewihpewiohfipeuhjdhljhsifhEIUH


NO NO NO 😭 😭 😭


YEP YEP YEP


fine fine.... but u wont hear the end of it πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Chapter1πŸ˜›

My moon my man so changable and.... πŸ˜• such a loveable lamb to ME πŸ˜† πŸ˜† nanana... nan..nan...na... Take it sloooooow πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› take it easy on me.... and shed some light... shed some light on me pleas πŸ˜†

Sapna wake up!!! 😑 😑 😑

What!? what!?.... she falls asleep πŸ˜†

sister- Get up!! its time for ou new school to start!! 😑 😑 😑 U lazy bum πŸ˜† πŸ˜† u know u have about 20 mins to get ready, eat and get to school πŸ˜† πŸ˜† (she skips away)

Sapna thinking- Wow... we're in the states alreay πŸ˜† i cant believe it was only yesterday that i was laughing and taking pictures of my besy buds... and now im here...in the good old "United States of America" 🀒

Sapna quickly takes a shower.... burshes teeth.... gets ready.... eats... and runs outside to catch da bus πŸ˜›

Hey!

Sapna looking around all confused πŸ˜•πŸ˜• Who would want to talk to me??? leave me alone 😑 lemme enjoy my first day painfully by ma self 🀒

U!! over there with the big hair!! πŸ˜†

Gr88... first she starts yelling at me and nows shes makin fun of my hair 🀒

You forgot to zip up ur pants!! πŸ˜†

What!? This is some cruel joke I dont wanna yell on my first day... she better stop this.... I think I'll check my pants anyway 😳 Oh lord.... they are unzipped 😳

Bus arrives.... Sapna takes the back (it makes u jump😳 when the bus goes over something.... more exciting πŸ˜†)

That strange girl site right next to her as if they were best friends or something 😳

Ugh.... what does she want now???😳

I'm Ashley!! πŸ˜ƒ

Oohh.... thats nice i guess πŸ˜› (turns to look out window)

Are u new here??

Duuhh....🀒🀒🀒 Have you ever seen me around here?? 🀒 Course I'm new...

Sorry.... Just askin 😳

Geez... ur ways of starting convos are pathetic man πŸ˜†

Ummmmm πŸ€” Whats your's ??? πŸ˜ƒ

Sapna..... πŸ˜”

Cool !!! Mine's Ashley 😳

Oh thats nice ashley... 😊 Now... If you dont mind, I'd like to continue staring out at the window 😳 Do you mind....? πŸ˜ƒ

Ummm.... no its ok... i guess 😳

Bus stops

*Sigh* We're already here.....

It's ok!!! You'll get plenty of time to stare out the window on ur way back from school !! πŸ˜ƒ

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kadhambari thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haiyya,i'm 1st....... πŸ˜ƒ lemme read it 1st
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kads engannanlum nee mudikira πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

ok let me read first

cool nishi thats what i can πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Edited by nallu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i need 2 wait 4 u'r character's intro 1st ....it is quite confusing 4 me....but y do u name papathi πŸ˜‰ papathi is usually used in villages(i think so) but u'r characters are all in abroad,enna matter da πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys are too slow πŸ˜† πŸ˜† im reading ur FF nallu πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good start maa. Only netra bit confused naa. Can't say which is mind reading or which they are talking. Try different them with colours yar. Dats be easy for those whom reading.

Urrmm how old are they? 16 or 17 maa? Puppy love huh 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kadhambari

i need 2 wait 4 u'r character's intro 1st ....it is quite confusing 4 me....but y do u name papathi πŸ˜‰ papathi is usually used in villages(i think so) but u'r characters are all in abroad,enna matter da πŸ˜‰

yesh i still havent got the intro up yet naa 😳 i dunno... papathi is my doll πŸ˜³πŸ˜† cute name naa πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
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u'r title reminded me of this.,

"mottai Paapathi rotti sutaalaam,
ennai pathalaiyaam, kadaikku ponaalam,
kaasu pathalaiyaam, kadai kaaranai
paarthu kannadichaalaam"
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kadhambari

u'r title reminded me of this.,

"mottai Paapathi rotti sutaalaam,
ennai pathalaiyaam, kadaikku ponaalam,
kaasu pathalaiyaam, kadai kaaranai
paarthu kannadichaalaam"

ambi ur soooo funny 🀣🀣 plz translate though πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kadhambari

u'r title reminded me of this.,

"mottai Paapathi rotti sutaalaam,
ennai pathalaiyaam, kadaikku ponaalam,
kaasu pathalaiyaam, kadai kaaranai
paarthu kannadichaalaam"

🀣🀣🀣 Ambi, aiyo aiyo yenna ore rouse ungaleke..πŸ˜†

Let me translate that for you in english Nishi πŸ˜†

Bold Butterfly bread round πŸ˜†

after seing me went to shop

not enough money to buy

so wink at the shopper πŸ˜†πŸ€£

Edited by netra_rama - 17 years ago

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