NiBirSS: Let's Football! Chap5 Updated(2 Dec) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: angelanju

awesome update...👏

seriously ye chal kyaa rha hai?😆
kabir to lattu ho gaya nisha pe...
loved Nisha Rammy's talk


Thanks so much Angel Anju😳😳
Glad you liked it😃
Pyaar me lattu magar dil phattoo😆
Thanks again Anju <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Anmol333


I know wo ek gana hai but Punjabi or Gujarati kyun daali vo main samjh gayi you're so naughty just like me 😛


Hehe same pinch😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: mkjr

Superb story plz post next part


thanks dear😳😳
will update today or tomorrow😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Niha0606

superb yaar👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏 amazing👏


Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗Thanks sooo much Niha🤗
Glad you liked it😳😳😳
Lovely thanks again <3 <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: tani_0209

Awsm update..

Date was amzng..Itna awkwardness expected tha to I enjoyed..
Bt later Wat I discovered made me smile throughout n dat was kabir's desperation..
Seems like he z already in love wid miss intelligent..
M jst loving d way d stry z unfolding..
N relation btwn nisha n her parents z always adorable..
Waiting 4 d nxt..n I pray u get ur laptop soon


Thanks so much tani😳😳
Dat...Meeting😆 pasand aayi feeling glad😊
And your guess is in the right direction😆
Thanks for praying😳
Will update today or tomorrow😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Superb update ... what a date ... and kabir ne kya palti maara 🤣 so interested?? For coffee tomorrow again 🤣 my fav part ...

Hope tumhara laptop jaldi se theek hojaye and many more updates jaldi mile😃


Thanks Poornima🤗
Mera bhi fav part hai vo😉😆
will update today or tomorrow😃
Thanks again😳😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

NiBir SS: Let's Football !

Chapter3

Two weeks had passed. I had gone in for coffee with him for second time but I had skipped the party. It was really hard to convince Kabir that we had met few days ago and hence coming in the party won't be possible. He even said that the party was actually a simple dinner nothing else and that it was organized so as to celebrate the inter college fest win. So, only teammates with their parents are invited and some close family friends of theirs. He somehow agreed dejectedly after I strongly replied in a no.
Kabir and I used to meet often in college, football ground, near my colony, and while giving him lifts to his home... my home actually and then he used to walk till his.
We talked about topics ranging from the food at college canteen to thoughts about our lives. We found many similarities in us like focus on our respective career, bond with our best friend,our favourite color, respective first trophies, our lifestyle ,ever readiness for paani puri and our favourite chocolate...yeah I know it's a bit crazy but we love the same chocolate yaar.
Although we shared common things there were also some stark differences on other matters like money, popularity and our culture. However one must understand how to enjoy and respect the differences and we both had the same spirit.
"Nisha"
"Yeah"
"Can you please help in studies?"
I spoke happily "Sure why not? Kaunsa subject? C ya C++?" [Note:Kindly ignore if you can't relate😆 Subjects k baare me hai just...]
He muttered under his breath "A, B to padha nahi, C kaha se?"
"Kya bola?"
"Erm...kuch nai...vese mai apne liye nahi actually meri behen ke liye puch raha tha"
"Teri behen?"
"Ha 9th me hai" he smiled.
"Oh par use kisme help chahiye?"
"Chemistry"
"Tune bhi to science liya tha naa?"
"Arey vo din yaad mat dila yaar" he sulked.
"Err...sorry...par kyu?"
He chuckled "kyunki chemistry me grace tha mujhe 12th me"
"Accha" I said sheepishly.
"Tere kitne the number? "
"96"
"Wow! Same pinch!" He slightly pinched my arm.
"Hain? Grace bola naa tu?"
"96 in PE" he smiled.
He smirked,"Uske bharose to ye college mila hai"
I laughed "Mr. Khiladi ko engineering karne ki zaroorat kaha aan padi?"
He took a deep breath looking away "Kya kya batau tujhe? "
As his tone dropped so I asked with seriousness "Kya hua Kabir?"
"Nothing...tu padhayegi meri behen ko?"
"Thik hai...vo kab hogi free?"
"Shaam ko hi, subah to school rehta hai naa"
"Yup magar... erm jyada late nai ruk paungi"
He beamed "Thanks...aur college se directly aa jana naa mere saath phir 6:30 pe chale jaana apne ghar"
He continued "Tuition lene nai keh raha, bas ek din ki baat hai, uske doubts clear kar dena yaar sirf"
"Fee dene se bach raha hai?" I smirked.
He smirked "sach me intelligent hai tu"
We both laughed.
"Chal thik hai, classes k baad milte hai"
"Hmm bye"
"Bye"
As recess got over I entered classroom and sat beside Kirti.
"Hi Kirti"
"Hi miss popular" she winked.
"What?"
"Yeah...Kabir ki gf to popular hogi hi naa" Kirti nudged me.
"Come on yaar, I'm not his gf"
"Oh please, apni best friend se jhoot bolegi?"
"Nai naa Kirti... we are really just friends, nothing more!"
"Gossip ki galiyaaro me tere hi charche hai" she smiled.
"Maine nai suni aisi koi gossip!"
"Tere baare me log tere saamne bolenge kya idiot!"
Teacher came in making me close my mouth.
"Roll no. 46"
"46?"
"Nisha! Bol na!" Kirti shook me.
"Huh?"
"47"
"Present mam"
"Mam roll no. 46" I got up.
The teacher glared at me while I gulped.
She spoke "48"
"Present mam"
I uttered "Err...mam 46"
"I already marked absent for 46" the teacher stated.
Kirti whispered to me "Attendance to lagi nai teri, chali hi jaa"
"Kirti chup" I whispered back secretly.
"49"
And the roll call continued. Kirti pulled me down to my seat and grinned "Accha khaasa mauka mat gava"
"Magar mujhe attend karna hai lecture" I said.
Soon, the teacher started teaching. I was noting down important points when a wind wave struck me. I held the pages of my notebook with my left hand and was about to put down the next point when the wind hummed again.
My eyes tardily moved towards the door.
"Kabir..." I whispered to myself as Kabir stood outside waving his hand with a smile playing over his lips.

