SS:Manam virumbuthey unnai (part 3&4 -page 6))

Hi friends i tried new ss.am sure i willcomplete this,wont leave in middle nambi padingo makkaz😎

part 1 (page1)



part3 & part 4 (page 6)

Wow,new ss aa.OK sis padikurom but update enga???

SS :Manam virumbuthey unnai (part 1)

Karthik walks inside the office .He thinks " who could be that," .Karthik sees a message "we will meetup soon ". Vishnu asks " dei yenna achu time agitey irukku,phone ah parthutey irukka ne" . karthik " perusa oruvelayum illeye da" . vishnu "amam illa "


.karthik" aprom yenna" .vishnu " athukaga late ah poga mudyum ah,ithu yenna collage ah" . karthik" macha inga paru yetho oru puthu number ,we will meet up soon nu msg" .vishnu " oru vel Angel ah irukkum ohv"


Karthik " ava illa da ,Raji ah divorce panitenu kandapadi thitita". Vishnu "avaluku kooda theryuthu". Karthik " Raji santhosam ah irukkanum,nan illam ah puthu veetla,nimmathiya irukka athu pothum". Vishnu " dei vai la nalla varuthu". Karthik " atha vida ithu yara irukkum". Vishnu " vera yaru un pinnadiye suthitu irukaley madhavi avalathan irukkum". Karthik " illa macha neye paren intha message ah ".

Vishnu reads " anbulla snehithaney ne vilagi pogathey konjam suyanalam irukkalam,Appa Amma kaga vitu kodukatha kathalai ippo yarukagavo vitu kodukrai,muttalah irukkathey "



Karthik " ippo sollu" .vishnu " machan nama pesunatha yaro ottu ketrukanga da ". Karthik " sari vidu parkalam". Vishnu " thappu da,Raji kita pesu sorry kelu,thevai illam ah life ah spoil panikatha". Karthik " Raji ippo than nan panathellam maranthu theliva nimathiya irukka,marupadyum avala kayapadutha virumbaley ".

Raji comes " yenna vishnu ivlo late". Vishnu "yellam yen friend than late panitan". Raji looks at karthik. Vishnu " aprom puthu veedu yeppadi irukku". Raji " romba santhosam ah,amaithya irukku". Karthik feels bad. . vishnu mindvoice " haiyoo Raji avan ah kadupethrenu ippadi solli innum avan ah yethi vidreengley". Raji " yenachu nan nimmathiya iruken nu sonna silent agiteenga". Vishnu " ippo puryuthunga nimathiya irukanumna veeta mathanum,yen friend oruthan avan wife ah divirce panathula irunthu kudichutey irukkan,sapdrathu illey,thoongrathu illey,konjam naal pona office kum varamatan pola,so avan veeta udanadiya shift pananum".

Karthik " dei nan ketana". Vishnu " ketkam ah seiyrathu than natpu". Karthik " poda nan sonnanen ah nimathiya illenu ". Vishnu " athellam vera ,yenga veetu pakathula oru veedu rent ku ready evg eh shift panidalam". Karthik " onnum thevai illa". Vishnu "illa macha ithu venum,Raji matum avanga friend veetu pakathula thaney irukkanga". Raji looks at him. Karthik looks at Raji. Vishnu " sari Raji nanga kilambarom".

Raji receives the message " ne avan nimmathiyaga irupathaga ninaikrai,unmaiathu valla,ne parthathu poi,nijam neye kandu pidi ,unnai nesithavan anbu unmaiyanathu,kobathai vitu unmaiyai thedu".

Kamal comes and asks " yenna Raji panitu irukka". Raji shows the message. Kamal " ithu yenna puthusa irukku ".Raji " oru vela karthik ah nan thappa purinchuten oh ". Kamal " ne than sollanum". Raji " intha message yaru anupirpa". Kamal " vishnu va irukkum oh". Raji " avar illey vera yaro". Kamal " oh appadiya".Raji " dei athu nethaney". Kamal " hey nan ah kandipa illey ".Raji gets confused.



