~~~***~~~ Nee Naan Aval ~~~***~~~ FF - CAST - Pg 75 - Page 14

@ sweety... sure maa... will take care of it..

(thought it would be clear through dialogues as such..)

will give a intro when new characters/from K5 comes in...

thanks for ur comments..

Characters and pre story...

Jaya was engaged to Chandru (maamaa payyan) before she joined college..He was working abroad

Karthik knew about it but still he believed they could unite..

Balaji is Chandru's brother who studied in same class along with Jaya...

Interesting Ramya...

It is nice to see changed balaji..👏 Is he going to help Jaya in any way❓...waiting to know how jaya returned to India..adhuvum to the same office...

CHAPTER TWENTY

Flashback continues...

Jaya : enna Balaji... Suspense adhu idhu nu... olunga sollu daa..

Balaji : mudiyaadhu... nee nallaa sirichaa dhaan solluven...

Jaya : eee... podhumaa...?

Balaji : kindal pannaadha Jaya..

Jaya : sonnaa sollu illanaa po..

Balaji : hmmm... ippo dhaan Jaya oda original piece konja konjamaa velila varudhu..

Jaya : blade podaadha daa..

Balaji : sari sari... maamaavum vandhudattum... apparamaa solren...

Jaya : sari... vaa ulla polaam..

Both goes inside the house and waits for Jaya's dad to come. After sometime..

J Dad : vaapaa Balaji... eppa vandha.. ?

Balaji : naan vandhu half an hour aachu maamaa... ungalukkaaga dhaan waiting..

J Dad : ennappaa vishayam... annaikku phone panni edhedho details collect panna... adhukkappuram sathathaye kaanom...

Jaya : enna details ppaa.. ?

Balaji : maamaa... irunga sollaadheenga... konja neram suspense maintain pannalaam..

Jaya : sari.. enakkenna... naan poi vera valaiyya paakuren..

J Dad : Balaji... solluppaa... enakkum nee enna pannenu therinjukkanum..

Balaji : sari solren... Jaya inneram nee un mail check pannirudheenaa... unakke therinijirukkum..

Jaya : mail ah ? adha last ah eppa check pannennu kooda nyabagam illa..

Balaji : sari matter ku varen... uncle tta... unnoda academic details dhaan paathu solla sonnen... appadiye un profile create panni... sila companies ku mail pannen..

Jaya and her Dad are confused..

Balaji : enna maamaa... ippadi paakureenga... irunga full ah solli mudichiduren..

eppadiyum Jaya profile ku job offers kandippa varum.. So adha use panni... iva Chennai poga plan podalaam nu paathen... naan nenacha maadhiriye potten... contact number ennodadha kuduthen..

ippo dhaan call pannaanga... Interview call la ye vechukkalaam nu sollittaanga..

J Dad : sandhosham pa..iva Chennai ponaa... ippodhaikku idhu nadandhuchu naa... podhum... mathadhellaam apparam paathukkalaam..

Balaji : aamaa maamaa.. aaanaalum athai kku kandippa sandhegam varalaam.. indha interview, response, offer letter, date of joining nu... ippadi edhu nadandhaalum.. athai kannu munnadiye nadakkattum..

J Dad : idha vachi ava nambiduvaa nu nenakireeyaa ?

Balaji : appadi illa maamaa... atleast edhukkaaga poraanu Jaya solla... atleast strong ah reason onnu venum... eppadiyum avunga thadukka mudiyaadhu... adhu vera vishayam...

aanaa... idhukku pinnaala vera onnu irukku...

J Dad : ennappaa adhu ?

Balaji : edhukkum irukkattume nu... naan 4, 5 companies ku resume anuppi vachen... aana naan expect panna maadhiriye... NETTECH la irundhe call pannaanga..

J Dad : enna special paa... andha company la ?

Balaji : indha NETTECH la dhaan Jaya voda Karthi-yum work panraan...

Jaya face turns happy... and even her father is very happy to hear that.

Balaji : kandippa Jaya interview la asathi.. adhe company la join pannittaanaa.. super... appadi illanaalum.. Chennai la ye vera company kedachaalum OK dhaan...

