Nibir story: Nayi Umeedein Last Part up pg19 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
I had read the day itself you posted😃😃 but couldn't comment then, was busy.🤔
To be short, the climax of this story has always been so gripping for me.

But mera long comment regarding the chap aana baaki hai.😆

Itne dino baad 'Res'😉

Itne dino baad Unres😆


The start was a bang!
Silence except her rebellious heart and then sheer determination on his face and THEN
maaf karde nisha
Amazing yaar!!!👏👏👏
So Beautifully you have described everything 👍🏼
Feelings itne ubhar k aate hai naa ki dhadkan tez ho jaati hai
Search for the special someone is always impatient but the way it's presented here yaar Dil le gayo tussi❤️
The hurdles put forward between the truth and Kabir, claps for that👏
OMG I had forgotten at that point ki Saurav Dolly ka bhi to angle hai
I was in my own flow of the happy milan of Kabir Nisha and Kavya.
The emotions are so real !
And that subtle momentary disappointment hmm
Thereafter a sweet relaxing moment with Dolly and the thudding's up
Aa gaya final climax!!😎
It's Worth the wait!
Yaar emotional kar hi deti ho tum
Yet naughty kavu brought my three inches wide smile back ( ha i know three inches kuch jyada ho gya phr muh k baahar aa jaega🤣 🤣but that was just an analogy😆 of how my smile returned)

Every new day come with new hopes, new discoveries, new love ,new beginnings ... And with us together ... 😃😃

Hats off yaar!👏 Each part of this story has got awesome climaxes and I enjoyed them full on😉
Poornima I feel a proud reader😳😳
Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

I had read the day itself you posted😃😃 but couldn't comment then, was busy.🤔

To be short, the climax of this story has always been so gripping for me.

But mera long comment regarding the chap aana baaki hai.😆

Itne dino baad 'Res'😉

will be waiting for your comment unress soon ... Hope it was somewhere up to ur expectations😊
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

I had read the day itself you posted😃😃 but couldn't comment then, was busy.🤔

To be short, the climax of this story has always been so gripping for me.

But mera long comment regarding the chap aana baaki hai.😆

Itne dino baad 'Res'😉

Itne dino baad Unres😆


The start was a bang!
Silence except her rebellious heart and then sheer determination on his face and THEN
maaf karde nisha
Amazing yaar!!!👏👏👏
So Beautifully you have described everything 👍🏼
Feelings itne ubhar k aate hai naa ki dhadkan tez ho jaati hai
Search for the special someone is always impatient but the way it's presented here yaar Dil le gayo tussi❤️
The hurdles put forward between the truth and Kabir, claps for that👏
OMG I had forgotten at that point ki Saurav Dolly ka bhi to angle hai
I was in my own flow of the happy milan of Kabir Nisha and Kavya.
The emotions are so real !
And that subtle momentary disappointment hmm
Thereafter a sweet relaxing moment with Dolly and the thudding's up
Aa gaya final climax!!😎
It's Worth the wait!
Yaar emotional kar hi deti ho tum
Yet naughty kavu brought my three inches wide smile back ( ha i know three inches kuch jyada ho gya phr muh k baahar aa jaega🤣 🤣but that was just an analogy😆 of how my smile returned)

Every new day come with new hopes, new discoveries, new love ,new beginnings ... And with us together ... 😃😃

Hats off yaar!👏 Each part of this story has got awesome climaxes and I enjoyed them full on😉
Poornima I feel a proud reader😳😳

Thank you 😊 for such a long comment 😳 dil khush hogaya ye comment padh k 😃
@bold part this really means a lot 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for now
Thanks for sending PM regularly will try to unres soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Haww! How come I didn't notice that you finished this? Wow. I was a silent reader but I really do adore this story. Keep up the awesome work 😊 I love this one and I can't wait to read more from you 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

Awesome update.keep shining.

thankyou😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res for now
Thanks for sending PM regularly will try to unres soon

😊 good to see u after long time😆will be waiting unress soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roaiba

Haww! How come I didn't notice that you finished this? Wow. I was a silent reader but I really do adore this story. Keep up the awesome work 😊 I love this one and I can't wait to read more from you 👏

thankyou😊 it's good to know that u liked this story ...😃 more stories ka to pata nai ... But wil try if i get time😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poorni please write new story na...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Poorni please write new story na...😊

new story k liye koi idea nai h dimaag me 😕

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