~~FF : Neeindri Naanillai~~Chapter 14 (Page 69) - Page 37

Shiny bro, what an 'asathal' update?! I loved every bit of it, right from the Romeo & K introduction to each other, Raji being sent of in an auto rickshaw with K's funding, R being declared the best performer, KR convo on the road, K's fight with the rowdy, his meaningful dialogues and dropping off R at her place to name a few! You are creating lovely situations and making the best use of it in showing our KR in different lights, with interesting dialogues!! I feel all characters truly reflect your positivity and sense of humour. Keep it up bro!! Thank you. 👏👏👏

Yeppa evolo periya update.. for giving such a big update itself u need 👏 👏 👏 superb..

Etho oru dog chasing R nu partha both wr playing running and pavam K ithule nalla matikitan.. puppy nick name romeo superb name la.. starting of story till d end enjoyed reading thoroughly.. and i like dis R very much rombe thuru thuru iruka
😊 .. parthu nandhu romeo nu char vanthe madiri juliet nu vera yaravuthu R neighbour iruka porange aporam K dhan matikitu muzhikanum evange kite 😆 😆.. R Rm and K convo super and so cute..

Oh K appreciated R by gift is not dat much easy to get from him la dats really nice and she to like dat too 😊.. K care towards R was nice to see and his care towards R by advising her not to cum out was nice 😊.. All d scenes wer like real oru movie partha madiri irunthuchu emotional humor caring and fight nu all was so real..

Oru vazhiya K ke serika vechita R hope he wil change more for R 😊.. keep it up nandhu sema update 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for the update, Shiny...

Very nice... First part- KR with puppy was hilarious... 👏 .. Oh per kooda Romeo va... Kalakuraan Karthik...

Office team la Raji Ku gift, Karthik oda care when Raji was alone in the road... Superb, Shiny...

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

Shiny athu eppadii unnalu eppadi yezhutha mudiyathu innu yennaku therila loool

yeppavum unnoda update paditchii siripen lool athey mathiri thaan ethuvum

first scene the dog raji karthi😆😆😆 athu yenn nee oru cute puppy ahh choose pannenu yennaku theriyum😆😆 but athu scene karthi ooda kovum ellame super hahahah raji theriyuma pesurarala innu therila aana avaloda innocence yennaku romba puditchirku😆😆 nalla comedy avaloda so cute

then all the friends all are so nice and good friendship eppavum eppadiye irukatum😃 nice to see them all encouraging one another

then karthi giving the gift to raji and then praising her after all soo nice

then last scene you know karthis advice and everything he was saying pakka true and liked how he helped raji and then the police officer helped him and him making sure raji is okie ellame nice

and lastla him saying he needs to change her innu 😆 padraa paiyan taking responsibility for her already😆 ahahahahaa

thanks for the update shiny 😊

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Oh my goodness Shinyyy!!! Thanks so much for the update, loved it too too much.

The continuation of the park scene was lovely. That little puppy is such a cutie, the way he pats Raji trying to call her and then being in her arms was so cute. Karthik's expressions seeing that R was talking about a puppy were lol. Also, Karthik getting an auto for her to help her reach home is a nice gesture.

Nice to see Raji doing well at work also and showing good improvement, and her colleagues are always friendly and supportive to each other which is awesome.

The scene at night was really good. I happen to read an article online where in India a girl dragged a man to the police who was misbehaving with her in a public place and how nobody came forward to help. She dragged the guy by his hair to the police. When I was reading your story, it reminded me of that article. Raji trying her best to be brave and facing the guy, yet sometimes you can't help yourself and begin to cry - the emotions and lines were written so well during that part, everything was visualized in my head easily.

Karthik coming and saving her, and also telling the guy some very important things about how to treat women and all was amazing. The part where the police came also was good and how the police did their job properly and told K to console R and make sure she is alright, liked all that a lot.

Finally K advising to R to be more careful and to take extra precautions. Raji telling her thanks with a lot of gratitude was also great. The seat belt thing was cute, and an important safety rule also.

Karthik dropping her off a few houses ahead but making sure she reached home safely was awesome to see. That smile at the end and then him saying he needs to tell Raji some important things was all really good.

Overall, enjoyed this part a lot, it's written really well.

Woohh,.,.Smiles..I didnt even expect this longgg comment from u...Thanks a lot...😳

Ya..me too read that article...that guy...idiot...n that girl...really brave,..

dont know what to say yaar for ur comment..am glad...thanks once again😃

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Thanks for the update...


Very well written...

Lots of sweet emotions... Nice and sweet...

