Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 35

Super Leena, my heart goes out to Kailash. Can't wait for the ending.

Pat

Originally posted by: Shalinikanthan

well nd leens wo s dat divyanka nd sachin in ur signature😉

divyanka & sachin are tv actors who act in hindi serials. i esp love divyanka, she is gorgeous!😳😳😳

anyways, here is my last & final installment of this story.😃

CHAPTER 57 - Finale.

ONE YEAR LATER

"come on deepa! why are you taking so long?" swetha shouted from the living room. deepa yelled back her reply & rushed to put on her favourite pair of hoop earrings. she heard baby nishtha crying. "poor baby! she must be hungry. why don't you give her some milk?" deepa scolded swetha as she walked out into the living room. "jerry has gone to get her milk bottle from the car." swetha smiled & tried to soothe baby nishtha. "come on. give her to me! nishtha likes me the best right? nishtha loves her godmother very much doesn't she?" deepa cooed cutely to the baby. as if on cue, the child ceased crying & smiled at deepa. "how do you do that?" swetha asked her for the millionth time. even though swetha was the mother of the child, nishtha had always been more attached to deepa.

looking at deepa play with baby nishtha, swetha felt a surge of happiness. swetha was happy that jerry had reunited her at last. all that was possible because of deepa & ajay. ajay had sent out someone to find jerry in the US but when he had located jerry, jerry had refused to cooperate. deepa had gone straight over to the US, given jerry a piece of her mind & had reunited him with swetha. swetha still had the feeling that jerry was scared of deepa. "I wonder what she did there?" swetha wondered. deepa refused to divulge anything so did jerry. they both were tight lipped about what happened that day in US at jerry's home. a few months after jerry's return, baby nishtha was born. everyone was filled with happiness. swetha knew what was most important was that jerry was reunited with her finally. but a small thought had always nagged swetha. she was happy with her life but deepa wasn't. her eyes always had a tinge of sadness in them no matter how much she smiled. the only time deepa looked 100% happy was when she was playing with nishtha.

"shall we leave?" jerry poked his head through the open door, snapping swetha out of her thoughts. deepa took nishtha & walked down to the car. but swetha remained seated till jerry shook a hand in front of her face. "hello madam?" shall we leave?" he asked her, kissing her lightly on the cheek. "yes, let's go." swetha smiled back at him & in her heart she wished like mad that deepa should get back her lost love. all the four of them including baby nishtha were going for preethi's & ajay's engagement. their love story was an interesting one indeed.

kailash had asked ajay to send some things over to him at Australia. ajay was packing kailash's handycam when he heard a noise. someone was coming into the room. arming himself with kailash's cricket bat, ajay charged out to find a pretty girl armed with a lamp, screaming her head off. preethi on the other hand had come in to clean kailash's apartment. she was shocked to find the door ajar & was afraid that there was a robbery taking place. she called the police stealthily & unplugged a lamp from the living room. she inched towards the room where she heard some sounds. the next moment, a madman came rushing out armed with a cricket bat & preethi just screamed her lungs out.

the police arrived to find two very angry people fighting on the top of their voices. "were you just trying to hit me with that cricket bat?" preethi screamed at ajay. "hello? you were trying to murder me with that lamp?" an equally agitated ajay yelled back her. the police took more than an hour to break the argument up. in the end, all was sorted out when preethi & ajay had calmed down. the policemen smiled amongst themselves as they left & left them both behind to an embarrassed silence. preethi & ajay looked at each other for a moment & had burst into laughter. they both had been kailash's friends but had never met before, thus the misunderstanding. after that problem was sorted out, ajay & preethi started a beautiful friendship that soon blossomed into love. deepa was ecstatic when ajay told her that preethi had accepted his proposal. it looked like everything was falling into place finally.

deepa smiled to herself as she remembered ajay's & preethi's hilarious love story. it was that day that they were getting engaged. the car reached ajay's familiar looking mansion & deepa could see that the function was a large scale affair. crowds were milling about dressed in Indian finery. memories of her time spent in the mansion came flooding back to deepa but she pushed all thoughts of him out of her mind. she put a smile on her face & greeted the happy couple. they all chatted for a while until preethi took deepa away. she was dressed in a beautiful pink saree & she glowed with happiness. "why did you bring me away from them preethi?" deepa asked her curiously. "I want you to help me with something. would you please help me?" preethi pleaded with her. deepa nodded without hesitation. preethi then led her into the sunny garden & made her sit on one of the seats there. "but why isn't anyone here? and what do you want me to help you with?" deepa enquired, getting impatient. "wait deepa. just give me 10 minutes okay?" with that preethi left deepa alone in the garden.