"Nisha!" The teacher roared.
I immediately looked at her and got up"Ye...yes mam"
"Answer!"
I looked out not to find anyone there. Where's Kabir gone? I moved my eyes towards the window but he wasn't there too.
"Why are you looking outside? You want to go out?" The teacher glowered.
"No mam I was just erm..."
"Le! ab to saamne aaya mauka chod rahi hai" I heard Kirti speak with a hand over her mouth. I hit her foot with mine hinting her to keep quiet.
"Fine then answer"
"Aa...answer"I scratched my head.
I heard my mates' light laughters accompanied by some whispers.
"You didn't hear the question?" The teacher said shocked.
I presented a nervous face.
Kirti prompted "4580 hai"
And I declared "4580"
A boy wearing round spectacles sitting on first bench pointed out"Wrong answer! It's 4580.00065 mam"
Unified laughter broke out again.
"Quiet class! He's correct!"The teacher averred.
Actually the guy who spoke was Chatur... remember the flick 3 idiots? Nope his name wasn't actually Chatur but people called him so because of his behaviour matched to that character of the film.
I said"But mam 4580.0065 can be-"
He cut in,"It's point triple zero six five"
"I said that only!"
"No! You said point double zero six five"
I shook my head flaring my nostrils at him.
"89% aaye hai to itna knowledge to hoga naa decimal k baad zero ka" he simpered.
"Tere 88.99 aaye hai to tujhse behtar kisko pata hoga?" I smirked.
The whole class seemed to enjoy our conversation as I next heard some claps from the back benches.
"Tera dhyan kahi aur tha isliye ek zero khaa gayi" he retorted.
"Tu naa subject pe dhyan de!" I fumed.
"Tu aajkal football pe jyada dhyan dene lagi to isme meri kya galti?"
"Is Chatur ki to mai!" I gritted my teeth losing my temper and moved forward leaving my place.
Kirti held my hand and gestured me in a no using her eyes.
"Aaj tera aakhiri din Chatur!" Somebody exclaimed from back side.
"Beta tu to gaya!" I heard a different voice which followed laughters.
"Shut up everyone!" The teacher roared again.
Laughters subsided to smiles leading to silence.
"This isn't expected from you Nisha!" The teacher glared at me.
"Sorry mam" I blurted out.
"Apologize to Chirag" she commanded.
Chirag is Chatur by the way who possessed an evil grin.
"But mam-"
"Nisha quick!"
"I won't apologize to him mam, he should apologize first" I demanded.
"Otherwise out of my class" she stated.
I looked at Kirti who waved me a bye and I pulled out my sling bag and walked out fuming.
"Ye Chatur khud ko samjhata kya hai? Kahi ka Einstein hai? 'Aajkal tera dhyan football pe hai' huh! Agar class ke baahar bola hota to murder kar deti mai uska! Bada aaya decimal ke baad zero ka gyaan dene wala! Khud ko pata hota to top nai kar leta! Chaapla! Uska-" and I bumped into someone absorbed in my thoughts halting my stride.
"Andhe ho kya?" I snarled unaware of the person's identity who collided with me.
"Baap re! itna gussa" Kabir grinned.
I exhaled noisily "Tu to baat mat kar mujse! Teri vajah se hua hai ye sab!" I surpassed him all angry.
He hurriedly jumped back to stand beside me and stopped me by my shoulder "Maine kya kiya? You were the one who dashed in me blabbering something"
"Mai abhi ki baat nahi kar rahi!"
"Phir?"
"Phir kya? Tu kyu khada tha class k baahar thodi der pehle? Disturbing element!"
"Whoa...what! When did I disturb you? I was with Riteish alright... not where you're saying!"
He continued "And how can you even imagine that I'll be somewhere around class?"
I was going to rejoinder when one word of his question turned my world round me. Imagine! Imagine? I was imagining him?
"Kaha kho gayi?"
"Kuch nai" I massaged my forehead.
"Never saw you this angry...what happened?"
"Arey kuch nai vo Chatur hai naa vo-"
"Kaun vo half ticket?"
"Ha voi" I chuckled.
"Tu bhi kya, don't worry about that... quarter ticket bhi nai bachega vo"
"Err...nai,use to mai dekh lungi...tu mat pad is maamle me please" I requested as I really didn't want to let this fight turn nastier.
"Kaunsa maamla?" Kabir inquired.
I made a face.
He stated next,"He was instigating me against you"

