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A/n: hey guys...iam not able to finish it in three shots.. So iam converting into SS..!

Part - 3 {a}

It was exactly one month of Nisha helping Alia in her studies nd it was the day of Alia's Economics exam. Alia was very tensed. She was fully prepared for the exam but still she was feeling nervous.

"Alu breakfast kia k nhi tune?? Chal chal late ho jaega varna tere exam k lie." Kabir said while coming downstairs.
But as soon as he went towards breakfast table he saw that his sweet sissy was lost in her thoughts, looking hell nervous.

"Uff iye ladki bhi na..." Kabir frowned nd thought in his mind.

"Alu...Alu..." Kabir called Alia while shaking her.

"Huh...bhai kya hua? Chalo chalo late ho raha hai." Alia said in hyper tone nd stood up.

But Kabir again made her sit back.
"Chup chap beth pehle yaha pe...itni nervous hogi toh exam main kya likhegi?? Meri Alu kabse aisi ho gai bhala??" Kabir asked politely.

"Bhai mujhe tension ho raha hai." Alia said while pouting.

"Arrey meri student hoke tujhe tension kaise ho sakti hai??" Kabir & Alia turned towards the main door nd saw Nisha standing there with her hands on her hip.

"Hush...thank god Nisha u r here...ab apni student ko khud sambhalo. Mera dimaag kharab karke rakh dia." Kabir said dramatically.

"Hawww bhai...maine apka dimaag kharab kar dia?? Aur Nishu di aap aise threatening looks q de rahi hai mujhe??"

"Toh aur kya karu...itni acho preparation k bawajud koi tention karta hai bhala...budhu kahinki." Nisha came towards Alia n hit her head lightly.

"Ha ha bas thik hai...ho gaya ab dono ka lecture?? Ab chalo mujhe college chodne...n ha Nishu di aaj aap bhi chalo, bhai hum aaj aapki car main chalte hai." Alia said in her bossy tone, the real Alia was back.

"Lekin Alia..." Nisha started to say but Kabir cut her.
"Chalo na Nisha,please." Kabir said while looking in her eyes.

Nisha nodded her head n got lost in his eyes.

But suddenly their trance broke by Alia.

"Ahemmm...Aheemmm...dekhiye aap dono ko disturb karne ka iraada toh mera bilkul bhi nhi tha but kya karu exam hai na...risk nhi le sakti. Aap dono ek kaam karna, mujhe college main drop karne k baad ye sab car main continue kar lena...ok??" Alia said in a playfull manner.

"Umm...vo main...car...car main hu Alu tu mom ko bye bolke aa ja." Kabir said hurriedly n left.

Then after bidding bye to her mom, Alia went out with Nisha nd then Nibir dropped Alia to her college, wished her goodluck, then they sat in the car nd Kabir started driving towards home.
There was an awkward silence between them. They both were very eager to talk to each other but both were wondering that how to start a conversation.

"Umm...thanx Nisha." Kabir finally broke the silence.

"Thanx?? But y??" Nisha asked confused.

"Dekho 2 reasons hai.
No.1 ye k tumne Alu ko itne ache se padaya.
No.2 ye k tumne aaj subha Alu ka nervousness kaam karne main meri madat ki...uska mind divert karke." said Kabir with a smile.

"Arrey kya Kabir tum bhi na...aunty jab dekho thanx thanx bolti rehti hai...Alia har vakt thanx bolti rehti hai...n ab tum bhi?? Tum sab na bohot bohot bohot ache ho. Aur..." Nisha continued talking while Kabir was smiling while listenibg to her talks. It was the first time he was watching Nisha talking so much...n the beautiful smile on her lips was the best sight for him.
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"Bhai...bhai...jaldi se niche ao...uff ye Nishu di kaha reh gai...Mom aap toh aa jao." Alia was shouting in the top of her voice.

