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It's was awesome they way they realized
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Awsm update...
Finally Nibir Realised About There Feelings...nd all thanks to alia...
I M Very Excited About The Shimla trip...
Plzzz Update It Soon...


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It was lyk blushing blushing all d tym..
Finally dy got sum tym alone..
N dat also was named DATE😳
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Alia z d bst..
N evry co-incidence dat happened was soo cute..
N finally love realisation
Aww...dat was 👏👏
N trip added to d awsmness of d update..
Waiting 4 d trip now
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Superb update
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Part- 4

Its been 20 mins since kabir and alia were sitting in front of their mom. .with uma's hands crossed against the chest, kabir nd alia looking at her with pleading expressions

Uma: oh so tum dono chahte ho ki mai tum dono ko akele shimla bhejdu ..?? Huh?
"Yes mom" came the reply
"But.. "
"Mom aap kyu tension le rhe ho . .nisha bha... " alia was cut off by kabir
"Iska matlb h ki nisha ka bi mann h.. Soo maan jaiye na. .hmare. Liye ni toh nisha ke liye hi. ."
Nd he gave an angry glare to alia to keep a control on her words..

"But alia nd kabir.. Ek pass hone ki khushi mei shimla. .i mean .. "
"MOM Plz.. Jane do na.. 2-3 dinn ki hi toh baat hai.. Nd hume voucher mile. .thats why yeh plan bna" said alia with a puppy pleading face.. .while kabir mumbled " kya drama queen hai". .. .

Uma thought for a few min. .nd then agreed..
Kabirs happiness knew no bounds while alia smirked with a wink..
"But tum dono ne nisha ki mom se baat kari ? "
"Mom. .voo. ." started kabir
"What? "
"Plz aap unse baat karlo. .u knw na vo kitni jaldi pareshan ho jati h .. Hume toh direct mna kar degi. .aap unhe mna lo na. ".. Pleaded kabir while sitting at his knees. .

" hmm.. Ok . .Nisha or tumhara itna mann h toh i will .. "Nd she kissed his forehead. .

Alia nd kabir jumped giving hi-fi to each other while uma thought something is fishy!

"Bhai" started alia while coming inside kabirs room
"Hmm bol. ." asked he while getting ready for going to nisha's house
"Im afraid ... Nishu di ki mom bohat traditional mindset ki hai.. Vo maan toh jaygi na. ."
Kabir shooks his head nd makes her sit
"Arey tu, tension matt le. .yeh mission bi successful hojayga"
"But how r u so sure? "
"I have a plan" winks kabir
"Kya? "
"Vo toh tuje udhar jaakr hi pta chalega. .bas jab mai tuje ishara karu .. Tu samjh jana " said he getting up
"But bhai" . .alia tried to stop him but he was already gone
"Pta ni bhai ke dimaag mei kya khichdi pakk ri h.. Hey bhagwan ji plz bhai ko akal dena. .vo koi gadbad na karde. .nd nisha ki mom maan jay.. Plz. ." prayed alia. .nd went downstairs

At Nisha's home
Kabir, alia nd uma were sitting in front of nisha nd her mom

"Bhai nishu dii gusse mei lag ri hai . ." whispered alia seeing nisha who was boiling wid anger making kabir gulp down his saliva
"Toh uma ji kya zaroori baat karni thi apne".. Asked nisha's mom

" vo kabir.I mean alia. .no hum yeh chahte hai ki aap nisha ko kabir nd alia ke saath shimla bhejde fr just a small break"

Anchal Looked at nisha. .Nisha gave her a silly smile.
"Lekin uma ji . .aaj tak nisha aise kabi bahar ni gy .. Or fir shayad nisha bi . .. "
"Par nisha ka bi mann hai" intrupted uma. ."isliye toh maine han kari"
Nisha was shocked now.. Her anger level raised while kabir was thinking that the matter is slipping from their hand. ..
"Nisha beta bolo . .tumhara bi mann hai? " asked her mom

"Ji.. Han . .nhi.. Jo aap kahe " replied nisha

"Dekhiye nisha ka bi mann hai toh bhejdijiye na bacho ko "..

"Lekin". .

