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Engala ipdi thavika viduradhula ungaluku apdi oru sandhosham????

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN

Scene continues with Divya and Karthi @ Coffee Shop

Divya : eduthukko Karthi..

Karthi : hmmm... apparam enna aachu nu nee sollu...

Flashback :

Jaya stops by the door and hears the conversation between her mother and Chandru.

J Mom : eppadiyo.. avala vazhikku kondu vandhaachu... blackmail panni... andha payyan mela modhi accident panna yaaro oru punniyavaanukku thaan nandri sollanum.. adha saakkaa vachi kaaiya nagartha mudinjadhu..

Chandru : ha ha ha.. adhu yaaro illa... naan yerppaadu pannavandhaan.. ellaam plan panni pannadhu...

J Mom : (first shocked) hmmm... neenga enna vida periya aalu dhaan maapla.. en ponna ungalukku avlo pudikkumaa.. ?

Chandru : aamaa.. aanaa adhu munnaadi.. aanaalum ennoda Angel ah andha Karthik kooda serthu paakka mudiyala... avana enakku suthamaa pidikkala..

J Mom : enakkum dhaan pa... aanaa.. Jaya vukku yen pera maathanum nu avlo theeviramaa irundheenga nu puriyala...

Chandru : avan andha pera chellamaa kooppittu dhaan romance panniruppaan.. vera oruthan konjina pera vachi ennaala kooppida mudiyaadhu... adhaan.. enakke enakku nu en dhevadhai kku... ANGEL nu maatha sonnen..

J Mom : adhu sari pa.. unakku venumnaa nee eppadi venaalum kooppittukalaam la.. adhukku edhukku gadget la laam maathanum...

Chandru : enna kalyanam pannittu inga varum podhu ava passport la irundhu ellaathulayum ANGEL nu official ah irukkum... adhukku dhaan..

J Mom : oh.. sari sari... aanaa ava karanam kettappa... jaadhagam, numerology adhu idhu nu solli mazhuppittom...

Chandru : sari Aunty... pechoda pechaa naan unga kitta sollitten... indha vishayam Angel kku theriyaama paathukkonga...

J Mom : naan yen paa.. solla poren.. naan nenachapadi unga kalyaanam nadakka pogudhu...

Chandru : illa Aunty... ippa kooda ava unga mela dhaan kovathula irukkaa... naan nallavannu Uncle sonnadha vachi dhaan.. marriage ku OK sollirukkaa... so.. naama careful ah dhaan irukkanum..

J Mom : kalyanam mundijaa yaaraalayum onnum panna mudiyaadhu...

Chandru : thappu kanakku podureenga... adhellaam andha kaalam.. ippa ellaam puratchi pengalaa irukkaanga..

Jaya moves from there silently and sits in the hall... staring at the wall and seems like she is in different world and lost in her thoughts..

J Mom : ennadi.. kalyaana ponnu maadhiriyaa irukka.. ? yedho parikodutha maadhiri ippadi nadu veetla utkkarndhirukka ...

Jaya : ippa enna pannanumnu solra.. ?

J Mom : naanum konja naalaa paathuttu varen.. appappo vaa po nu mariyaadha illaama pesura... thimiru yerippochaa..?

J Mom : vittaa pesitte pora..

Jaya : unga koottu sadhi enakku therinju pochu.. neengalaam manushangalaa ?

oruvela Karthik uyirukku edhaavadhu aagiyirundhaa.. ? ennaala nenachu paakkave mudiyala..

Criminal kooda ellaam ennaala vaazha mudiyaadhu.. appa sonnadhukkaaga dhaan naan othukkitten..

J Mom : nee mudiyaadhunu sonnaa... appadiye vittiruvomaa.. unga rendu perukkum kandippa rendu naalla kalayanam nadakkum... escape laam aagamudiyaadhu...

Jaya : neenga dhaan en amma vaa nu en ammaavaa ne enakku sandhegamaa irukku... yaaraavadhu ponnu sandhoshatha kedukka paappaangalaa... ?

J Mom : enna dee... cinema dialogue laam adikira ?