slightly annoyed by preethi's behaviour, deepa sat at the bench for a while. she finally got bored & started to take a stroll amongst the beautiful blooms. the smell of fresh flowers & the cool breeze made deepa less tense. she felt all the muscles in her body relax as she basked in warm sunshine. "enjoying yourself?" a voice asked from behind. "yes, I am. this garden is so…" deepa stopped short as she recognised the man. "beautiful." kailash replied looking down at her. they both just stared at each other, one year of absence had changed both of them. kailash looked stylish & sleek in his black suit, his eyes looked sad but he seemed more confident & much more suave than before. deepa remained mostly the same except that she had lost her beautiful smile that kailash so dearly loved.

kailash broke the silence first. "how are you deepa?" he asked her softly. "I'm.. fine…" deepa faltered real bad. she felt ashamed to look at him, after all she never gave him a chance to explain to her. noticing her pained expression, kailash got the impression that deepa knew the whole truth now. before she could say anything, deepa cut in. "kailash, I'm so sorry about what happened. I was so stupid! please.. please forgive me if you can." she begged him sadly. "I;ve already forgiven you. it was my mistake as much as it was yours." he smiled at her. deepa's heart lightened considerably & she smiled softly. "so are you married or seeing anyone?" kailash looked hopeful. "no." deepa replied simply. "how about you?" she questioned him. they were interrupted by a white girl who walked over to kailash & kissed him on the cheek. "deepa.. this is.." kailash started introducing the girl when he realised that deepa was gone.

the moment the white girl kissed kailash deepa knew that he had forgotten her. he might have had forgiven her but he didn't love her anymore. that girl was his girlfriend. deepa knew that if she had stayed a moment longer there, she would have burst into tears. voices called out to her as deepa walked past them but her mind was blank. she reached the entrance & was about to leave when someone pulled her to him. smelling a familiar cologne, deepa looked up to find kailash. "don't you ever listen to the full story?" he looked amused. "what do you mean? you already have a girlfriend. and please don't say you treat me like a sister!" deepa childishly scolded him. kailash burst into laughter & hugged her. "don't touch me." deepa pushed him away roughly. "okay,okay. but listen to me. Fran is my secretary. she takes care of my business in Australia. her husband is right over there." he pointed at a corner where Fran was standing with a tall white man. deepa blushed as she realised that she had been too hasty yet again. "so you're not married?" she asked him. "no." came the reply. "you don't have a girlfriend?" "no.", "you didn't date anyone over.." deepa's question was cut short by kailash's lips on hers. that sweet kiss was filled with longing & happiness. "there's only been you in my eyes. it'll always be you." kailash told deepa sweetly. "you promise?" she asked him happily. "hmmm.. no.." kailash teased her & she reached out to smack him. laughing at her indigance, kailash pulled deepa into a warm tight hug. he felt his shirt turn wet with her tears & he realised that he himself was crying out of happiness. "don't ever leave me again. I was so lonely without you." deepa cried. "I won't leave you if you don't leave me deepa." he replied holding her even tighter.

he noticed the smiling faces around him & realised that it was the plan of all those around him to get deepa & him back together. ajay had called him over to India for his engagement only to reunite him with deepa. "thank you." he mouthed silently to them & they all nodded happily. ajay & preethi moved the party to another room & left kailash & deepa alone in the hall. deepa was still sobbing when she realised that there was no one else in the hallway except her & kailash. "where are the rest?" she asked kailash & he replied that they had left them alone for a private moment. releasing deepa from his embrace, kailash took out a small box. "I've been waiting for this moment for so long." he told her happily & revealed a ring in the box. "will you marry me deepa?" kailash proposed to a shocked deepa. "yes. yes I will kailash. I will marry you!" she told him excitedly. "you will? thanks deepa. thanks!" kailash pulled deepa in for a long kiss & deepa sank into his embrace. they stood that way for a long time till deepa broke away. "let's tell this news to everyone else!" she took kailash by the hand & led him to the party in the next room. that day marked a new beginning for deepa & kailash & they both promised themselves that they'll treasure that second chance. "maybe we were really meant to be." kailash smiled up to the heavens as deepa's hold on his hand tightened.