"Alia beta kya hua?? Kabir abhi tak office se vapis nhi aya...bas ata hi hoga. Tum batao...aaj toh tumhara result tha na...jaldi batao kya hua." said Uma in excitement.

"Offo mom...maine bhai ko clearly bola tha k aaj jaldi aa jae. Aur ye Nishu di kaha..." Alia could not complete her words as Nisha came in nd asked Alia very nervously. "Alia jaldi apne marks batao...kaisa aya result?? Arrey chup q ho?? Bolo na..."

"No no no...pehle bhai ko ane do phir. Lo aa gaye mr.late lateef." said Alia angrily as she saw Kabir entering the house.

"Sorry sorry Alu...vo last minute pe Adil ne bola k kuch papers pe signature karne hai so late ho gaya. Tu vo sab chod ye bata k result..." Nisha cut kabir in between,
"Ha Alia bol na jaldi k..." now Uma cut Nisha,
"K reasult kya aya."

Nisha,Kabir & Uma...everyone were tensed.

Alia took a deep breath n said, "Mere 94% marks aye hai. Can u all believe that?? I'm sooo happy."Alia twirled in happiness nd hugged her mom nd then Nisha.

Nisha & Alia both were hugging each other n jumping like kids. Uma was also very very happy.

Kabir smiled widely weeing all the three
ladies so happy.


"Ruko main abhi chocolates leke ati hu tumlogo k lie." Uma sail nd left.

"Nishu di u r the bestest." Alia said nd again hugged her.

"Oh hello tabse delh raha hu sabko hug kar rahi hai...Nisha ko toh bar bar hug kar rahi hai...mujhe toh bhul hi gai. Hey bhagvaan ye din dekhna baki tha k meri behen mujhe bhul hi gai." Kabir said in a very dramatic way.


"Awww mere pyare bhai... jealous q ho rahe ho?? Ab iski adaat daal lo...jab meri bhabhi ayegi na tab bhi aisa hi hoga." Alia winked her eyes at Kabir as she knew very well thay Kabir understood her point very well.

But on the other hand...unknown to herself,Nisha felt bad hearing this.
Someone being Kabir's wife, Alia calling that person babhi, Uma aunty luving her just like her daughter...all these thoughts passed through Nisha's mind nd she was feeling so miserable.

Alia noticed Nisha's expression nd then looked at Kabir who was glaring at her, when her mom came there with chocolates.

"Ye lo chocolates khao." said Uma nd then Alia fed everyone.

"Acha ab suno,sono,sono...bhai mere frnds ne next sunday treat manga hai...vo jo new cafe open hua hai na voha pe...so aap hume vaha leke jaa rahe ho." Alia turned towards Nisha..."Nd teacher ji...aapko bhi ana hai...infact aap toh hanari spcl guest hongi. So samajh gaye aap dono sab??" Alia said all this in an excited-happy-bossy tone.

"What?? Alu yaar tere frnds q?? Tujhe aur Nisha ko treat de deta na...yaar teri frnds bohot irritating hai." Kabir said making faces.

"Kyu?? Akhir Alia k frnd aisa kya karte hai??" Nisha asked with curisity.


"Arrey Nishu di pucho maat...meri sari frnds toh pagal hai bhai k peeche. Infact kabhi kabhi toh mujhe shaq hota hai k unhone mujhse frndship hi ki hai taki... u know... taki vo bhai..." Kabir cut Alia in between,
"Alu...kya bol rahi hai tu?? Chup ho ja." Kabir shouted when he saw Nisha fuming in anger while listening to Alia's blabbering.

"Main jhooth thodi bol rahi hu bhai?? Meri sari frnds na mera dimaag kharab kar deti hai hai apka number mang mangke. Vo Hena hai na...arrey vo toh usdin..." Alia had to stop in middle as Kabir closed her mouth with his hands.

"Nisha tum na iski baato pe dhyaan maat do...kuch bhi bol rahi hai." Kabir said with a embarrassing smile.

