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CHAPTER SIXTEEN

Monday morning : KV @ their seats...

Karthi gives a look at Vishnu and turns and pretend to work..

Vish : (mind voice... ennachu ivanukku..? onnume pesaama amaidhiyaa irukkaane ? )

Karthi : (mind voice... edhukkaaga enkitta sollaama maraichaan ?)

Vish : machaan...

Karthi : ennadaa..

Vish : yen daa.. oru maadhiri ya irukka ?

Karthi : (without turning) appadi ellaam onnum illaye...

Vish : enna paathu solludaa...

Karthi : (turns) ennadaa sollalum...

Vish : ippa edhukku daa kovapadura ?

Karthi : kandippa theriyanumaa ?

Vish : aamaa daa...

Karthi : naa solradhu irukkattum... nee ellaa vishayathayum enkitta sollirukiyaa ?

Vish : (mind voice... Ivan edha pathi kekkuraanu theriyalaye... )

Karthi : solludaa... edhaiyume maraikkalayaa ?

Vish : (mind voice... oru vela Jaya matter ah pathi kekkuraano ?)

Karthi : ennadaa silent aayitta... aamaa va illayaa nu solludaa...

Vish : aamaa da...

Karthi : yenda sollala ?

Vish : Sathiya' sodhanai daa..

Karthi : (mind voice... oh adhaan matter ah.. promise vaangiruppaa pola)

Vish : unakku eppadi da theriyum...

Karthi : enakkum innum theriyaadhu... aanaa unakku theriyum ngradhu enakku theriyum..

Vish : (mind voice... rendu perum orey topic pathi dhaan pesuromaa ?)

Karthi : (turns and continues his work)

Vish : (mind voice... habbaadaa.. nalla vela .. vera edhuvum thuruvi thuruvi kekkala... apparam ulari iruppen... olunga vaaya vachittu summa irundhirukkalaam... yen dull ah irukkura nu kettadhu oru thappaa ?)

Next Day... after lunch KR @ their seats...

Vishnu still kadala pottufies with Lakshmi at her place...

Raji gets a call. On seeing the number she did not pick up. She gets call continuously.

Karthi : ethane vaatti phone adikkudhu.. eduthu pesa vendiyadhu dhaane ?

Raji : adhu engalukku theriyum...

Karthi : enna ? US la irundhaa ?

Raji : (silent)

Karthi : adhaan fix aagiduchu la... aasai yaa phone panniruppaan...

Raji : (picks up) hmmm... Raji dhaan pesuren... sollunga... appadiyaa ? seri OK... illa konjam work irukku.. hmmm... vachiduren...

Raji : Karthik... adhu vandhu...

Karthi : (turns)

Raji : avaru adhutha vaaram inga varraaraam...

Karthi : naan onnum kekkalaye.. ? edhukku enkitta solra..

Raji : illa Karthi...

Karthi : adhu un personal vishayam.. enkitta share pannanum laam onnum illa... enakku neraya vela irukku... konja neram disturb pannaama iru..

After some time...

Karthi : (mind voice... cha..indha Vishnu innum enna pannittu irukkaan anga...avan irundhaalaavadhu... andha pakkam thirumbi edhaavadhu pesittu irukkalaam..)

He gets a call. On seeing the name.. he picks up immediately... Its Divya ofcourse.

Karthi : Sollu Divya... un call kaaga dhaan wait pannittu irundhen...

Raji : (mind voice... idhu yaaru pudhusaa.. ?)

Karthi : innaikku evening ah ? enakku endha program mum illa.. naan seekirame sollittu kelambiduren...

Raji : (mind voice... ippadhaan vela neraya irukku nu enkitta sonnaan.. ?)

Karthi : enga meet pannalaam... ? unga veetla.. ? venaam adhu saripattu varaadhu... un room mate vandhuttaa ? yennadhu... nee enga veettukku varriyaa ? adhuvum sariyaa varaadhu... naama engayaavadhu velila meet pannalaam...

Raji : (mind voice... chumma scene poduraanaa ? )

Karthi : naane sollavaa ? (looks at Raji )... naan enga eppo.. nu ... place'um time'um message panren... meet pannalaam... ok.. bye..

