NiBir SS- The Journey of Love - 2 (Completed)*2/5* - Page 29

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Res .

. So so sorry anmol ... Will unress soon ...😊

Unress😃

Thank you anmol for giving early updates 😳 this was good one nisha's excitement on meeting her parents was so apt ... And a concerned Laxmi and chilled Ramesh a good combo 😆

And what was that damad thing too funny 😆

And nisha understanding and being prepared for shiva's motives is nice ... Lets see what next update holds ... 😊 continue soon😳


Thanks poorni 😃
Obviously she was living in hostel so whenever she meet her parents she go overwhelmed...
@ bold Aisa combination ek or Banega jald hi 😉

Hope Nisha was capable to shiva or upcoming problem... Like everytime Kabir won't ruin it...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rishita91

Nice update

Nisha is very intelligent
Shiva kuch na kuch toh karega
Continue soon


Thanks rishita 😃
Nisha is way too smart you'll get know soon after this week..
Shiva aaya hai toh Bina kuch kiye thodi jayega 😉
I'll try to update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Thank you for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago


Chapter 8


Nisha was just slept, when she could hear some noise coming right infront of her and with that she could some movement near her legs. First she ignored it, but it increased causing Nisha open her eyes with a snap.
Found that shiva was trying to open kabir's suitcase.

Nisha got up and shout " chor chor " due to which shiva jerked for a second due to sudden noise but then smirked at Nisha evilly.

Ohh madam toh apne Parshad nhi khaya tha!" He stated that more than a question

Your bad luck... Chilao or jor se chilao... Koi nhi sunne wala " he said continuing his work

Tum Kabir ka bag chodo " she tried to freed kabir's luggage from him but only to receive a slap from him due to which she fall down

Tu hi hai na jo humara plan kharab karne me tuli thi ab main tujhe nhi chodunga, yaar aaj toh bhout bada maal hath laga hai, chori ke sath ek itna acha maal aaj raat ka maza hi kuch or hoga. " Shiva said pulling her up by gripping her hairs

Chodo mujhe " Nisha cried out in pain

Arey kabhi bolti saman chodo kabhi bolti hai mujhe chodo aise toh nhi chalega... Tujhe ya saman me ek chiz chod sakta hun but baby you're more interesting and useful than these money in his bag so I can't leave you" shiva sound more than devil, nisha's eyes widened hearing him.

Kabirrr..." She called Kabir continuously pulling his shirt almost making him fall down from his berth till shiva took her out of that coach to gate area of the train but the effect of drugs was not letting him wake up.

Nisha was scared, but in mind she was preparing her self, she know she can face this afterall she's karate champion, and she also had done self defence course too. She can handle this guy shiva easily but her self confidence little bit shaken seeing 5 other boys near that gate area with lots of expensive things of other passengers.

Guys aaj ka maal... Sabse pehle main shuruwat karunga " shiva said throwing Nisha at other boys which looked at her with hungry eyes.

Wah yaar ye hui na baat, aaj tak ka best maal... Aaj raat ka toh maza hi kuch or hoga " said a guy touching nisha's back, Nisha jerked away but another one grabbed her from waist

Don't worry bhabhi... Aapko hum Umesh bhaiya ka kami nhi hone denge, hum aapko ek sath please karenge " said the guy who had grabbed her

Nisha didn't frightened by his words because she was just calculating her way to escape and what she needs to do immediately.

Trailer dikhate hai abhi aapko" said another 3rd one moving toward Nisha not knowing his consequences. He moved closer to Nisha in order to kiss her but Nisha titled her head causing him moved to her shoulder and nisha's face went near his ear, she circled her arm around his shoulder and bite his ear making him scream in pain, she didn't leave him until her mouth was full of his blood. Seeing this the guy at her back pulled her back to slap instead of that he get a elbow punch right over his nose the a hard punch on forehead which was enough for him winced in pain and giving little space for Nisha to move towards toilet of the train. Other boys were in shock seeing this instant move of Nisha before they move towards her, making their way by making them got up from floor the two boys who falls down due to nisha's dose. Nisha was inside the toilet and locked the door immediately.

Nisha sit on the toilet seat putting it's cover down, then pulled out her phone from her socks despite of constant knock and threaten to her but she didn't budge and call on number she had seen on pamphlet over washbasin area.

Hello sir..." Nisha said when the number of 1512 lifted the call

Hello mam how can I help " said a make voice from other side

Sir abhi ohka to rameswaram express me robbery hui hai... " She narrated whole incident and who are the robbers and the man from other side he can too hear knocks and threaten to her.

Mam kya aap apna location janti hai ? " The guy immediately send alert to railway police department who are ready for the mission.

I don't know please help us sir, they had robbed whole coach and they had given everyone drugs too due to which no one is getting up " Nisha said cryingly

Mam don't worry we are immediately tracing the train location and in next station our police officer will catch them and we are too sending medical care too " the male voice said cooling down Nisha lightly

Thank you sir... " Nisha said sincerely

Mam please stay there where you are now don't come out of toilet we will call you back" he told her

Nisha cut the calling hoping this time to pass immediately. But then only she could hear shiva voice which shocked her to core.