Jaya : nee mattum ? serial villi maadhiri dhaan nadandhukkura..

J Mom : ennavo onnu... aanaa thotthu poguradhu enakku pidikkaadhu... adhukkaaga evlo venumnaalum pannuven..

Jaya : appadiyaa.. appo naanum en ishtappadi dhaan iruppen..

(walks off fast and locks up the door)

J Mom : enna bayamuruthiriyaa ?

Jaya : kandippaa illa...

(She comes out of the room, with clothes changed and walks fast to the gate)

J Mom : enga pora.. ?

Jaya : idhenna namma ooraa ? nenachavudane Karthik veettukku kelambi poga.. ? engayum poga maatten.. konja nerathula vandhiduven..

She comes back after 2 hours.

Next Day :

J Mom : nethu soottoda sootta pesa vendaam nu dhaan vitten.. fix panna maadhiri naalaikku unakkum Chandru kkum kandippa kalyanam nadakkum..

Jaya : (laughs)

J Mom : ennadi sirikira ?

Jaya : nethu naan velila poittu vandhene.. enga nu nenakira..? Police ku inform pannittu vandhen..

J Mom : (shocked)

Jaya : enna... forced marriage panna paakireenga nu sollittu vandhirukken.. velinaattukku police kitta maatta inga vandheengalaa.. chumma solrennu nenakkaadha...

Nee nenachadha mudikka try pannaa... naanum endha dhoorathukkum poven.. thiruttu thanamaa edhaavadhu plan panneenga.. neeyum un annan kudumbathoda ottumothama kambi enna vendiyadhu dhaan..

She goes inside her room and locks it. Stayed in her room itself for next 2 days having just breads, snacks and water.

From next day onwards, she comes out and start moving around normally without speaking to anyone. Started loving loneliness and wander around lifeless. Most of the time, he just sits back, closes her eyes and keeps remembering the days with Karthik.

Irritated mother doesn't seem to care much about her daughter. Days moving on monotonous. She is happy with Jaya did not join hands with Karthik. This would continue if they are abroad at least for some more time. Felt like Karthik would settle down as he definitely would hate Jaya for leaving him.

Dad is worried much that Jaya's naughtiness and her smile is no more with her and she has reduced a lot. He thought of talking to her daughter to discuss if they could find any way for her to travel to India.

He enters her room. While they were talking, Jaya said she is feeling dizzy and fainted on the bed.

J Dad is now even more worried and doesn't know what to do. His wife also not at home that time..

So he immediately poured some water on her face. Jaya opens her eyes and she was made to relax.

Father comes outside and makes a call.

In half an hour, a doctor friend of him comes there. He checks Jaya and later while coming out he starts to speak.

J Dad : solludaa.. en ponnukku onnum illa la. ?

Doctor : bayapadura maadhiri onnum illa.. aanaa ...

J Dad : ennadaa aanaa... edhuvaairundhaalum sollu..

Doctor : un ponna pathi yaarukkaavadhu akkara irukka illayaa.. ?

J Dad : ennappaa solra..?

Doctor : ava olunga saapptu ethane naal aachunu theriyumaa ungalukku ?

J Dad : daily saappiduradha naan dhaan paakurene...

Doctor : appadinaa... ava neenga yaarum kettida koodaadhunu ... paakkura maadhiri light ah saappittirukka pola...

adhuvum illaama... eppapaaru edho yosichitte irundhirukkaa pola.. stress um idhukku oru kaaranamaa irukkalaam.. enna kettaa.. inga avalukku set aagala pola... avalukku pidicha edathula.. pidichavanga kooda irundhaa.. seekirame pazhaya maadhiri active ah aagiduvaa.. ellaam unga kitta dhaan irukku..

ippo stress relief ku ne evvalavo centers vandhirukku... onnum prechanaiye illa... aanaa regular ah continue pannanum.. sari inimelaavadhu olungaa saapiduraalaa.. thoonguraalaa nu paathukko... naan varen.

Father comes inside and sits beside Jaya.

J Dad : ennammaa ippadi pannirukka..

Jaya : uncle ennappaa sonnaaru ?