Vishnu comes back to the seat. In few minutes Lakshmi comes and call for Tea Break..

Vish : ippo dhaan naan place ke vandhen... naan varala... konjam vela paakka poren..

Karthi : mazhai varappogudhu daa...

Laksh : nee variyaa Karthik..

Karthi : hmm... polaam Lakshmi (gets up)

Laksh : Raji.. nee ?

Raji : illa naan varala..

Laksh : sari OK.. (both leaves to canteen)

In Canteen :

Karthi was thinking about something and smiling...

Laksh : enna Karthi.. orey happy mood la irukka pola ?

Karthi : appadi ellaam onnum illa Lakshmi..

Laksh : adhaan un moonjiya paathaale theriyudhe ? sari... yaaru Divya ?

Karthi : ungalukku eppadi theriyum ? adhukkulla Raji sollittaalaa ?

Laksh : enna karthi pesura ? idhula Raji enga vandhaa ?

Karthi : appa.. ungalukku vera eppadi theriyum...

Laksh : hey... namma veettu hall la.. oru marriage invitation paathen..

Karthi : oh..

Laksh : enna Oh.. ? idhukku edhukku nee ivlo reaction kudukkura ?

Karthi : onnum illa... enga classmate..

Laksh : so.. ? get together undu ?

Karthi : aama... mostly ellaarum varuvaanga nu dhaan nenakiren...

Laksh : oh.. adhaan orey sandhosham ah...

Vishnu joins them..

Laksh : vela irukku nu sonna... apparam enna indha pakkam...

Vish : chumma ungalukku company kudukkalaam nu dhaan..

Laksh : nambittom..

Vish : sari.. edho sandhosham pathi pesittu irundheenga... ennanu naan therinjukkalaam ah ?

Laksh : unga college pathi dhaan...

Vish : enna ? Karthi LOVE matter ah ?

Karthi : (morachifies..)

Laksh : enna karthi ? indha jollu mannan eppadi college la.. ? ammanji maadhiri iruppen nu sonnaan..

Karthi : (mind voice... enna veruppethuna la.. ippa nee maattuna dee..) appadi face vachiruppaan.. but at a time rendu ponnungala route vittuttu irundhaan.. adhuvum close friends ah.. ivanaala.. avunga friendship..kooda damage aayiduchu..

Vish : (mind voice... dei.. Jaya ku promise pannadhaala dhaan da..sollala.. adhukku ippadiyaadaa Lakshmi kitta kothu viduvaa..)

Laksh : apparam sollu.. Karthi..

Vish : inga enna kadhai yaa sollittu irukkaanga..

Laksh : avan kedakkuraan vidu Karthi... nee sollu..

Vish : avan reel suthuraan Lakshmi... nambaadha...

Laksh : unna pathi enakku theriyum da.. fraud-u...

Karthi : oru nimisham Lakshmi...

He shows his phone to her. Vishnu's photo with those 2 girls..

Laksh : hmmm... nallaa dhaan irukkaanga..

Karthi : aanaa rendu perum paadhiyilaye abscond aayittaanga..

Laksh : hey Vishnu.. ennadaa panna avangala ? nalla vela escape aayittanga..

Karthi : ammaanji nu sonnan la.. ? andha pera vachadhe.. indha ponnu dhaan.. Priya.. haripriya..maami... andha pakkam irukkuradhu Rajini... Settu veettu ponnu... apparam Lakshmi...

Vish : apparam ennadaa.? Adhaan sollitta la ?

Karthi : irudaa... innum mudiyala... apparam konja naal kazhichu.. innoru Priya vandhaa... avalum.. rumba seekirathula ye essu..

Laksh : paavam Vishnu.. raasi appadi...

Both laughs...

Karthi : rumba nandri da... nee nallaa varuva... ( mind voice...siridaa... ippa paaru..)

Vish : dei... onna miss pannittiye...?

Karthi : adhu yaarudaa enakku theriyaama ? area ponnaa ?

Vish : illadaa.. namma college dhaan da... adhuvum namma class dhaan..