Bhabhiji... Kitna pyar karte hai aapke pati aapse bahar aake dekhiye aapko bachane aaye hai Umesh bhaiya " shiva said loudly as Nisha could hear kabir's voice too asking for Nisha, with that she can hear him whining too.
Nisha didn't thought for second and come out immediately.

Kabir " Nisha called looking at him as his head covered up by blood due to constant punch by other boys

Dekho toh Pati patni ka pyar..." One guy sarcastically

When shiva was taking Nisha out, Nisha pulled Kabir forcefully which wake up him little, but due to strong effect of drugs he wasn't able to get up. Then he couldn't hear what's going on out as it was sound free door, buy he got hell worried for Nisha, he forcefully drag himself out of his comforter got down, it took some time to him to get out of bed not knowing Nisha had fight with them and almost won. He was forcefully opening his eyes causing salty water making his way on his cheeks. He took support of door and come out of the coach only to get beaten up by the guys who had robbed.

Kabirrr " Nisha moved toward him seeing in such a vulnerable state but before she could move, shiva get hold of nisha's hair and slapped her hard.

Shiva" Kabir shouted seeing this from his half opened eyes

Ohh bhout bura lag gaya kya Abhi toh or bura lagega jab hum sab iska maza lenge vo bhi tere samne " said guy called Kartik the leader of that group moving toward Nisha

Nisha " Kabir said loudly making everyone's head turned to him, Kabir blinked his eyes as if giving her hint of something but at that moment Nisha wasn't able to think straight as she was again trapped between those boys and she don't know what will happen next and another thought clouded on mind was kabir's state. Kabir left no option as he understood that Nisha couldn't understand his signal. He slowly grabbed the pepper spray on everyone.
When Nisha saw Kabir was spraying, she understood and immediately close her eyes but she was late Kabir had spread it around allover. Kabir kicked out the boys who come between his way to Nisha as all's eyes were buring due to which he was easily make his way to Nisha, then grab her as she was whining in effect of that spray.

Kabir... Kabir " Nisha holded him then cried, Kabir took her back in same toilet where Nisha was before

Nisha was trying hard to open her eyes and on the other hand Kabir was verge of losing his concious. Kabir was about to fall but Nisha holded him in her closed eyes she made him sit on toilet seat then open the tap of washbasin to splash some water on her eyes.
After that process she was able to see clearly, she looked at Kabir and splash some water on his eyes to bring him back to concious.

Kabir are you alright ?" Nisha asked him as she closely looked at his head wound.

Kabir opened his eyes with difficulty and try to look at her " I'm sorry Nisha " Nisha or maybe even Kabir didn't understand that the salty water that was constantly coming out of his eyes become tear of his guilt.

Kabir it's alright don't worry I'd informed police " said Nisha looking at his head as blood was dripping continuously.

Ohh god kabir blood toh ruk hi nhi raha hai " Nisha said think to what she can tie that stop the blood, but she hold nothing, having no other option she pressed her hand on head so she could stop the blood while sitting on his lap. Kabir looked up only to lock his eyes with her's which holds only care for him.

Their trance was broken by a loud knock or kick. They looked at door, as the door was shaking up, as if someone trying to break the door which took Nisha into the anxious state while Kabir too got nervous and on the top he was loosing his concious. The effect of drugs was damn strong that Kabir only had less amount or it was none of kind then he was in this state and other who had eaten while was sleeping and they could hear nothing.

Kabir's mind and vision slowly started getting black out. He falls on nisha's arm but not before hearing a loud bang. As of something falls down. But he couldn't help this time he was completely unconscious.

To be continued...

Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago
Anmol333 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Loved it
Thank you for the pm


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
OMG what an Scarry update Anmol
Loved it
That's really brave of Nisha to face these people alone
She didn't have an option too
Sahi kehte hai musibat main 8 gram bheja hi kaam aata hai
Well done Nisha you taught them a good lesson 👏
OMG now Kabir is in trouble too
Good that Nisha saved Kabir bravely on time and reported the matter to police
Kabir got injured but at the end what happened 😲
Hope they both are safe
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks dear 😊
Anmol333 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

OMG what an Scarry update Anmol

Loved it
That's really brave of Nisha to face these people alone
She didn't have an option too
Sahi kehte hai musibat main 8 gram bheja hi kaam aata hai
Well done Nisha you taught them a good lesson 👏
OMG now Kabir is in trouble too
Good that Nisha saved Kabir bravely on time and reported the matter to police
Kabir got injured but at the end what happened 😲
Hope they both are safe
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊


Thank you Goldie 😃
Main toh phele hi boli thi bhout serious hone wala hai ye story 😉

We can come across this type of phase of life but we can face it by presence of mind 😉😊

Kabir thought nisha was alone so he couldn't hold himself and went to help her despite not able to open his eyes.

Kabir the one who saved himself and as well as nisha

I'll try to update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Anmol scary update.
Loved it.
Nisha faced them alone.
Kabir went to help her.
Hope they both are fine.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Anmol a scary one 😲 and a dangerous one too😔
Hope they fight with good presence of mind and stay safe 😒

And hope the help come in time ...
I liked the way you linked the points with previous update liketge toilet scene , the phone in socks , pepper spray ... Good going ... 👍🏼

Update soon 😊

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