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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani_0209

Oh god..u made it soo emotional

Kabir z already Nt wid her n kavya is also dere wid dolly
Though I like dolly being understanding n let her spend some time wid kavya alone
Bt I really wish she gets her child 4vr n Nt like dis only
Ik u hav surely planned d story so u won't interrupt bt
Will request u to bring some happy parts as well
N ty 4 informing me

thankyou and sorry for making u emotional... and happy moments coming soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Note:- hello all thankyou for your support😊... and sorry for making u all sad ... now posting the next two parts together of the story ... as many of u requested for happy moments... here u go 😉😃 ... the next updates will be delayed as I have a hectic week ahead so hope u'll wait and keep loving the story ... do tell me what u feel about the updates 😃 ( I'll try my best to update soon ) 😊
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PART 3

As I took kavu to the room and made her lie on the bed to make her sleep ... but no she had other plans she crawled to the other side of the bed ... and seeing me amazed at her trick she started laughing... that brought an instant smile on my face and I moved towards her to catch her and again she tricked me and moved to the other side and start laughing more ... I stood on my knees over the bed keeping my hands on my waist " achcha ji mumma se shaitani... kitna badmash hogaya h itni jldi ..." and went towards her and yet again she tricked me and crawled to the other end... I pouted realizing I failed to catch her again and crossed my arms ... seeing me she came toward me and balancing on the headrest and me she kissed my cheeks ... I smiled and when I extended my hand to hold her she tricked me again but this time she rolled on the bed and again started laughing... " kavu phir se ... rukja abhi batati hu ... " this time I was successful in catching her and started tickling her ... the room filled with both aur melodious laughter and soon both of us got tired and lie down on our backs ... after catching our breath I turned towards her ... she extended her arms smiling " mum mum " she called me towards her . Kissing her forehead and Securing her with one arm and with the other one I started patting her head coz I knew my baby was tired now " mamma loves u babu" ... and within no time she drifted to her dreamland ... and i to my past ...
FLASHBACK
Ours was an arranged marriage...two years back a new relationship begin of not only two individuals but two families moreover a new business venture between the Gangwals and the Kumars ...
Kabir was the only son and the future heir of Kumars so definitely he was smart and intelligent and very talented... not only this he was the blue eyed boy for my family that irritated me a lot ... and why not he was the one whom every mother wants her son to be like ...the best brother ... and the man every girl dream of ... in short the best ... we both knew each other since childhood as we attended many business parties where our families used to meet but never had a quality conversation...and still were almost strangers on the first night ... and why not Mr busy never had time to meet before marriage and I was least interested...I was waiting for him leaning on the window in our room when I heard a knock ... I turned toward the door and slowly he entered the room locking the door behind and walking towards me ... for the very first time I saw him so keenly ... his well chiseled body complementing the sherwani he was wearing ,perfect features he have ... and within seconds I realized why he was the dream boy for every girl ... I was lost in my thoughts when he spoke " hi myself Kabir Kumar" and forwarded his hand towards me for a hand shake ... my eyes followed first his face and then his hand ... " oh achcha mujhe to pata hi nai tha ... " I mean who introduces himself to your wife on the very first night of your marriage... " what ... ?" Came his reply ,I sighed and finally spoke ... "business meeting me aye ho ? Itna formal kyu horahe ho .. " and finally the that idiot got something and spoke" han to theek h ... mai to bas conversation initiate Kat raha tha ? Anyhow koi mann to tha nai mera because itna Jo Sara shadi ka siyappa hua h sab tumhari wajah se hi h ... mujhe to baat hi nai karni chahiye thi phir be decency ki wajah se ... tum mana kar Sakti thi kyu haan kiya shadi k liye " ...
" what?? meri wajah se ?? Aur tum b mana karsakte the na ?? But nahi phir Mr perfect kaise rehte ...why should I take the blame on me..." saying I sat on the bed all exhausted
" Ayee Jada mat bolo maine bataya tha na I was busy..." and came to my side and sat on the bed
" Han han pata h ... we could have figured out something only if Mr busy thoda time nikal lete but nai ... ab bhugto "
Actually we both never wanted to get married nothing personal for each other but it was just that not now ... and the very first day we met or the only day we met before marriage due to his busy schedule we told each other this and decided we both will say no to our respective families but the family pressure and having no reason to reject the proposal neither of us spoke thinking the other might definitely say no ... and here we are on the first night fighting with each other ...
" Ab kya kare? " I spoke
"Ab vo jo first night me hota h " he said with a smirk ... it took me few moments to register what he said and soon his head was hit with a pillow ... " achcha achcha baba sorry majaak kar raha tha ... sorry sorry " he spoke and I stopped hitting him...
" Ab Sara time ayese hi strangers ki tarha ladte Rehna h ya ... can we be friends?? Ab jab sath me Rehna hi h to friends ki tarha b reh sakte h ... ?so Friends? " And forwarded his hand again toward me ...
Having no other option I shook hands with him ... " ohhk .. friends" and we both smiled ... like this started our friendship... slowly slowly days passed and we became good friends ...
Everyday early morning he used to leave for the office and come home by the evening and again engross himself in his work but we used to have our dinner together and he would never forget to give me time on weekends we used to watch movies and at times go for shopping or outing ... " nishu pata h ye project bahut important h hmare liye papa ka sapna tha ye new venture... and hopefully this time hamare families k partnership se mai papa ka sapna pura kar paunga" and while saying this his eyes show a different shine ... kabir's dad was no more with us ...he lost him in his childhood and has very faint memories of him ... he was brought up by his mom single handedly... vasu maa was a very strong and successful business lady ... her hard work made Kumars reach heights in the business world ...
Every day being alone in the home made me bored ... so one day when he was busy searching a file in the cupboard... I asked him "kabir ummm I was thinking can I join the college again ... ? I mean I get bored all day and there is nothing to do .. so I was thinking..."
" Nishu tu soachti bhi hai? " He chuckled
I folded my hands and glared him ...
" Achcha sorry ... dekh nishu Jo tujhe achcha lage and tera mann kare ... u are free to do it ... kuch b karne k liye tujhe meri permission lene ki jarurat nai h it's your life ... haan I'll be happy agar tu apne career ki taraf steps le " ... hearing him I smiled and in excitement immediately hugged him "thanku thanku thanku so much kabir "... due to shock he stumbled back few steps and chuckled... realizing what I did I left him and mumbled a sorry ... he shook his head and lightly smacked my head with the file he was holding and left from there smiling...
A new day and a new beginning... I joined college the very next day and my happiness went to some other level ... like this some more days passed ... from his busy schedule he used to drop and pick me up everyday and this gave us some more time to know each other better ... the more u know him the more you fall for him ... yes I started falling for him and this feeling kept increasing manifolds everyday ... about him I don't know ... it is so confusing... as he always use to say " nishu ur the bestest friend "but the way he used to care for me said some thing else ...
Like this days passed and my feelings for him kept growing I was confused wether to confess or not... what to do ... hope I figure out soon ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 4