Kamal adds " nan unaku friend than ,analum ithellam panura alavuku nallavan illa". Kamal receives the message " natpu athu nesipavargal valkai il santhosam thara muyarchi edukum,ne nalla nanban yosithu par puryum". Kamal " yenathu ithu yellorkum round katti message anupranga". Raji laughs " yetho onnu yaro vilyadranga sari vidu". Kamal " oru velai unmaiya irukkum oh ". Raji " yethu". Kamal " karthik oda love true va irukalam illey". Raji " appadi iruntha avan yen yenna vitu poran,sushan kaga yenna vitu poitan,ipoo nimathi ya illatha mathri scene poduran ". Kamal " sari vidu va poi sooda coffee sapidalam".



Raji " avan ah yevlo nesichen avan yen mela vachurntha love poi ". Kamal " vidu divorce panitum ne avan ah thitra". Raji " yen kastam unaku puryala". Kamal " purya vendam va". Raji receives the message" yenudiya anbu matumey unmai,nan matumey athigam aga nesikren yengira ninavey oru uravin virisal ku adithalam amaithu vidum". Raji turns around and looks .kamal " yenna achu". Raji " inga yarum ponangla". Kamal " illiye". Raji " sari va pogalam"



Next Day

Some body knocks the door.karthik " yenna macha ivlo early ah". Vishnu " veedu matum pudhusu illey ini palakam kooda mathikanum". Karthik " dei mani 5 ". Vishnu " so what 5 maniku yelunthu jogging poganum". Karthik " nan varaley". Vishnu " ippadi yellam yen valkai la vilayadatha va da".

Karthik " un valkai ah". Vishnu " adappaavi yenaku nu oru life irukku macha". Karthik " puryara mathri sollu". Vishnu " lakhsmi oda friend daily um jogging pora athan ,namum athey time ku pona,lakhsmi pathi visarikalam illey". Karthik" appo mani". Vishnu " nan thirunthiten macha". Karthik laughs " sari va".

In beach

Vishnu stops the bike.karthik & vishnu starts to walk.He gets surprised to see Raji there .Both looks at each other . karthik " ne inga". Raji " jogging poga varen,oru varusam ah itha seyren,unaku theryathu". Vishnu " sari sari time avthu nanga walk panrom". Karthik goes with him.karthik thinks " nan yetha seya ninanachu yetha ilanthurken,appa,amma,wife nu yelloryum veruthurken yethuku,nan santhosam ah irukkava ,nan yen ippadi marunen".


Vishnu " macha inga paru kulfi". Karthik " exercise panurapo yethuku sapadu". Vishnu " ithu nalla kelvi macha". Karthik " lakshmi oda friend ah kanomey". Vishnu " wait panu da mothal ah distance la irunthu parkanum,aprom pesanum,chatnu pesun ah antha ponnu adichudum". Karthik laughs .



Vishnu " yenna siripu". Karthik " lakhsmi oda friend yarunu purinchudchu". Vishnu " over karpanai da ,nan sonathu atho avanga". Karthik sees the girl .vishnu " un vishyam mudinchathu macha ,ini unaku Raji illey,Raji ku ne illey,so life ah paru valkai la yevlo vishyam irukku theryum ah". Karthik gets sad on hearing those words but didnt showed. Vishnu " anga paren Raji jogging mudichitu antha alaigal ah rasichutu nikranga". Karthik looks at raji.Raji turns to them and smiles .both moves to her. Vishnu " Yenna Raji thaniya va vantheenga". Raji " nan thaniyathaney irukken". Vishnu " yaru sonathu ungaluku appa,amma,thatha,paati friends nu yellorumey irukkanga,ippadi orutharmey illatha karthik kooda thaniya irukken nu solikrathu illey".