" lekin kya aunty. .aap muje apna
beta ni maanti. .aapko mujpr trust ni hai? "Kabir started his plan of emotional blackmail while nisha clutched her head with one hand

" arey beta aisa ni hai lekin.. "

"Koi baat ni aunty . .apko mujpr ni toh alia pr toh trust hai na". .asked kabir while alia looked at him with what is he saying wala look

" beta trust ki baat ni hai . .muje bas nishu ki tension hai"

"Toh aunty hum hai na.. Use koi problm ni hogi. .kyu alia? ". .alia was looking at him with blank expression. .kabir signalled her to speak

"Han . .han aunty . .nishu dii ko koi problm ni hogi .hum hai na saath mei". .

There was a silence of 2 mins. Kabir and alia were praying to god silently while uma was looking at anchal to continue. .

Nisha's mono: hey bhagwan . .yeh kabir kya bole jaa rha h.. Alia . .Alia bi iska saath de rhi h . .khud toh daant khaega or muje bi saath mei marwaega. ...inki toh mai class lekr rahungi". .

" mm... Nisha "
"Ji mom"
" ja jakr packing karle.. Kal subah nikalna hai na". .

Kabir nd alia looked at each other wid a wid smile nd then ran nd hugged her while nisha's mind was blank . .she was nt able to believe that her mom have agreed.. But recovering from shock she bid bye to them nd went for packing..

Nisha closed the door behind with a thrash. .nd tried to took a control on her heart beats which were dancing like anything
"Iam going to shimla with kabir " she said slowly to herself making herself believe nd then screamed at highest pitch she can. ..

Their kabir's condition was no different .. "I cant wait for tmrw" he said Adoring the photo of nisha in his phne . ..

Next Morning :

Nisha's Mom: Arre arre jaldi kar Nishu ...7 baje ki bus hai...6:30 bajne vale hai...jaldi kar...


Nisha while coming downstairs: Arre aa gai mumma...kitna chillati hai aap...

Nisha's Papa: Arre tu chali jaegi toh main aur teri mumma sathme time spend karenge na...isliye ye tujhe jaldi bhagana chahti hai

Nisha's mom: suru ho gaya...subha subha tum dono ka ho gaya suru...ab chalo dekho Uma, Alia aur Kabir kabse wait kar rahe hai...chalooo


Nisha monologue: Kabir...oh god ...phir se aisi nervousness kyu ho rhi hai...shaant Nishu shaant shaant...tu aur Kabir vaha akele thode hi rahegi...Alu bhi toh hogi na...so chill chill

Nisha' mom from outside: Nishuuu


Nisha: arre aa rhi hu baba


Outside Kabir's house:

Kabir: uff ye Nisha kaha reh gai??

Alia: Oh ho bhai...aapse toh sabar hi nhi ho raha...kya baat hai...hawww vaha jake mujhe na bhool jana bhai... pata chala aap log mujhe akela hotel main chodke pura Shimla ghumne chale gaye


Kabir: Shut up Alu...subha subha bakwaas na kar

Alia: arre bhai bakwaas karne ka time thode hi hota...bakwaas toh hum kabhi bhi kar sakte hai...aur vaise bhi...


Kabir: bas bas bas maate ab chup kar...dekh Nisha...

Kabir could not complete as Nisha finally came out.


Alia: lo bhai meri bhabhi aa gai


Kabir: Aluuu...tu maar vaegu kya mujhe yaar...chup kar


Kabir's mom: Acha suno tum teeno meri baat dhyaan se... vaha jake tum log...


Alia: Mom mom mom...kal se 100 bar aap apna speech de chuki hai n I'm sure Anchaal aunty ne bhi Nishu di ko 100-200 bar speech suna dia hai so ab hum bus stop chale varna late ho jaenge...plzzz


Kabir & Nisha together: Hushhh bach gaye speech se


Everyone look at them then NIBIR,Alia & Nisha's dad started laughing while Nisha & Kabir's mom frowned at them. Then finally they left for bus stop.


At bus stop:


Nisha's dad: chalo bacho...take care have a safe journey...hume call karte rehna ok?

Nibir & Alia: okkk


Alia: acha bas ho gaya...ab aur kuch nhi bolna...pura rasta bohot kuch sun lia ...chalo bye bye bye... bhai, Nishu di...chalo utho bus main varna ye phir apna pravachan start kar denge.


Then they entered the bus. Kabir was very happy but what he saw after entering the bus...made him frustated.