"But Kabir tumne hi toh bola k Alia k frnds irritating hai...toh iska matlaab vo sach bol rahi hai. Leave her Kabir...let her continue." Nisha pulled Kabir n told Alia to continue.

"Nishu di ab main kuch nhi bolungi, sunday ko na aap apni ankho se dekh lena k meri frnds kitni deewaani hai mere handsome bhai k peeche." Alia was enjoying all this, she expected earlier that Nisha will react, but much to her amusement...Nisha reacted more angrily than what she expected.

"Ok then...I'm very eager to meet ur frnds." Nisha said while glancing at Kabir.
Nisha was obvio very confused that y was she feeling angry...first that bhabhi thing n now Alia's frnds. But still she could not control her anger.

"Ha ha Nishu di,q nhi...I'm also very excited for Sunday." said Alia.
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Finally Sunday came. Kabir was feeling frustated as he had to spent time with Alia's frnds who were really a headace for him.
"Usdin Alu k frnds k bare main sunke Nisha gussa ho rahi thi...n aaj jab vo chipku ladkiya Nisha k samne mere sath...one sec, main Nisha k reaction k bare main q soch raha hu...n Nisha usdin gussa q ho rahi thi?? Ye baat toh mujhe samajh hi nhi aya. Uurrgghh!! God mujhe pagal banana chahte ho kya aap??" Kabir was thinking all this in his mind when Alia came there.

"Bhaiii." Alia exclaimed n jumped on the sofa beside Kabir.

"Alu aise q behave kar rahi hai jaise 10 saal baad mil rahi hai mujhse??" Kabir asked irritatingly.

"Awww bhai apko pata hai jab aap irritate hote ho kitneee cute lagte ho??" Alia pulled Kabir's cheek.

"Aluuu kya kar rahi hai yaar?? Ek toh tere vo frnds k chakkar main pareshan hu main. Pata nhi Nisha unki harkaate dekhke kya sochegi." Kabir said in tension.

"Oye hoye...kya baat hai bhai...Nishu di ki bari tension hai aapko...behave toh aise kar rahe ho jaise k vo apki gf ho...bhai sach sach batao...kahi apka aur Nishu di ka secret affair toh nhi chal raha?? Bolo bolo...chup kyu ho??" Alia asked in extreme excitement.

"Alu u know what...u r impossible. Tujhse baat karna hi bekaar hai." Kabir sighed.

"Arrey but..." but before Alia can continue the door bell rang.
"Le aa gai teri frnds...sun main upar ja raha hu...bye." Kabir said hurriedly nd ran upstairs.

"Aaj to maza aa jaega." Alia thought nd then went to open the door.
As Alia opened the door...her 5 frnds came inside.

"Lo aa gai sab make up ki dukaan banke...ye log bhi na." Alia thought n mentally laughed.

They all went to the sofa nd sat their.

" Umm,Alia hum cafe kab jaenge?? N ur bro is coming with us ryt??" asked Sia,one of Alia's frnds.

"Ha Alia...Kabir is coming with us ryt?? Vaise bhi unhe toh ana hi hai...coz treat bo denge ryt??" now this time Hena asked.

"Btw where is Kabir?? Alia he is at home na??" asked Kavya looking here n there as if she was finding Kabir.

"Arrey bolna Alia...chup q hai tu??" asked Sanam.

"Main bolungi tab na jab tumlog mujhe kuch bolne doge?? Eksath itne sare sawal?? Mujhe hi-hello toh boldo atleast...phir mere bhai ki tension lena." Alia said with 'oh-god-these-girls' look.
"Bhai upar hai...bas ate hi honge...nd Nishu di aajae then hum cafe chalenge." Alia added.

"Nisha means ur neighbour ryt??" asked Hena.

"Yup...mere ache marks ka credit unhe hi toh jata hai." Alia said while smiling.