J Dad : sariyaana saappaadu thookkam illaadhadhu naala dhaan kaaranam nu sonnaan.. enna nallaa thittittu poirukkaan..

Jaya : appaaa.. ennaala Karthik illaama irukka mudiyala paa.. avan eppadi irukkaano nu dhaan naan yosichikitte irukken.. hospital la irundhavana kooda paakkaama koottittu vandhuteenga..

J Dad : puriyidhumaa.. first nee un udamba paathukko... treatment eduthukko... appodhaan themba nee thirumba Karthik maappilai ya paakka polaam..

Jaya : appaaa (excited).. ennanu sonneenga ? maappilai yaa ?

J Dad : aamaamaa... naan mudivu pannitten... un vaazhkai un manasu pola dhaan amaiyum ... edhaavdhu vazhi panren maa..

Jaya : yen sandhosham mukkiyamillaiyaappa ammaavukku..

J Dad : ava kedakkuraa.. varattu gowravatha vachittu alanjittu irukkaa... vidu paathukkalaam.. nee rest edu.. naalaikku pesikkalaam.. naan un treatment center pathi visaarikuren..

Next Day Evening :

Jaya's Dad is relaxing in the garden. Balaji enters their house.

J Dad : (thinks) ivan edhukku ippa inga varraan..? adhaan kalyaanam ninnudichu la... innumaa oorukku kelambaama irukkaan.. ?

Walks towards him.

Balaji : Uncle.. Jaya enga..? udambu sariyillayaame..? avala paathuttu polaamnu dhaan vandhen..

J Dad : (mindvoice) ivanaala enna pudhu prechana varappogudho ? eppadiyum annan kaaran sollidhaan vandhiruppaan.

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Ramya ippo nenaichen unnum update panalayenu.
Good girl nenaicha odane update panniruka. 😊
Nice update. J'dad supports her.
Bt verum stress than karanama illa innum ethavathu twist bakki iruka?

Karthik koopita name vendaamnu solraan...but avan kooda pazhagina jaya mattum venumaamaa...enna oru villathanam...😡

Why Angel dint change her name still??? Udane inga vandhadhum change panirkalame... Name change'kana reason ketadhum ipdi'la kooda yosikra jenmam irukanu erichala iruku... Jmom sema character 👍🏼 ivangla enna solli thitradhu 😡. Next day evening is in present or in flashback Ramya? Update soon...

Originally posted by: joe_arhi

Next day evening is in present or in flashback Ramya? Update soon...

hey nice update ramya..

yipee atlast read all parts .superb ff twinnie 🤗 as am k5 fan i easily got too much soft corner for jaya 🤣 really interesting how you going to make us fall for KR nu
good going da hatts off to you

CHAPTER NINETEEN

Flashback continues:

Balaji : enna Uncle yosikireenga ? Jaya ulla dhaana irukkaa ?

J Dad : aamaa... ava roomla dhaan irukkaa... rest eduthittu irundhaa... muzhichuttaalaa nu theriyala...

Balaji : sari maamaa.. thoongittu irundhaanaa.. disturb panna maatten..

Balaji goes in and sees Jaya sitting in her bed doing something on her mobile. He knocks the door that was open. She lifts her head and notices him..

Jaya : vaa Balaji.. utkkaaru..

Both silent for sometime.

Balaji : Jaya.. ippo eppadi irukka.. ? paakkuradhukku romba week ah theriyura..

Jaya : enna en mela dhideer akkarai... ? yaaru un annan paathuttu vara sonnaanaa ?

Balaji : yen Jaya... naan unna paakka vara koodaadhaa ?

Jaya : varalaam.. aanaa needhaan paasakkaara thambiyaache..

Balaji : enna Jaya ippadi pesura.. ? enna dhaan naan un maamaa payyan, Chandru voda thambi ya irundhaalum... naan rendu perum china vayasula irundhu ore class la padichu.. onnaa valarndhavanga...

oru friend maadhiri unna paakka varakoodaadhaa ?

Jaya : adhisayamaa irukku... sari sollu..