J Dad : romba thanks Balaji..

Balaji : ayyo.. enna maamaa idhu... naan vera aalaa... ?

J Dad : illappa... enna irundhaalum un annana edhirthu...

Balaji : (interrupts) adha pathi pesa venaame.. Jaya... nee mail check pannittu eppo interview nu paathuttu.. prepare aagu... naan un VISA process laam ennanu follow panren...

Jaya : Balaji...

Balaji : (again interrupts) please Jaya... neeyum thanks nu solli anniyapaduthaadha... munnadi naan pannadhukku.. ippo help panna mudiyira chance kedachadhe... adhuve periya vishayam...

Jaya : irundhaalummm..

Balaji : stop... no feelings...

J Dad : sarippaa neenga pesittu irunga... naan vandhiruren... (he leaves)

Jaya : eppadi Balaji... Karthik work panra company ya kandu pidicha ?

Balaji : enna Jaya... idhenna periya vishayam... classmates yaarkitta kettaalum solluvaanga.,.

Jaya : adhilla.. unakku friends nu yaarum kedaiyaadhu.. en kooda ve dhaan iruppa.. appadiye nee kettaalum .. en mela irukkura kobathula onnum sollirukka maattaanga..

Balaji : adhu correct dhaan... naanum sila peru kitta try pannen.. ellaarum kovamaa dhaan irukkaanga.. adhum en mela... rombavum ...

Jaya : apparam eppadi daa ?

Balaji : Jothika irukkaa la..

Jaya : yaaru ? Karthi thangachiyaa.. ? ava Bombay la irukkaa...

Balaji : aamaa.. aanaa... annan enga vela panraanu theriyaamalaa irukkum...

Jaya : adhilla daa.. ava eppadi sonnaa ?

avalum neenga rendu perum onnu serradhula romba aasai yaa irukkaa... enna help venumnaalum kooppida sonnaa.. nee dhaan avalukku ANNI yaam..

Jaya : sari Balaji... nee solradha paathaa edho nambikkai varudhu..

Balaji : sari OK.. naan varen.. edhaiyum yosikkaama... interview attend pannu... naan travel process paathukuren... athai ya saamaalikuradha.. apparamaa yosikkalaam...

Jaya : sari daa Balaji... unna paathaa aachariyamaa irukku...

Balaji : yen Jaya..

Jaya : illa... ithana naal naan unna onnum theriyaadhu appaavi payyan nu nenachittu irundhen.. aanaa.. ivlo nallaa yosichu.. nallaa plan podura..

Balaji : enakke aachariyamaa dhaan irukku.. unakku nalladhu pannanum nu yosichen... adhuvaa varudhu..

Sari Bye... udamba paathukko...

Jaya : ok daa.. bye...

Jaya attends interview through call for NETTECH and 2 more companies as well. Within a week, she got offer letter from NETTECH itself. Jaya, her Dad, balaji.. all are happy..

Jaya Mom comes to know about this and as expected she oppose. But Jaya dad tries to cool her down saying that their daughter needs a change now and reminds of what Doctor said.. only the environment change might bring back her health...

Jaya also assures that she would not get married without her mother. As a mother.. she thinks of her health conditions.. and the promise given by her daughter... agrees somewhat.

Balaji was all along with Jaya. Once Chandru came home and was challenging Jaya.

Chandru : hmmm... nee edhukku velaikku poren nu solra nu enakku theriyum..

Jaya : therinjikko.. enakkum onnum adhula problem illa...

Chandru : enna.. avana paakka porom nu over ah aaduriyaa ?

Jaya : (morachify him)

Chandru : enna.. appadi paakkura.. ? nee venaa paaru... inneram avan unna marandhuttu.. adutha LOVE la iruppaan...

Jaya : chumma niruthu... ellaaraiyum unna pola nenachiyaa.. ? en Karthik ah pathi enakku theriyum... avanukku naan vittutu ponenu kovam irukkum... aanaa enna verukka maattaan..

Chandru : over ah sound vidaadha... naan solren...college la unna love pannaan... ippo OFFICE la vera yaaraavadhu maattaamayaa poiyirukkum... ?