They were chit-chatting with each other when Sanam noticed that Kabir is coming downstairs bzy in his phone.

"Alia main paani peeke ati hu." said Sanam nd got up.

"Arrey main lati hu na." said Alia but Sanam already started to go towards dining area nd as soon as Kabir came downstairs Sanam purposely clashed with Kabir . She was just going to fall down when Kabir held her in his arms.
But seems like it was Kabir's bad day coz at the same time Nisha came their nd seeing them in this position she was shocked but then this was replaced by anger

Alia nd her frnds also saw this nd Alia was just going towards Kabir when she saw Nisha standing there fuming in anger.

"Lets see Nishu di kya karti hai nd bhai Nishu di ko dekhke kaise behave karte hai...its time to have some fun." Alia thought naughtily.

On the other hand Kabir was startled that what just happened. N he was trying to make Sanam stand on her feets when his gaze fell on Nisha.
Kabir was cursing his fate. He was feeling like jumping from a mountain. He never ever wanted Nisha to see him like this. The reasons were still unknown to him nd this confusion made him drop sanam unintentionally due to which sanam screamed in pain

Kabirs trance got broken nd he looked at sanam , " oh iam so sorry"..he tried making sanam stand but nisha couldnt take it anymore nd stormed towards them , helping sanam stand straight..

Sanam was galring at Nisha for ruining her moment. Where as Alia was enjoying all this nd trying hard to control her laughter.

"R u ok??" Nisha asked Sanam in stern tone. But Sanam did not replied her nd turned towards Kabir nd said, "oh Kabir its ok but still thank u so much too for helping, u r such a gentlemen."

Kabir looked at Nisha who was glaring at him but he pleaded her through his eyes to save him with a puppy face.
Nisha's all anger flew away seeing Kabir's cute face nd she thought "Poor Kabir...uski kya galti hai...Kabir was ryt about Alia's frnds...kuch karna padega."

"Umm Alia main kya soch rahi thi...main Kabir k sath uski bike main cafe chali jati hu...tum apne frnds k sath unki car main aa jao. Ok??" Nisha turned towards Alia n asked who was in cloud nine hearing this nd a new plan came in Alia's mind.

"Ha Nishu di aap jao bhai sath...hum sab Kavya k car main aa jaenge. What say girls??" Alia asked.

All the girls nodded their heads but in their mind they were cursing Nisha.

"Ok then chalo Kabir chalte hai." said Nisha n held Kabirs hand nd left from there.

"Yaaay...bhai nd Nishu di eksath cafe main...its like their first date...ab main thodi kisiko unko disturb karne dungi...in sabko kisi bahane se yaha rok leti hu." Alia thought in her mind.

Part 3{b}



Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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PART - 3 {B}

Reaching outside the house. .nibir looked at each other.. .kabir made a puppy+irritated face while nisha gave him a stern look.. .after a pause of 10 seconds they broke into fits of laughter with kabir clutching his head nd nisha holding her stomach . .kabir took the support of bike nd nisha looked upwards to control herself. .. "Kabir tum sahi the.. Alia ki frnds are antique piece". ." haa but thanku yrr agar tum help na karti toh vo sanam tohh. . " nd he gulped while nisha laughed more "acha chal ab chalte h . .agar bahar bi aagy tab toh tum gye" said nisha. Hearing this Kabir hurriedly started the bike while nisha sat keeping her hands on his shoulder. .making kabir smile. He adjusted the mirror in such a way that he could see her face which was glowing with some pink hues on her cheeks. .