Karthi : (thinks)

Vish : nee kashtta padaadha... naane solren... namma Jaya dhaan.. unga break up kku apparam..ava enkooda dhaana suthittu irundhaa..

Karthi : (Shouts) Vishnu... enna pesurenu.. therinjuttu pesu..

Lakshmi.. naan kelamburen... innaiku completed tasks ah mail pannirukken... Bye.. (leaves without seeing Vishnu)

Vish : ivan yen ippadi kochittu poraan..

Laksh : pinna... ippadi pesunaa kovam varraadhaa... ?

Vish : naan onnum thappaa sollalaye...

Laksh : Loosu... enna sonna nu yosichu paaru..

Vish : Jaya enkooda dhaan suthittu irundhaa nu... idhula enna irukku..

Laksh : idhukku enna artham.. ennadhaan avanga pirinjuttaalum.. avala pathi.. ippadi pesuradhu thappu Vishnu..

Vish : (realizes what he said) naan appadi mean pannala Lakshmi...
avan enna kalaaichaan.. naan badhilukku kalaaichen...

Laksh : podaa.. enakke oru maadhiri irukku.. avanukku eppadi irukkum... nee sutha waste.. enga eppadi pesanum ne theriyala.. sari.. poi velaya paaru...

************** to be continued ************************

Still the secret is maintained...

friend,its really interesting😊.but a small request to u,please make raji to become bold and smart in telling her love to karthik and in office carrer too.its okay,jaya is smart and she is karthik 's first love.but for me,raji should be clearminded without any fear and confusion.and too she should also be expert in learning the office related work quickly.😉.and karthick should not confuse anymore regarding his love for raji.😃

vishnu's mind voice...super...as always..👏

Nice update.
Karthik vishnu va potu kudaka nenaichan. Bt Vishnu sonnathula karthik kadi agitan.
Sikiram jaya matter ah clear pannunga.

Here we go...

Precap (for tomorrow) :
Karthik-Divya @ coffee shop

• D : appo naangalum... ava mela semma kovathula irundhom... ICU la irukkiravanai kooda paakka varalai nu...


• K : idha namba solriyaa Divya? cinema, serial la varra maadhiri irukku...

Appo nalaiku solliduviya ramya jaya ku en problem nu? 😉

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN

End of the day..

Lakshmi comes to Raji place.

Laksh : hey Raji... vaa polaam innum 10 minutes la bus eduthiduvaanga...

Raji : idho shut down pannittu vandhiduren... enna Vishnu... eppavum 6 manikku mela vela seiyya maatteenga... innum kelambala ?

Laksh : work panra time la... OB adichaa... ippadidhaan stay panni work pannanum...

Vish : Latchumi...

Laksh : olunga.. complete pannittu status mail anupittu po.. vaa Raji... naama polaam...

On the way to the Bus bay...

Laksh : enna Raji.. onnum pesaama vara.. ? dull ah irukkura maadhiri vera theriyudhu...

Raji : onnum illa..

Laksh : onnum illa nu laam sollaadha.. share panna pidikkalanaa vidu..

Raji : appadi illa Lakshmi...

Laksh : naan edhuvum kekkalamaa..

Raji : adhu vandhu... indha Karthik yen ippadi enna veruppetha ... edho pudhusaa oru ponnu kitta phone la pesi scene poduraan...

Laksh : hey.. enna idhu..

Raji : aamaa Lakshmi.. Divya nu edho oru ponnu call panna... meet panna poraanaam...

Laksh : hey.. enna peru sonna ?

Raji : Divya..

Laksh : hey.. loosu... adhu avanoda classmate..

Raji : oh.. unakkum theriyumaa..

Laksh : avalukku marriage... seekiram poganum nu sollittu kelambunaan... ivala dhaan paakka poraan pola...

Raji : enna Lakshmi... ivlo saadharanamaa solra..

Laksh : naandhaan sonnen la... innum few days la marriage nu.. invitation enga veetla dhaan irukku..

Raji : sari... appo edhukku avala secret ah meet panna poraan..?

Laksh : adhu edhukku unakku... enna vena irukkalaam... secret ah nu eppadi solra ?