Alia: Omg!!!!!!! Parth tum? Tum bhi Shimla ja rahe ho? Tum bataya toh nhi... arre ha tum toh last kuch din se college aye hi nhi...kyu nhi aye? Aur Shimla ghumne ja rahe ho toh fb pe bhi toh bata sakte the? Ek toh tum itne bzy hote ho k online bhi nhi ate...tum...


Parth: arre stop stop stop...mujhe bolne toh Alia...kabse bole ja rhi ho.


Kabir : Ha Alu itna kuch kyu puch rhi hai? Iski marzi ye nhi aya college...iski marzi ye nhi aya online...tujhe kya?

Alia: Hawww bhai ye mera frnd hai so puch lia...aap bhi na


"Ha Kabir...aise kyu bol rahe ho?" Nisha asked Kabir in low voice so that only he can hear.

Kabir: Arre Nisha ab tumhe kya batau...ye Parth na bada chipku hai...jab dekho Alu k aas pass ghumta rehta hai...aur... arre aise kyu dekh rhi ho?

Nisha : Kabir tum bhi na...vo bas frnds hai...aise ajeeb behave maat karo...samjhe?


Kabir: ha ha thik hai...

Alia: Parth toh tum akele ja rahe ho?

Parth: arre nhi akele kyu jaunga...mere bhaiyaa-bhabhi n unka beta chotu bhi hai.

Alia: ha toh kaha hai vo?

Kabir: Alu beth ja yaar...phir baate karna...Nisha tum Alu k sath betho

Alia: but bhai...

Kabir: Alu bola na Nisha k sath betho

Nisha monologue: Offo ye Kabir bhi na...mujhe uske sath bethna tha but ye toh...


Then Nisha & Alia sat together.

Kabir sat on an another sit with an old lady.


Alia: ha toh Parth tumhare bhaiyaa...

Parth: ha vo bas chadne vale hai bus main...vo bhabhi ko kuch lena tha uss shop se toh vo gai chotu ko leke...n bhaiyaa bhi peeche peeche chale gaye...
Lo aa gaye vo bhi.

Bhaiyaa- bhabhi ye hai meri college ki frnd Alia...ye hai Kabir, Alia k bhai n ... arre ha Alia ye kon hai?

Alia: arre ye vo Nishu di hai...meri neighbour vali didi...tunhe bataya toh tha


Kabir monologue: uff ye Alia...kya zarooraat hai iss Parth ko sari details dene ki


Parth: oh acha acha...aur ye hai mere Abhishekh bhaiyaa...ye Priya bhabhi...aur ye unka beta chotu


Chotu: Aree chachu...ye chotu kya hai...pehli baar kisise meri intro kara rahe ho toh Rohan bolo...
hello everyone...mera naam hai Rohan.

Priya bhabhi: ha ha bas ho gaya chalo betho ab seats pe bus chutne hi vali hai.

Then Priya & Abhishekh sat together & chotu sat with Parth.

Before the bus started Nisha's mom-dad & Kabir's mom once again met them n bid the bye...then finally their bus journey started.

Nisha & Alia was busy in their girly gossips...Chotu n Parth was busy in playing games on Parth's mobile...Parth's bhaiyaa-bhabhi were also busy in themselves...the only person there who was getting bore was Kabir...he was continuosly looking at Nisha thinking that now she will give him atleast a glance but Nisha was busy with Alia. He was getting really bore...then he also started to play games in his phone.
But the old lady who was sitting with Kabir was a bit too fat...n she was reading a novel...n she was behaving as if there was no one else in that seat beside her...Kabir was very uncomfortable on that seat so he thought to change his seat...but almost all the seats were full...only one seat was empty. So he hurriedly got up n then reached that seat n asked to the passenger... "Mmm...excuse me...main yaha beth jau? "

There was a pretty girl almost of Alia's age sitting there.
"Oh ya ya...y not...please sit." she said with a smile.

Kabir sat there n again started playing games in his phone.
But someone was fuming in anger.

Nisha monologue: Oh ho...kya baat hai...toh janab ko old ladies k sath bethna nhi pasand...kya zarooraat thi seat change karne ki...ek toh mere sath betha nhi upar se...huh...bhar main jae...mujhe kya


Alia was continuosly talking when she noticed Nisha was not listening to her talks n was glaring at someone. So she followed Nisha's gaze n saw that her bhai was sitting with a girl. She mentally cursed her bhai n started thinking about some plan. When a plan popped in her head.