They reached shineout cafe laughing ng giggling on the whole way..
The waiter guides their way to their reserved table..it was at the corner with a rose in the centre nd a perfect view outside the window
"Excuse me , its a table for two . .but we reserved the table for 6" kabir asked in confusion
"Yes sir but few mins ago we got a call that now they want a table for two"
"What? " asked nisha
At the same time kabirs phne beeped. .it was alias msg
"Hey bhai , meri frnds water park jana chahti h so mai unko vaha lekr jaa rhi hu . .but dnt worry i have made arrangements fr u nd nishu di after all its ur first date😉! ! All the best bhai , koi gadbad matt karna plz.. "
Ur sweet sis alia😳
"Kya msg h kabir" nisha asked seeing kabirs face which was turning red as he read the msg
"Ha ha. Nhi kuch ni vo alia nd frnds are not coming they are going to some water park"he fumbled
" oh . .then lets go"
"Nhi. .nhi vo. .alia keh rhi h ki mai tumhe treat dedu uski taraf se soo hum lunch karke chalte h" he didnt knew why he said this but he badly wanted to spend some time with her
"But kabir. ."
"But -vut kuch ni plz, Alia muje maar dalegi agar use pta chala ki mai tumhe aise hi ghar le gya"nd he made a puppy face
Nisha giggles at this
" hmm okay . .cute act ki dukaan " .she said nd moved towards the table
Kabir smiled too nd they both settles themselves on the opposite seats. .

Nisha starts fideging with her fingers while kabir was having a weird smile plastered on his face nd was checking the menu

Nisha's mono: why am i getting nervous . .ek lunch hi toh hai . .

Kabirs mono: kabir kyu paglo ki tarah muskura rha h. .kya soch rhi hogi vo tere baare mei . ..

Nibir at the same time : food order kare. .they giggled nd called the waiter. ..
Nibir : one cold coffee with sandwitches nd extra cheese. ..

Nibir mono: not again!
they looked at each other nd passed a silly smile

waiter while writing the order: mam nd sir aaj couples ke liye special lucky draw h so after food plz do come in that section. .. Nd he pointed towards the section. ..

Nibir looked at each other shocked nd as they were going to explain the waiter. .he went. ..

Both looked embaressed but from inside .. Being called a couple. .made them blush

Nisha 's mono : what the! Yeh ho kya rha h .. Kyu itna khush ho rhi hu main..

Kabirs mono: yeh kya ho rha hai. .pehle hi alia ne iss lunch ko date naam dekar muje nervous kar diya upar se baat baat pr co incidence.. .nd now couple.. .nd why the hell iam blushing
Kabir you are a gone case!
they both sighed nd silence prevailed b/w them ...

While waiting for the order nisha looked outside the window. .the couple thing made an awkard wall b/w them . .nishas sight caught a couple who was walking on the street hand in hand.. Nisha smiled nd she dnt knw why but she started imagining kabir nd her in them .. She was like day dreaming... .but as soon as the couple entered the cafe. .nd she moved her gaze dreamily . .she saw kabir engaged in his phne.. Her trance got broken nd she mentally slapped herself . .

The couple settled themselves on the seat opposite to them.. .

Nisha excused herself nd went to washroom. .. While kabirs sight tooo caught the couple who was feeding each other wid love. .he too smiled. .nd now it was the time fir kabir to start daydreaming just like nisha...

His trance got broken when nisha came their.. He felt embaressed on himself. ..while nisha got confused on his expressions

The waiter came their wid their food nd they started eating but suddenly they heard a scream .
They looked in the direction of the sound nd found the same couple
The guy was on his knees wid a ring while the girl was shocked to hell with her hands covering her mouth. ..
Nibirs face lighted with a smile nd their day dreaming started again
With kabir saying "will u marry me" nd nisha forwading her hand nodding her head.. He slided the ring nd they hugged.. .

The whole cafe echoed with claps.. ..while nibir looked at each other. .now they werent embaressed. .they were blushing nd they knew why. .. Their was no confusion anymore . .

Nibirs mono: i got it why everything is so different from the moment we met, why his/her touch sent shivers in my body, why everything related to him/her affect me.. . watever iam feeling.. Its something which i never felt with someone.. Its not just a mere attatchment ..the relationship b/w us is not just of friendship . ..nd if it is called being in love. .then yes ... Yes I love him/her. ..