Jaya : non sense ah pesaadha... oru vela enakku marriage aagi romba varushathukku apparam naa... chances irukku..

naan inga vandhu 7 months dhaan aachu... kandippaa.. karthik enna nenchittu dhaan iruppaan...

appadiye illa naalum.. adhu en prechana... un velaiya paathuttu po...

Chandru : ha ha ha... pesu pesu... wait and see... enna nadakudhunu...

Jaya leaves the room angrily... Things are packed up. Jaya bids goodbye to her parents and leave to airport. Balaji gives her send off and wish her happiness forever. She ask him to look at her Dad and Mom when he gets time.

Back to real @ coffee shop :

Divya : Karthik.. enna idhu... public la.. ?

Karthi : (weeps)

Divya : please Karthik..control...

Karthi : (leave to rest room, wash his face and comes back)

Divya : ippa OK vaa ?

Karthi : hmmm..

Divya : enna ?

Karthi : onnum illa..

Divya gets a call and talking on phone, she says Bye..its urgent and leaves..

Karthi closes his eyes and thinks...

Jaya.. unnaala enna marakka mudiyaama.. ippadi udamba varuthi.. kashtta pattu.. inga vandhirukka.. aanaa naan..?'

haiyooo...

Karthik azhavachu ennayum feel pana vachitinga... Jaya is so confident about Karthik but here he is in love with Raji and when Jaya comes to know about it what would be her reaction???? Feel sad for her.. And please do make her to change that name please its a request... Update soon..

CHAPTER TWENTY ONE

Karthik comes back home late night. Lakshmi opens the door.

Laksh : enna Karthik.. ivlo late ? seekirame office la irundhu kelambittiye..

Karthi : (doesn't answer)

Laksh : hey ... unna dhaan ketkkuren.. sari saappittiyaa.. ?

Karthi : illa vendaam... (answers without even looking at her and moves upstairs)

Laksh : (talks to herself) enna aachu ivanukku...? (locks the door and goes to her room)

Karthik is at the terrace.. just walks around thinking about the past incidents and about what Divya said.

He starts feeling that the love Jaya has on him is priceless. He remembers Jaya about doctor appointment when he dropped her once when her bike was repair. maybe she is continuing her treatment here as well.

Also thinks as why she did not speak about this to him.. Thinks about Balaji, and Jothika, his twin sister, even she didn't tell anything about this.

He recollects some good moments had with her.

It starts raining. He then goes down to his room and don't know when he slept.

Next day morning @ office :

He is still in confused state and seems worried. Raji tries to speak but he says he is not in a mood to talk. Vishnu makes fun of it and even then he is not listening and looks disturbed.

So both thought let himself talk later when he is in good mood.

Karthi : (thinks).. Jaya, Raji rendu peru melayum thappu kidayaadhu. modhala.. naan strong ah oru mudivukku varanum.

Jaya.. ellaarayum vittuttu enakkaaga vandhirukkaa...

Raji.. innum naan dhaan venum nu appaa kitta solla oru try kooda pannala...

oru vagaila.. rendu perukkume nitchayam ayiduchu..

enna idhu... naan rendu perayum compare panna aarambichittenaa.. naan yen ippadiyellaam yosikkiren.. eppadiyum.. oruthar kooda serndhaa kandippa innorutharukku hurt aagum..

ippa enna panradhunne ore kolappamaa irukku... hmmm... konja naalaikku appadiye vittu paappom.. namakku nu enna ezhudhi irukku nu...

Later Raji tells Lakshmi that Karthik is talking normally, he doesn't even listen. Don't know why he is behaving like this. Lakshmi too says that yeah... from yesterday night he is like this only. Don't know whats wrong with him..'

Now whenever Jaya passes by their workstation, both shares a smile. Raji notes this, as it is different from the one he used to give (smile) when Angel joined here.. which was almost a formal one.

Two days passes with Karthi's silence and confused state. Vishnu tried to disturb him but got nicely from him.

Wednesday afternoon :

Karthik and Vishnu at their seats. One guy comes and delivers a courier for Raji. Vishnu signs it up and says that he will pass on to her when she is back.

Vish : dei Karthi.. Raji ku yaaru ivlo periya parcel anuppiruppaa ?