Raji : illa... enga eppo nu message anupuren sonnaan... naan kekka koodaadhaam... phone la sonnaa enakku kettidumaam...

Laksh : neeya edhuvum karpana pannikkaadha.. sari... avan kaduppethuraan naa... nee enna panna.. ?

Raji : naan onnum pannala... US la irundhu call vandhadhu... andha payyan India varraanaam...

Laksh : idhu podhaadhaa... Karthik kaduppaaga... adhaan chumma unna kaduppethiruppaan..

Raji : enna nee... Karthik ke support panni pesura.. ?

Laksh : pinna...? Nee ippadi thevaillaama sandhega padura..

Raji : sandhegam laam illa... enakku theriyum avanukku enna evlo pudikkum nu..

Laksh : adhu therinjaa mattum podhaadhu maa... un manasula enna irukkunu avan kitta theriya paduthanum..

Raji : adhuvum avanukku theriyum..

Laksh : therinju enna panna... nee dhaan eppo commit pannen', naan eppo sonnen' nu bulti adikkiriye... nee paattuku unga appa paatha maappilai ya kalyanam pannikittu poiduva... avan unakkaaga wait pannikitte irukkanumaa..

Raji : enna Lakshmi.. ippadi pesura..

Laksh : irukkuradha dhaane naan solren..

Raji goes silent..

Coffee Shop :

Divya enters..

Divya : enna Karthi.. seekirame vandhutta pola..

Karthi : illa paa.. ippadhaan vandhen..

Divya : hmmm... enna order pannalaam.. ?

Karthi : enakku ippo vendaam.. apparamaa sollikkiren.. unakku venumnaa nee order pannikko..

Divya : sari OK... naanum apparamaave sollikiren..

Karthi : sari.. ennadhaan nadandhadhu nu sollu Divya... enakku orey kolappamaa irukku...

Divya : unakku ellaam therinjirukkum nu nenachen... Vishnu kooda vaa sollala ?

Karthi : kettaa.. Sathiya Sodhanai' nu sonnaan.. Jaya promise vaangi iruppaa pola..

Divya : oh... irukkalaam..

Divya : unakku Bike accident aagi, hospital la serious ah irundhappo...

Flashback opens :

Friends bring bleeding Karthi to the hospital. They could not reach out Jaya through

Jaya pleads her mother that she has to go while Karthi is in this situation. She can't sit her while he is in that condition. But mother is too adamant and starts threatening her.

J Mom : inga paaru Jaya... naan sonnadha meeri ponanaa..

Jaya : enna venaalum pannikkonga... naan kandippa poren...

J Mom : naan solradha ninnu kettuttu po..

Jaya : naan poi paathuttu varen.. apparam neenga enna sonnaalum kekkuren..

J Mom : nee inga irundhu ponaa.. ippa hospital la irukkuravan.. apparam mela poiduvaan..

Jaya : enna merattureengalaa ?

Jaya's father walks in on hearing the argument.

J Mom : eppadi venumnaalum vachikko... aanaa naan sonnadha seiven nu unakku theriyum la...

Jaya : enna panna mudiyum ?

J Mom : appadi kelu.. hospital staffs yaaravadhu vachi.. avan kadhaiya angaye mudichida solven..

Jaya : idhukkulaam naan bayappada maatten..

J Mom : summa solren nu nenaikkaadha.. venumnaa phone panni prove pannattumaa.. ennaala mudiyum nu

J Dad : inga paarumaa Jaya.. un ammaava pathi enakku nallaa theriyum... ava nenachadha nadakka vaikka.. endha level kum povaa..

Jaya : ennappa neengalum ippadi solreenga..

J Dad : illamaa.. ippa enna... avana paathukka avan friends irukkaanga.. unga ammaava morachikitta ... apparam unakku dhaan kastam..

J Mom : hmm... nallaa budhimadhi solli vainga unga ponnu kitta..

Jaya cries badly leaning on her father..

At Present :

Karthi : idhellaam oru kaaranamaa Divya...

Divya : iru Karthi... naanga friends ellaarume appadi thaan nenachom... appadi enna oru dhadava kooda vara mudiyaadha situation ah nu... ava mela kovathula irundhom..