"Parthhh!!" suddenly Alia screamed.
Kabir immedeately looked towards Alia.


Parth: arre kya hua? Aise chillai kyu tum?

Alia: ummm...parth vo kabse main soch rhi thi chotu k sath thoda time spend karlu toh tum ...tum ek kaam karo tum na vo bhai vale seat pe jake beth jao uss aunty k sath main chotu k sath bethti hu ...ok?

Chotu: Dekha chachu...apki frnd mujhse frndship karna chahti hai...dekha mera charm?

Parth: ha ha thik hai baba...Alia tum yaha beth jao


Then Parth sat with that old lady with whom Kabir was sitting sometime ago.

While Alia sat with Chotu n quickly sent a msg to her stupid bhai who was still sittibg with that girl.


Kabir was playibg game when he recieved Alia's msg.

"Bhai jaldi utho apne seat se n Nishu di k sath betho...vo bohot gusse main hai...kyu bethe aap uss ladki k sath?"

Kabir immediately looked at Nisha...he understood that she was very angry by looking at her face.


Kabir then got up n sat beside Nisha.

Nisha looked at Kabir then started checking her phone.

Kabir: Nisha...umm...vo aunty na pura seat leke bethi hui thi...mujhe bohot uncomfortable feel ho raha tha toh maine seet na change karli thi


"Maine tumse kuch pucha? Achanak ye sab kyu bol rahe ho?" Nisha said with a ' I'm-not-interested-face '


Kabir: Nisha sachi yaar...


"Acha? Then Parth kaise aramse betha hai vaha? Bolo bolo?" Nisha asked.

Kabir: arre vo Parth toh...
before he could complete he saw that Parth got up from his seat n sat with that girl on the another seat.
Nisha also saw this n smiled awkardly at Kabir.

Nisha monologue: bevkoof ladki...aise koi behave karta hai bhala? Dekh toh vo aunty sachi main kitni fat hai n kaise pura seat cover karke bethi hui hai...tu bhi na.

Kabir: dekha...acha vo sab chodo tum ye batao tumhe nhi laga tha na k Anchal aunty trip k lie ha bolegi?

Nisha: No...not at all... Mujhe toh laga tha mumma hum sabko daant lagaegi...but tumne toh kamal hi kar dia


"Ha tumhari mom mujhse kuch zaida he impressed hai main kya karu...ladkiyoon ki mom ladko se impressed ho jae toh unhe manana mushkil nhi hota u know" Kabir said with a wink while Nisha blushed.

They were busy in their own world. Alia was dancing in her mind. Like this 3 hours passed n at 10am the bus stopped at a dhaba for breakfast. Everyone had their breakfast n got freshen up. Then again everyone got up. But now Chotu wanted to sit with Nisha as at dhaba he made frndship with Nisha also. Alia sat with Parth's bhabhi as they were also busy in some latest bollywood gossip. Parth's bhaiyaa sat with that girl while reading news paper. N last but not the list Kabir n Parth sat together.

Parth was clicking selfies on his phone.

Kabir monologue: I cant believe this that I'm sitting with Parth...oh god why I hate him so much...aur ye tabse ladkiyoon k tarha selfies q click kar raha hai? Urgghhh...pata nhi kabtak iske sath bethna padega

Parth: arre Kabir...come na tum bhi selfie click karo na mere sath

"No, I'm not interested" Kabir said with a fake smile.

Parth: arre but kyu? Aap ao na...

saying this Parth started clicking selfies with Kabir while Kabir made weird weird faces.


While checking the pics he stsrted laughing.

"Kya hua? Has kyu rahe ho aise?" Kabir asked frustated.

Parth: Kabir koi bhi hasega yaar...kaise faces banaya hai tumne? Dekho zara...
again he started laughing.


Chotu: arre chachu he bhi toh dikhao na akhir inhone aise bhi kya faces banaye k aap hase ja rahe ho

" ha ha dekh chotu" before Kabir could say something Parth gave the mobile to chotu n now Nisha & chotu also started laughing. After that Alia also took the phone n staryed laughing seeing those pics.
Now Kabir was fuming in anger n glaring at Parth.
Parth saw this n felt a bit scared. Then he got up from his seat n said Chotu to seat with Kabir n he himself sat beside Nisha. But Parth did not know that he had called his bad luck on his own.


