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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Superb os 👏 👏 👏
Just loved it ❤️

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aNibirFan

@aNibirFan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I've read this in August... couldn't tell you then 😆... so posting my view now and that is:
You write emotional stuffs so beautifully Annie 👏👏
Heart beat shoot up in fright😭
Loved will power of Nisha😊
Her emotional state is presented superbly👍🏼
The following line about voices I could sense in my ears
"Mama, you can do this, you can fight," A voice came, "You aren't weak, Nisha, you'll have to fight," came Kabir's voice, but he was nowhere.

And this touched me yaar:

"And you fought them, you won, Nisha, rest of the thing doesn't matter to me, you are the winner, that's all," He replied in a contented, proud tone, kissing her forehead.

One of the great pieces of your writing👏

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: aNibirFan
I've read this in August... couldn't tell you then 😆... so posting my view now and that is:
You write emotional stuffs so beautifully Annie 👏👏
Heart beat shoot up in fright😭
Loved will power of Nisha😊
Her emotional state is presented superbly👍🏼
The following line about voices I could sense in my ears
"Mama, you can do this, you can fight," A voice came, "You aren't weak, Nisha, you'll have to fight," came Kabir's voice, but he was nowhere.

And this touched me yaar:

"And you fought them, you won, Nisha, rest of the thing doesn't matter to me, you are the winner, that's all," He replied in a contented, proud tone, kissing her forehead.

One of the great pieces of your writing👏

thankoo neeru!😳

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