Karthi : (silent)

Vish : konjam paathu solludaa..

Karthi : paakkaamalaye enakku theriyum..

Vish : enga... sollu paappom..

Karthi : US la irundhu vandhirukku...

Vish : (turns and looks the from address) dei.. eppadi daa.. ivlo correct ah sonne ?

Karthi : adhu appadi dhaan

Raji is back at her seat.

Vish : Raji..

Raji : enna Vishnu..

Vish : inga paarunga... ungalukku oru periya gift vandhirukku...

Raji : (looks at it) chumma vidaadheenga Vishnu.. enakku yaaru anuppa poraa..

Vish : ada.. nambunga... naandhaah sign panni vaangunen.. venumnaa ivan kitta kelunga.. dei Karthi... solludaa..

Karthi : ppchh.. summa irukka maatta ?

Vish : Raji... LA la irundhu flight la vandhirukku..

Raji : enakku yaaruuu... veli naattula irundhuuu... (stops inbetween...)

Vish : yeah.. avare dhaan... Mr.Sakthivel.. unga would be'

(Karthi turns to Vishnu and morachifies)

Vish : enna yendaa morakkira.. adhu unmadhaane..

She gets a call from abroad. She did not attend it. Now her extension phone rings. She picks it up. It is Sakthi. He asks whether she received the gift and she like it or not.

Vish : idhula enna irukkummm...

Raji : (shouts) Vishnu... aduthavangalukku vandhadhaa pirichi paakkureenga...

Vish : enna Raji... ?

Raji : adha kudunga modhalla..

Vish : indhaa daa.. Raji kitta pass pannu..

(without turning.. he gets from Vishnu and passed it to Raji)

Vish : (mind voice... unakku idhu thevaiyaa Vishnu? olunga un velaiyya mattum paaru... adhu konjam kashttam dhaan.. irundhaalum try pannalaam)

Vishnu pretends to work seriously. Karthik is on kaduppu on seeing that parcel.

During breaktime around 3:30 PM :

Jaya comes from Canteen and cross their place. Karthik stops her.

Karthi : Jaya.. oru nimisham..

Jaya : sollu daa Karthi..

Raji : (mind voice.. ennadhu... daa' vaa?)

Karthi : naalaikku dhaane Saravanan-Divya reception ?

Jaya : aamaa Karthik..

Karthi : naama onna office la irundhu polaamaa ?

Raji : (turns immediately... but pretends to be casual)

Jaya : illa daa.. naan naalaikku leave.. Divya kooda irukka poren..

Vish : ohhh.. manappen thozhi... ?

Jaya : Yesss... nee maappilla thozhan illayaa.. ? Saravanan unnoda china vayasula irundhe friend la.. Karthi kooda joint adikkuradhukku munnaadi.. neenga oru thani gang la...

Vish : aamaa Jaya.. adhu oru kaalam.. adhukkudhaan Appu irukkaane... maappillai thozhan..

Jaya : avane oru arai ticket-u...

Vish : idha dhaan Jaya naan unkitta irundhu edhirpaathen... ippo dhaan pazhaya form ku vandhirukka...

Jaya : unakku onnum mudiyala nu nenakiren..

Karthi : (laughs)

Jaya : sari... neengellaam eppo varradhaa plan.. ? evening reception ka ? illa morning marriage ka ?

Karthi : evening dhaan... appo dhaan ella friends um meet panna mudiyum.. morning ellaaraalayum vara mudiyaadhu nu nenakkiren..

Jaya : adhuvum correct dhaan.. sari.. enakku ippo oru meeting irukku... naan poganum..

Vish : OK officer...

Jaya : Vishnuuu... apparam naan vera edhaavadhu solla aarambichiduven..

Vish : venaammaa thaaye... sorry... nee kelumbu...

Jaya : andha bayam irukkattum..

Raji was watching this conversation all the while and morachifies Karthi as he vazhinjified...

Vish : (mind voice... Ennadaa nadakkudhu inga... ? pazhikku pazhi... pulikku puli... ? mudiyala daa saami..)

-----------------------------------to be continued ------------------------

karthik's confusion😕...