Days passed and within 2 months my day would start with kabir and end with kabir ... no no not because I have fallen madly in love with him (actually I did) but the actual reason was that as the deadline for the quotation submission for his dream project was coming near Mr perfect transformed into Mr careless ... not for his work but for himself... he used to skip meals and was not even taking proper sleep at night ... always engross with the laptop ... so I had ko keep shouting after him to remind him of his meals and his rest ... and thus my days would start and end shouting at him ...
And one fine day Mr careless slipped the stairs and resulting into a left sprained leg and fractured right arm ...
Standing in front of him with my hands folded over the chest and throwing draggers at him I was fuming with anger ... sensing my anger he spoke " mai jaan much k slip nai hu tha " making innocent face as possible ... " yes correct... mai ayi thi na waha dhakka marne ?? haina ? " I spoke sarcastically... " kya pata " he murmured under his breath making faces ... " kya kya bola tumne ?" I asked
" Kuch nai ... are yrr nishu sorry naa ... next time nai hoga ... "he spoke making that baby face again ... oh god why he has to be so cute uff .. knowing how important that project was to him I spoke " now what kaise hoga project ...? See what u did in your carelessness... isiliye hmesha I was behind u shouting to take care of yourself... but nai meri baat to Sunni hi nai h " ... his face dropped and that made me more worried for him ... " idea!!! " Immediately he spoke ... looking up to me and having that naughty smile and shine in his eyes ... " what ? " I said sensing the trouble ... " you can help me ...after all professor ho kab kaam aogi " he chuckled... " excuse me ? Kya matlab .. " I enquired
" Are yrr nisha you can help me make the presentation and after all this week is your semester break "
" What !! I know nothing about business... how can I " I hesitated
" Are I'll help u na ... and u just have to prepare the write-up and I'll tell you everything what you have to write "
"No kuch gadhbad hogayi to ?"
" Kuch nai hoga na nishu ... please please pretty please " he spoke again making that baby face ... and who am I to say no to that cutest face ...
And then days passed me helping him in the project bringing us more closer and me falling hard for him ... but still confused...
Luckily we were able to submit quotation on time ... and by now his leg was fine ... but the fractured arm needed some more time ...