They were still drowned in each others eyes which were sparkling wid love.. They shared mutual feelings .. But as one confusion cleared another one arised as they were still unaware wat the other one is feeling.. .
Their heart beats got increased on a single thought of it. .some were positive which made glow wid different shades of love.. But still at a corner of mind, negative thoughts arised. .which made their heart thump like a drum ..

They finished their lunch while stealing glances of each other nd turning crimson on the discovery of a new feeling. .. .after paying the bill as they headed towards the exit , they got stopped by the waiter who asked them to try the lucky draw. ..
Kabir: nisha shall we try.. I mean its just a lucky draw..
Nisha: ya sure why not.. Nd she passed a smile...
Nibir mono : may this prove lucky fr us ... Shayad koi hint mil jaay

They were asked to pick a slip...
Kabir: nisha u pick
Nisha: no kabir u go ahead
Kabir: nhi nisha. .just pick one. .slip hi toh uthani h
Nisha: han toh tum bi toh utha sakte ho
Kabir : tum meri koi baat kyu ni maanti
Nisha: jaise tum toh meri har baat par han kehte ho
Kabir : har cheez par ladai karni zaroori h
Nisha : shuru kisne kiya. .
Kabir throws his hands in air signalling he gave up
Waiter: sir. .har couple mei aise jhagde hote rehte h . .or haar humesha ladka hi maanta h . .

Nibir flushed at this statement nd looked everywhere except each other..

kabir picked a slip ..
The waiter opened it nd screamed
"Congractulations".. ." u are the lucky couple. .nd won a trip to shimla for 3 days 2nights"
Nibir stood their like a statue nd were trying to register wat they just heard while the cafe broke into claps nd hooting

To their home it was a silent ride as a lot happened today . .from realisation to winning the lucky draw but above that wat will they tell abt it at home

Getting off the bike . .
"Kabir iss trip ke bare mei ghar pr kya kehna hai . .I mean. ."
"Ya nisha i understand... They will never allow this thing. .or bolenge kya ki humne couple lucky draw mei participate kiya hai"
"No kabir not at all . .aisa karte h abi hum kuch show hi ni karte iske baare mei ... "
"But iss voucher ka kya karu" be said showing it to her
"Ise tum apne paas rakho we will see to it wat to do"
" ok then. .bbye"
"Ya bye nd thnks fr the lunch.. Alia se kehna i will meet her tmrw"
"Okay"
Nd they retired fr their home

Before stepping inside kabir carefully folded that voucher nd kept it in his pocket
He went inside whistling nd playing with the bike keys in order to show himself normal as he cant hide anything from alia nd she was sitting on the sofa reading magazine

Avoiding any eye contact with her he moved towards
his room but alia was alia. .she stopped him
"Bhai u came. .". .she literally jumped out of sofa nd ran towards him
" so bhai hw was the date "*wink*..
"Wat. Wat date. .it was just a lunch . .plz stop calling it a date alu. .nd let me go to the room . .im hell tired becz of traffic"
As he was climb the stairs alia again stopped him as she sensed smthng is wrong
"Bhai stop". .kabir closed his eyes. .nd turned
" what?"
"Kya chupa rahe ho aap mujse.. Or aapke gaal tomato kyu bane hue h? "Nd she raised her eyebrows..