Raji " appo sympathi create panren nu solreengla". Karthik " Machan kilambalam ah". Raji " vitutu porathu pudhusa yenna". Karthik " illa Raji,konjam velai irukku bike service ku vidanum ,time agidchu". Vishnu " Raji neenga yeppadi vantheenga". Raji " yen therinchutu yenna seyya poreenga". Vishnu" oru vela car ah iruntha yenna drop panna solla than". Raji smiles " yenaku velai irukku varen". She moves.


Raji receives the message " un santhosam than unaku mukkiyam,un kathal ,un valkai po yendru sonnal poi vidavatha"


Karthik receives the message " kalam thalthahey yerkanvey kalam kadanthu vitathu snehithaney viraivaga sell un kathalai thedi". Karthik "machan inga paren marupadyum". Vishnu " yaru da ithu velai illam ah advise panitu,sari vidu innaiku breakfast yenna". Karthik " food order panirken". Vishnu " mudyathu ne collage days seiviye oru sandwitch atha seiyalam,sapidrom,office kilambarom ". Karthik " dei". Vishnu " ada appa,amma,oorkupoirukanga da,nalla sapadu venum,so ne cook panrey". Karthik looks at him.vishnu " look vitathu pothum va"



Rajii sits in her home.some one knocks the door. Raji opens the door and gets surprised to see her.Angel " onnum illa inga room share panikalam nu ,owner sollalilya".Raji " illa sonnar,ana ne nu ninakala". Angel " life la nama yethirparkathathu yellam nadakuthu illey". Raji " ne ne yenga work panrey". Angel " kavala padathama yenaku kalyanam agidchu,nan netech la than irukken pothum ah".


Raji feels relived.Angel laughs .Raji " yenna". Angel " illa ne avaney vendamnu solitu inga vanthey,yenna parthathum possasiveness light ah yetti pakuthey,apo un kita innum love irukku". Raji " Angel please,yenaku yarumelayum love illa,pudhusa vala ninaikren".Angel " all the best Raji". Both shakes hands saying " friends".



Both Raji & Angel gets ready for office .kamal comes in saying " nan ready kilambalam ah". Angel " hey Raji ithan kamal ah". Raji " amam". Angel smiles.Kamal " neenga yaru". Angel thinks " sorry raji kalyanam agidchu nu poi soliten,but intha kamal ah parthathum pidichurkey yenna panrathu ippo". Kamal " yaru ivanga". Angel " nanum ungala mathri than,college days la karthik ah love panen,aprom vendamnu soltu poiten,thirumbavantha ivanga mela avan uyireye vachurnthan,so friend ah irukken ippo ivanga rendu perkum".


Well drop panathaney,yenna netech la drop panidunglen". Raji "hey yenaku seekram poganum,so first yenna office la drop panidu". Angel " sari anga irunthu auto pidichu poikren,eveninganageye vanthudren " . Raji agrees.kamal blinks.


Karthik & vishnu were having breakfast.some one knocks the door.karthik opens the door.Lakhsmi " karthikkk". Karthik" lakhsmi ne inga".Lakhsmi " room share panikratha solirnthen,house owner sollaliya". Vishnu " machan nan kilambaren". Lakhsmi " innum kobam ah irukan ah". Karthik " konjam konjam". Lakhsmi " unvishyam kelvi paten,sutham ah pidikaley da,ne panathu thappu". Karthik " puryuthu ana".. Vishnu " nan kilambaren macha",

Lakhsmi " unga office ku vanthurka puthu acting head nanthan". Vishnu murmurs " neram". Lakhsmi " nalla irukku illey" .karthik smiles.vishnu morachufies


Friends hope i didnt bored you all.waiting for ur reviews .

Originally posted by: Lekha96

Wow,new ss aa.OK sis padikurom but update enga???

posted da check it

sema start😉

I liked this sequence...vidamaa message panraa andha so called X...Karthik and Raji current situation..Vishnu friendship to karthik..Raji alone scene...Angel entry...I love this...

Semma.. Top gear start... Nice story :)

Nice start
do continue :)

good good.. seem story

Thanks Daffi for the SS, nice to see you writing again. Hhhmm everyone getting texts, wonder who that person is.