" Aww kabir we r going on a date ? " I spoke to irritate him and also to get some hint...
" A treat correction nishu" he spoke irritatedly but I could sense a slight smile forming on his lips
"Hahaha I know ... but tell me atleast where are we going" I asked him
"Are baba Surprise h ... now chup kitna bolti ho ... and let me drive mai fractured hand k saath drive kar raha hu please cooperate "
Actually he was taking me for a treat for helping him in the project and yes he was highly impressed from my work...he was taking me to some special place that I don't know till now ... I was preparing my self so that today I will confess my love to him... but before that some things needed to be cleared between us... " finally hum pahunch Gaye " she spoke excitedly breaking my trance... I looked outside to find a small lake coverd with the beautiful rose garden all around ... I was still admiring the scene when I heared a click to notice he was standing in front of me like a gentleman opening the door for me to come out " madam ab bahaar bhi ana h ya car k andar hi Rehna h ... " I came out and was lost again in the beauty... he snapped his fingers in front of me " kaisa laga ... ? surprise pasand nai aya ? Chal kahi aur chalte h " he spoke and held my hand and started moving toward the car ... " nahi kabir this place is so beautiful... surprise bahut achcha h ..." this brought a bright smile on his face and he hugged me out of excitement... " thankyou nisha ... " breaking the hug I spoke " thankyou kisliye?" ... he chuckled and put his arm across my shoulder and started walking towards the lake " vaise to bahut sari cheejo k liye .. like supporting me Everytime, caring for me ... running behind me always for food ... but today only for helping me during the toughest time ... agar tu help nai karti to shayad dad ka sapna pura nai karpata mai... mera dream adhura rehjata... thankyou for everything"we reached a bench and sat there he still speaking... telling me about everything his memories he remember about his dad ... I kept silent and kept listening to him ... actually I was lost in the thoughts of our beautiful future together... after some time " bore kardia na Maine ?" It was then I realized my head was leaning on his shoulder and aur fingers intervened... and I started smiling at the thought actually blushing... seeing me smiling he spoke " has kyu rahi h joke mara Maine? " ... ignoring his question i spoke " kabir kuch puchu ? " ..
" since when u need my permission to speak " and he laughed... I glared him " achcha baba sorry puchna ... bas 19 ka table mat puchna mujhe nai ata madamji" and again started laughing...I smacked his shoulder " kabir ... jaa nai puchna mujhe kuch ... " and turned other side ... " nishu sorry yrr ... puchna ...ab koi majaak nai karunga promise " ... I turned facing him ... looking into his hazel eyes I spoke
" kabir why you don't wanted to get married...umm I mean do you have someone else in your life ?or was there some other reason" ... he smiled listening my question he held my hand and spoke " nisha firstly I don't have anyone else in my life and secondly at that time I was not in a mental state to get married my whole focus was on this project and suddenly at that time this marriage proposal came so when we met for the first time ... out of frustration i spoke all that ...but today suddenly why are you asking all this " ..
" kabir that time same was my condition neither I wanted to get married but now what? What about us our future ... ?till when are we going to walk aimlessly like this " I spoke my heart out now my confusion my insecurities... were clear to him now by now we both were that much close to each other that we can read between the lines..." nisha I don't know about our past but after spending these days with u one thing I definitely know is that I would like to spend my rest of the life with you...I will not say I m in love with u but I definitely like you want to spend my all the time with you ... listen to you scoldings ... your laughter ... your talks ...and yes if this is called love then I'm in love with u " and he took both my hands in his and spoke "so will you invest in this relationship and sign the deal with me ?" Tears started flooding my eyes was I dreaming if yes then I never wanted to wake up...but no this was not the dream but my beautiful reality... did he just said what my heart wanted to hear since so long ... " nisha roo kyu rahi h ... itna bura tha kya ? ...I nodded my head in a no " yes yes the deal is sealed... " and hugged him tightly he reciprocated the hug and embraced me tightly in his arms ... and like this the new phase started of of our togetherness ... "nisha I know all this is so sudden ... I don't want to force anything on u and never will you can take your time and we'll wait for each other... he spoke still hugging me and kissed my hairs... the sun setting down giving way to the night sky filled with infinitely shining stars and ours filling our life with new happiness ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Next one or two more parts about the past and then coming back to present 😊 (do read the note on page 6)
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This update is full of awww 👏👏
Main bhout bhout bhout happy hun iss update se 😃
First scene where nisha with her daughter omg that so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so cute I just melt over there 😳
Then past started 😊
Nibir ki first night hatke Na ho aisa kaise ho sakta hai 🤣 🤣 🤣
Then friendship turn to love slowly awesome 😳😳
Then confession 😳
In this update each and everything was awww I really really really loved it😳