😛 THE END 😛

i hope you all liked this last chapter! i think i've tied up all loose ends, please remind me if i've left anyone or anything out.😊

i'd also like to thank all those people who read & supported my fanfic.😃

pat, meli, usha, jenim, serial123, shalini, BK, caryn, uma & if i've left anyone else, i'm sorry. but i'd like to thank every single person who has read my story!😳😳

thank you!!!! 👏👏👏

i would be starting on my next fanfic soon. i hope to get all your love & support for it too.😃

AHA ME FIRST! ME FIRST!

I simply love the ending. Brought tears to my eyes. Fantastic.

But there is one question - in the first chapter, you mention the wedding between Deepa and Ajay and the wedding called off at the altar, Deepa waits at the garden where Kailash comes and meets her. Your ending here is different. Looks like you changed it according to the flow of the story.

I would like to commend you on your story and looking forward to the next with anticipation.

MY SALUTATIONS TO A FINE WRITER!

👏

Thanks again.

Pat

Originally posted by: patraj

But there is one question - in the first chapter, you mention the wedding between Deepa and Ajay and the wedding called off at the altar, Deepa waits at the garden where Kailash comes and meets her. Your ending here is different. Looks like you changed it according to the flow of the story.

i had to change it according to the story pat. i hope that wasn't too big a mistake.😉

awwww.. i'm feeling so sad. this was one of my best loved stories & i had to end it.😭😭 haiz.. i guess all good things must come to an end.😭😭😭

YES YOU ARE RIGHT - WHEN THERE IS A BEGINNING THERE MUST BE AN ENDING.

IT'S NOT A BIG MISTAKE - IN FACT THIS ENDING WAS MORE ROMANTIC THAN THE FIRST ONE.

DON'T BE SAD - YOU HAVE MADE US (READERS) VERY HAPPY BY GIVING US A GREAT STORY. THE FIRST THING I LOOK FOR WHEN I COME INTO THE OFFICE AND LOG ON IS YOUR STORY AND MADHU'S. YOU BOTH HAVE GIVEN ME GREAT PLEASURE AND I CAN'T THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR THAT.

A BIG 🤗 FOR YOU FROM ME.

PAT

Very nice Leena. Beautiful ending. 👏

Leena,

Very good story. I will really miss this fiction from now...its almost a habit for me to read your fiction before i start my work. I have never seen PENN serial but saw prajin only in Anjali...i really like him....but his anjali character is irritating...and that chewing gum....that really turns me off. But hey when i read your story..i could almsot feel like prajin and deepa in front of me doing their characters...so sweet! Lets just hope that some serial guys sees your story
and make a serial out of it...GOod job Leena...wonderful work!

madhu

NICE CHAPTER LEENA I LOVE IT. YR FAN FICTION IS FAB. A NICE HAPPY ENDING!

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wow what a cute ending. Sos sad story ended 😭 . Its ok we are waiting for the next story. but leena pat said abt the garden seen but u hav mentiond it wen the flash back finsihes dat kailash was rethinking abt the story : kailash saw the sadness in her eyes, the same sadness he saw in them when he found her crying at the back of the wedding hall. "haiz.. why must we both be made to go through all these?" kailash sighed sadly coming back to the present moment. : in these lines u hv mentioned abt the back of garden. probably u both forgot i guess hehe . but wen r u starting ur next one then. As madu said i neve watched penn fully nd started to watch anjali nd liked prajin from dat. btu i ahet tht ashok cgaracetr but ur story made me to feel great to see him in such a loverboy role. hope u will write the next story on prajin n meera with their own name will be good i am only requesting nd its upto u nd choose a really cathy anme lik kailash nd deepa. 😳

I have missed a couple chapters and suddenly you have ended it...
The climax scene was funny and cute. 😆 Kailash has really suffered a lot because of one mistake. You have portrayed Khailash and Deepas feeling very well. We could feels with them and understand their emotions. Brilliant work, Leena. Thanks for all the 57 chapters. 👏 👏 👏
You are not only "punnagai arasi", but also "romantic queen" in our forum. 😳