Kabir monologue: wah kya baat hai...kya kya kya socha tha aur yaha kya kya kya ho raha hai? Main pagal na ho jau aaj...uurrgghhh...


Alia monologue: Offo ek toh bhai Parth ko pasand karte nhi hai...pata nhi kyu...upar se ye Parth Nishu di k sath beth gaya...uff...again mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.
Then she got up n went to Kabir's seat.

Alia: Umm chotu mujhe bhai k sath bethna hai...tum apni mumma k sath betho ab jao

Chotu: ok ...jake thoda mumma ko tang karta hu

"Hawww...aisa nhi bolte " Alia said while laughing n then sat beside Kabir after Chotu went from there.

"Bhai hum 4:30 tak pohoch jaenge na Shimla?" Alia tried to divert Kabir's mind.

"Mujhse kyu puch rhi hai? Jake Parth se puch." Kabir said with a frustated face.

Alia: Bhai ek baat batao...apko Parth se elergy kyu hai? Itna acha toh hai vo.


Kabir: Alu main isd bus se kud jaunga agar tune uss Parth ki gun gana start kia toh... badi ai Parth ki side lene wali...Alu sach sach bol...ye Parth tera bf hai kya?


Alia with a shocked expression said " Bhai aap na pura pagal ho chuke ho...kuch bhi bolte rehte ho...agar Parth mera bf hota toh sabse pehle aapko hi batati i swear...

Kabir: ha ha thik hai thik hai...ab iss Parth ko hata Nisha k seat se...mujhe Nisha k sath bethna hai yaar


Alia: ha toh koi baat nhi aap Nishu di k sath uss seat pe beth jao...Parth mere sath yaha beth jaega


"Nooo" Kabir screamed loudly. Everyone in the bus looked at him while he murmured a sorry.
Alia glared at him n then got up from her seat n said Nisha to sit with Kabir as she wanted to talk to Parth.
Nisha said ok n then sat beside Kabir.

Nisha: Kabir tumhara mood aisa ajeeb sa kyu hai aaj? Yaar dont tell me bcoz of Parth.

Kabir: Nisha...tum nhi samjhogi meri feeling... ye Parth ko Alia sath dekhna mujhe kyu nhi pasand I dunno...tum...tum please kuch aur baat karke mera mind divert karo


Nisha monologue: Awww ye kitna cute lag raha hai...budhu raam...Alia se kuch zaida pyar karta hai isliye ye sab sochta hai...kitnaaa caring hai ye...so cute he is.


Kabir: Nisha...Nishaaa...kaha kho gai tum?

Nisha: umm...umm kuch nhi...vo main kya keh rhi thi...

Like this they started talking again. N with this little little things time flew away. It was 4:30...in just 10-15 mins they will finally reach. Everyone was getting ready. Kabir was happy that finally Parth se peecha chutega. Kabir even asked them that in which hotel Parth n his family is going to stay...n to Kabir's luck Parth's hotel was not the same one in which they r going to stay.
When they finally reached. Nisha & Alia kissed chotu on his cheek bidding him bye...they hugged Priya bhabhi also...n bid bye to Abhishek bhaiyaa n Parth. Kabir also bid bye to a of them. Then Kabir,Nisha & Alia got on a taxi to reach their hotel.

Kabir & Nisha was feeling butterflies in their stomach while Alia was thinking about many plans for her bhai n bhabhi in her evil mind.

The Shimla trip is surely going to be an exciting one.
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kya seats rotation ho raha tha😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆v
so funny yaar loved it😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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update soonish😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally
One of d most awaited updates..
Kabse I was waiting
Bt wait was worth..
Seat connection was amzngly written..
Full bus trip was beautiful..
Nw plz post jldi n Nt dis late plz

N thanx roops 4 d link
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow what a lovely update 👏
From starting to end it was awesome 👍🏼
Dono ke dono Bhai bhen ek no. Ke dramebaaz hai 😆
Alia drama to make nibir together was too good 😆😆
Please next time update soon 😊
Mujhe toh laga tha ye story update hoga hi nhi..😭 par update hua I am very happy 😃 please next time update soon 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
What a comeback so if you had came back then plz complete your stories
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello
Very nice story👏
Great going👍🏼

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