"Kuch ni alu.. Mai tujse kyu kuch chupaunga afterall u r my sweet lil sis. . .ab plz mai jaun" he pleaded..alia nodded with a thought to do her investigation later. .but when kabir turned she saw some paper in his pocket.. She tiptoed towards him nd snatched the paper
Kabir who sighed as her investigation ended turned with a shock.. Their Alia was reading the voucher with wide eyes nd a grin

Kabir cursed his fate nd snatched it from her " kya kar rhi hai alu?."
"Bhaiii... Apne or Nishu di ne couple lucky draw mei participate kiya omg! !! " she almost screamed...due to which kabir had to shut her mouth with his hand "pagal hai kya. . dheere bol". .he whispered in her ears nd draged her from their to his room

Kabir told her why they participated nd how they are confused abt what to do with the shimla trip . .
Alia got engrossed in her deep thoughts for an idea while kabir looked at her patiently
" bhai . .aap yeh btao do u want to go with nishu di on this trip ? ". .she asked in a teasing tone
" mm. .han ..i mean nahi . but ya. "He got confused wat to ans. .. He badly wanted to go but he cant say that directly
" oho bhai.. Dnt confuse me han ya nah". ..
"Han "... He said nd got up
" wah kya baat h. ..! Bhai u sure u dnt want to share something? "She asked making him sit nd facing him
" noo"
"Sure? "
Kabir started playing with his fingers ... Alia holded his hand nd assured him through her eyes

Thats when he smiled nd told her abt his feelings for nisha with a promisse to not to tell anyone

"Husshh.. Thnkgod bhai apko finally realise hogya". .

" han but iss shimla trip ka kya karu .. Mai sach mei jana chahta hun uske saath"

"Mmm mere paas h ek idea. .mai bi aap logo ke saath chalti hu tab toh mom ya uncle aunty ko prob ni hogi nd aapki icha bi puri ho jaygi wat say? "
Kabir looked at her with not so sure looks
"Are dnt worry i wont disurb u two" kabir blushed at this
"Oho blushing nd all han" she teased him . .."acha ab jaa muje rest karne de. ."he said to hide his smile
"Han han jaa rhi hu " she got up but then reaching the door she said" bhai lekin plz propose karne mei time mat lagana. .i dnt want much delay in making her my bhabhi .. "*wink*. .. Kabir looked at her with wide eyes nd acted as if he going to beat her . .she ran from their giggling
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Res

Finally unres🤣

Read part 3A & 3B together😉

Part 3A:

Haaye I just loved the bonding of Nibir and Alia😳

The way they made Alia stress freend Alia's teasing session was too gud ..! 🤣

Kabir stopping her from telling abt frnds🤣

Sanams cheap trick😡

But Kabir nd Nisha's reactions were hillarious🤣

Part 3B:

Awww the date

Finally NIBIR realised😳

Shimla trip☺️...I'm excited😉

Last but not the list...Luved the Alu-Kabir scene😃

Continue soon🤣🤣
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Superb update 👏👏
Alia got 94% offo ...nisha n alia rocked
Alia's friends 🤣 bechara kabir😆🤣
Nisha is fuming with anger 😆😆
Nisha n kabir on bike to cafe ...first date ..aww😳
Awesomely written
Continue soon pls pls
Loving it😃😊

Thnx for pm
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Superb update 👏
Nisha j 😆
Aliya is very smart I like her wohi ye dono idiots ki naiya paar laga sakti hai 😎 😉
Waiting for nibir first date
Continue soon..!!
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MINDBLOWING..!!!
em lyk smiling soo wide.. d update was way too amazng..
alia ka xam n dn result..!!
n Nisha Alia ka bond.. adorable..! !
n yh dis z i thnk lyk my frst tym wen em in soo much luv wid d
characters other dn NiBir in d story..
Alia z awsm..
finally NiBir ka bike ride hoga n date em sure alia arrange kr hi degi..
tooo good..
n ty 4 nt ending it in 3 shots.. u mst continue
waiting 4 d nxt badly..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
superb
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
its lovely cute updtae😊superb tanya👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
LOVED TOTALLY.. I WAS REALLY WAITING FOR IT
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Posted: 9 years ago
mind blowing update..
poor kabir...nisha in angry mod...
alia is k lyk her bro...
alia- u rock girl!!! kya idea unki first date fix
krne ka
lovelyyy

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