The only part I dont agree is with what Karthik is saying that women should not comeout after 7... Trying to be safe is fine... May be buying a bike or something so that u can move freely :)...


Overall... wonderful update :)

Thanks ramya sis..😊

yeah...u r right...aana inga raji nadanthu thana vara...athan karthik appadi sonnan...

Originally posted by: kanya13

Loved this part bro

Nice narration. Liked raji's naughtiness and karthik's unknown caring towards her. :) :)

Thanks Kanya...

This is Ur first comment for mystory...am very happy😃

Originally posted by: ammukuty

Wow bro superb update hahaha raji na raji than karthik superb caring superior officer. Nice to read again and again bro thank you for the timely update to divert our mood from boring episode

Thanks Ammu sis..
really?..thirumba thirumba padikanum pola iruka?...padinga...enaku romba santhosama iruku😳.

Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Thanks for the lengthy update bro...

Raji cutepie dhan iva... so sweet😳 Puppy ka ivalo akka poru... Andha puppy so cute...😳 Raji mathiriye...

Raji and puppy convo dhan best... Eppa evlo lengthy ana dialogue... Idha eppdi bro yosichinga? Paravallaiye puppy shaken lam kudukudhu... So sweet... Unnamayilye romba samathu dhan😳

Romeo cute name... apt dhan irukkum... Ana karthik thiitikitte irukkan raji ya ana ava enna sonnalum seyiyuran...

RLSKA scene so nice... Friendship maintain pannuranga... Ippdye irukkannum... Raji gift vanganudhuala raji ya vida karthik dhan adhigam sandhosham pola...

Perusa edhuvum treat kedaiyadhu... Canteen tea oda mudichittinga...

VR scene eppavume best dhan...

That man 😡😡 cheap guy... Ippdi nadandhukuravanga innum neriya peru irukkanga.. Raji starting bold dhana iruntha apparam azha arambchittye... Thank god karthik vandhuttan... Avana naala veeluthum vangittan... Apparam ponnungal pathi sonnadhu so true

Karthik:ennda ippadi nadanthukareenga?...ponnugala mathingada...mathika koda venam,...mithigama ,imsai panama irukungada...avanga illati namma ippadi irupomada?..oru ponnu vazhikaatuthal illati,aamabalaiyala onnum kilika mudiyathuda..avangathanda naatin olivizhaku...avangala poi ivalavu kodumai panreengaleda.. ungala maathiri aalkalaala than ponnugaluku ippa nimathiye illai...ponna pethavnaga vaailayum,vayathulayum nerupa katti avangala vezhila thaniya amichu vidrangada..aana neenga..cheee...poruki rascal...

Idhuke ungaluku peru clap kudukkalam 👏

And karthik oda advise good... Ippdi dhan irukkanum...

Last scene munnaiye raji irakkki vittutan... Really karthik gem person...

Thirumba thirumba padikkanum polaye irukku... Lovely update...

Thanks. a lot,Abi..

Raji ado puppy dialogue thana.?..hehe...takkunu strike aaiduchu elutha aarambikum pothe😆

treat thana...hehe...seri rajiya vera ethavuthu next partla koduka sollita pochu...ok?

Originally posted by: plily

First a big clap for you Nandhu 👏 . What a thought . Its an awesome update bro.

Karthik,Raji and Romeo , don't know what to comment . Oru nice feel kudukuthu .Raji .. Raji .. is all I can think of. Super character . She will surely change Karthik .
Oru Romeo puppyku Romeo peru vaichurakaru 😆 .
Karthik show so much of care for Raji . Love it.
Raji nickname vaiyadi vaikulam 😆 😆 .

Good friendship - abishek , laxmi , susan , kaushik and raji. Wow Raji getting give for her work . Raji mv when Karthik gift her the gift .. ultimate. Raji is very happy seeing karthik smile and he confirm it . Am I dreaming 🤣 🤣 . KV super as usual .

Raji in trouble even she manage sometimes when panic we will lose hope. Karthik my hero sema timing . Apada Raji is safe. Karthik advise is very true and useful .
Karthik getting angry and then knowing Raji is scared he pacify her and divert her mind . Be with her and waited until she reached home safely . Gentleman Karthik 👍🏼 . They exchange phone no , so surely got KR phone convo 😉 .

Thank you Nandhu . Marvelous update ⭐️ .

Lily sis..First .thank u so so much for commenting here...then thanks a ton for ur comment...😃

romeo romeonu peru vaikararu...hey..ithu nalla iruke...😛

aama karthik sirichatha confirm pannitan...inime konjam konjama sirika aarambipan...

KR phone convo...yaa...ya...varum inime..😉