Divya : ippa ava return varra varaikkum ennoda opinion adhu dhaan...

Karthi : udane US parandhaachaa ? chandru va kalyanam pannikka...

Divya : Karthik... konjam porumai yaa iru.. first full ah kettuttu apparamaa pesu..

Karthi : adhukku vera oru kadhai yaa ?

Divya : first-u nee cool down aagu... iru kudikka edhaavadhu order pannalaam..

She calls barrier and orders for both. Continues...

Within a week, you were still in hospital but better and recovering.

I again went to her home but this time, her mother did not allow me to see her. I came to know that all of them are moving to California where Chandru stays..

Guess she has no other go, to save you from her Mom's criminal mind.

At that point of time, she felt, rather than she being with you, it's more important for you to be safe.

All of them flew to US without meeting you and any of our friends.

There, in 10 days, her mother brings in the topic of getting her married to Chandru. Of course Jaya did not agree for that.

Jaya : ennaala mudiyaadhu..

J Mom : enna... appadiye thaniyaa irundhidalaam ndra idea la irukkiyaa ?

Jaya : (silent)

J Mom : enna... peche kaanom..

Jaya : purinjikkaadha unga kitta enna pesuradhu ne theriyala..

J Mom : nallaa kettukko dee.. naan chummaa pechukku solreen nu nenaikkaadha.. nee kalayanathukku othukkalai naa... endha neramum andha Karthik ku enna venumnaalum nadakkalaam..

Jaya : marubadiyum meratti paakureengalaa ?

J Mom : illa echarikkuren... inga irundhe kaai nagartha mudiyum..

Jaya : yen ippadi villi maadhiri pesuramaa ? ponnaye ippadi kashta paduthi paakura..

J Mom : Chandru voda nee sandhoshamaa iruppen nu dhaan naan aasapaduren.. naan solradha kettaa unakku nalladhu...

Jaya : sari.. aanaa enakku konjam time venum.. ippo en manasula Karthik thavira vera yaarukkum idam illa. konja naal ponadhukku apparam paakkalaam..

J Dad : adhaan yosikka time kekkuraala.. apparam enna... nee po..

J Mom : (mindvoice... Konjam vittu pidikkalaam)

At Present :

Karthi : enna Divya idhu..? cinema, serial la varra maadhiri irukku..

Divya : enna seiyya ippadiyum sila peru irukkaanga.. avangalaa marunaa dhaan undu.. naama onnum panna mudiyaadhu..

She continues again..

After Six months..

J Mom : unakku kudutha time mudinjiruchu.. naan kalyaana velaiya aarambikkuren.. just inform dhaan panren.. (and leaves)

Jaya : (silent)

J Dad : ammaa Jaya.. ennadaa appa vum ippadi solren nu nenaikkaadha.. un life ippadiye ninnu poga naan virumbala... kandippa oru thunai yoda sandhoshamaa vazhanum.. unnoda viruppatha niravetha ennaala mudiyala.. un ammaave adhukku kurukka nikkuraa..

avalukku thaan nenchadhu nadakkanum.. vera edhuvum mukkiyam illa.. varattu gowravam..

aanaa.. enakku Chandru kitta edhuvum thappu irukkura maadhiri theriyala.. nichayathukku apparam, nee vera oruthara virumbi.. ivana vendaam nu solli..ippa marubaiyum unna kalyaanam pannikka thayaaraa irukkuradha paathaa... avanukku unna romba pidikum nu thonudhu..

appaavukkaaga othukko maa.. poga poga sariyaayidum..

Jaya : unga viruppam appa...

Arrangements were going on...

There is only couple of days for marriage..

Jaya passes by her mother's room and stops by on hearing Karthik's name. Her mother and Chandru having a serious conversation. Jaya listens to what they are speaking...

Waiter : (interrupts) Excuse me Sir.. (and serve what they have ordered and go)

Enna ma ramya innum evalavu naal than twist vappa sikram solliduma,
I'm eagerly waiting.
Soon post next part. 😊

jaya's mom typical serial villi madhiriye pesarangalae...