Balaji : unna ippadi paakka enakku pidikala Jaya..

Jaya : adhukku ? un annan Chandru dhaan kaaranam nu unakku theriyaadhaa ?

Balaji : hmm... adha pathi dhaan pesa vandhen..

Jaya : ???

Balaji : first... naan unkitta sorry kekkanum Jaya.. ethanayo dhadava.. unnaiyum karthi yum pathi veetla sollirukken.. unakke theriyum... Chandru va enakku evlo pudikkum nu... adhellaam avan un mela romba aasaiyaa irukkaan ngradhu naala dhaan.. pannen..

Jaya : ippo edhukku adhellaam pesikittu ?

Balaji : adhu vandhu... sathiyamaa ippo dhaan enakke theriyum... avan dhaan Karthi accident ku kaaranam nu.. ennadhaan Karthik ah enakku pidikkaadhu naalum.. Chandru dhaan plan panni senjaanu.. therinjadhum.. enakku oru maadhiri aayiduchu...

Karthik ah kooda padicha payyanaa vachi paathaalume.. enakku kasttamaa irukku.. nee avana evlo love pannenu enakku theriyum... unakku evlo shock ah irukkum nu puriyudhu...

aanaa ippadi nee saappidaama irundhaa.. ellaam sariaagidumaa ?

Jaya : naan venumne idhellaam pannala... Karthi illaadha life ah ennaala yosichu kood a paakka mudiyala. . ennaala avlo dhaan saapida mudiyudhu.. thookamum sariyaa varala..

Jaya's father enters the room...

Balaji : vidu Jaya... ellaam sari aayidum...

J Dad : ennappaa.. namba mudiyala... nee ippadi pesuradhaa..

Balaji : yen maamaa.. neengalum ? naan othukkiren Chandru kkaaga Jaya vukku edhiraa neraya pannirukken... aanaa.. en annan ivlo mosamaa nadandhuppaanu nenakala..

J Dad : unna solli enna panna.. ? ivaloda ammave sadhi pannumbodhu.. unna kochikkittu onnum aagaporadhu illa..

Balaji : ippadi ye evlo naal iruppa Jaya ?

J Dad : konja naal stress relief center kku poi sila treatment eduthukitta.. konja konjamaa.. health improve aagum nu solraanga..

Balaji : appa udane adha start panna vendiyadhu dhaane ?

J Dad : aamaappa.. naanum check pannen.. next week la irundhu povaappa..

Balaji : good Jaya.. nee andha velaiya paaru.. unna paakkura maadhiri ye theriyala.. vera yaaro maadhiri irukka..

naan edhaavadhu unakku help panna mudiyumaa nu paakkuren...

J Dad : ennappaa solra ?

Balaji : naan ungalukku apparam phone panren maamaa... ippo naan kelamburen.. udambha paathukko Jaya.. Take rest ... bye..

Balaji leaves from there...

J Dad : enakku ennamo .. ivana endha alavukku namburadhu nu theriyalamaa..

Jaya : appaa.. vidunga... appadi paathaa.. yaaraiyum namba mudiyaadhu.. vidunga.. enakku Balaji ya nallaa theriyum... romba innocent pa avan... pidikalai na neraa solliduvaan... avan annana role model ah vachirundhaan.. adhu illanu aanadhum... avannukku en mela paridhaabam vandhiduchu pola..

J Dad : ennavo maa... nalladhu nadandha sari. .

After few days...

Jaya is going to that center for the treatment.

Balaji visits their home again. Jaya is watering the plants in the garden.

Balaji : hai Jaya..

Jaya : Hai Balaji..

Balaji : enna Jaya nee.. Uncle nee center ku poittu irukka nu sonnaaru... aana innum unnoda smile varalaye..

Jaya : (silent)

Balaji : enna onnum pesa maattra..

Jaya : sari sollu.. enna indha pakkam... ?

Balaji : appadi kelu.. naan unakku onnu kondu vandhirukken..

Jaya : enna daa.. ?

Balaji : haan... avlo easy yaa sollamaatten.. innum konja neram wait pannu...

Surpriseee

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quite interesting ramya...