Arey yaar jab sab perfect hota hai toh gadbad kaise hojati hai 🤔
I m eager to know what had happened in past please update soonest as possible 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
thankyou shibu😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res😆
Thanks for jaldi update😃
Will comment soon if my net pack allows😕
Unres
Net pack gone didi k mobile se kar rahi comment badi muskil se
Jitna rulaya naa kal tumne utna hasa bhi diya aaj 😊😊
Both updates lovely ❤️
Nisha with her princess was very very sweet 😳
It's Description was beautiful I could actually imagine it👏👏
Past was also very funny 😆
First night convo n intro 🤣🤣🤣
Bechare dono ne mana ni kia aur dono bhugat rahe hai 😆
And then slowly growing friendship along with project
Finally the confession liked it!!😃
Okay now no more hate for Kabir hmm that's y u said everything has a reason😊
Yaar when everything was going pretty well rather best then kyu chod diya Kabir ne Nishu ko???😕
My mind again went in guessing mode and found 2 reasons I won't reveal that now cz I want to check how is my guessing ability so I would tell you when you yourself would reveal in your story😆😆
Also I read the note of yours and it's okay I'll wait no problem after finding out that Kabir😉 was good and will wait to know the actual reason & their union
Loved both the updates!!!👏👏👏

Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Note:- hello all thankyou for your support😊... and sorry for making u all sad ... now posting the next two parts together of the story ... as many of u requested for happy moments... here u go 😉😃 ... the next updates will be delayed as I have a hectic week ahead so hope u'll wait and keep loving the story ... do tell me what u feel about the updates 😃 ( I'll try my best to update soon ) 😊


Okay poorni no problem 😊
But when you'll be free try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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both the updates were tooo cute😃😃19th table😆😆
thanku soo much for early update🤗
waiting for next update...
excited can't wait to know why idiot kabira left nishu😡
great great great great work yaaar...beautifully written👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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