"Kya?Iski to!" I swirled with my fist taut in anger.
"Arey madam ruk" Kabir grabbed me by my waist.
"Kabir chod mujhe! Aaj to ye Chatur ka naamonishan mita dungi mai!"
"Sshhh calm down" Kabir spoke slashing down the distance between us.
He smiled as my face features eased. I blinked thrice and he moved back.
"Tere hontho pe hasi jyada acchi lagti hai" he winked.
I flushed "th...thanks"
"Aisa subah Riteish keh raha tha Kirti se" he smirked.
I hit him with the notebook I held.
He chortled "Alright fine fine! Attend karegi baaki ke lectures?"
"Nai! Mood kharaab hai!" I snapped.
"Ek kiss se theek ho jayega?" He flashed his brows.
"Huh?"
"K..kisse theek ho jayega tera mood? Chocolate se?" He asked rubbing his neck.
He and his word play! It was the third time he did I guess. But this time I didn't mind as it lightened my mood a bit.
"Mai ghar jaa rahi bye" I spoke hastily and swiveled hiding a smile.
"Nisha bhool gayi tu?"
I stopped and asked without turning back "Kya?"
"Voo meri behen ko padhane ka bola tha" he reminded.
"Hmm..." I looked down and quickly bore a normal presentable face.
"Chal rahi phir abhi?" He came beside me.
"Abhi?" I questioned moving my eyes to him.
"Err...haa...tujhe late bhi nahi hoga phir, din me hi vapas chali jaana"
"Thik hai chal"
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Precap: Chemistry 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
U kno Wat dis story z jst soo amzng..m glad u continued it
Nisha kabir ki gf h Aisa gossip h..hahaaa
N dat class m kabir ko imagine krna n chatur ka football ground wala dialog
Soo funny..
Kabir to fill lattoo h
Kbhi bhi chance miss ni krta
But update was chotu yar..update d nxt soon plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: tani_0209

U kno Wat dis story z jst soo amzng..m glad u continued it

Nisha kabir ki gf h Aisa gossip h..hahaaa
N dat class m kabir ko imagine krna n chatur ka football ground wala dialog
Soo funny..
Kabir to fill lattoo h
Kbhi bhi chance miss ni krta
But update was chotu yar..update d nxt soon plz


Big Thanks Tani😳😳
Err..yeah thoda chota tha
Feeling great that you enjoyed it🤗
Will write and post next part soon😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update 👏
Aise chatur jaise log hote hai class dusron ki life me jayda interfere karne wale...😡
Aisa hi hota hai pyar me topper ladki ka dhyan lagna band ho gaya hai 😆
Loved Kirti comments in between 😆😆
Sentence changer is always rock 😆😉
Update soon 😳
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago

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